Question about my flash

[TormentedAngel23]

Do you think if i added some sound effects to this it could pass in the portal?
http://www.ngup.net/view.php?file=Blob%2 0Fightn I worked on it preety hard.

[Matt-Porter]

Honestly no, but that's not to say I cant see that you put some work into it. Don't let it get you down though, just keep messing around with stuff like that and you'll get better, I can already see that your not a complete beginner with it just from that small piece, but really work on art, backgrounds and maybe upgrade to a longer length movie. Keep working at it.

[TormentedAngel23]

any other comments?

[LilFugitive]

Try to add some more effects, like a flash when somebody hits and zoom in on the one person, and change from camera angle every time. So sorry, it's not portal-proof

[Protoshadow]

it probs not get past the portal it you change it into people (any might do) make it long keep the ground on rather than just drawin it on every time they move on.

[RobbieSkater]

Sheesh, even for a blob fight that sempt extreemly poor and stiff. The characters had no moation. Start something newer and better.

[CrispyZero]

same goes, i think that the blobs should have more detail in them

[TormentedAngel23]

well it was just a simple test of animation i was going to add details but i wanted to know is the animation like good enough for portal and if i add more and details and sounds will it pass sense you guys say i need details..

[UnknownFury]

I think its quite good for a begginers movie. Keep working on it, the art in particular. Better than alot of the crap that gets submitted 'cause you put effort into it. Keep practicing :)

[TormentedAngel23]

Wow thanks. But i have a question, I am going to add special effects but how could i add like detail to the characters if all they were ment to be was just blob.. ?

[TormentedAngel23]

bump.

[BlackmarketKraig]

At 9/29/07 05:46 PM, TormentedAngel23 wrote: Wow thanks. But i have a question, I am going to add special effects but how could i add like detail to the characters if all they were ment to be was just blob.. ?

Blobs should be animated frame by frame, not tweening, they look like jellybeans and they just smash into each other and roll around... not interesting. Make the blobs more dynamic, give them gelatinous movement, blobs should look like gooey sticky things, not hard things.

Watch some Mr. Coo movies.

[TormentedAngel23]

i dont tween my movies i dont know how and thasnks

[TormentedAngel23]

Bump, How can i add detial to my characters!?

[TormentedAngel23]

bimp

[sandypaw]

At 9/30/07 01:58 PM, TormentedAngel23 wrote: bimp

Sorry I dont speak chinese

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You should draw a new blob in each frame.

Frame by frame