i think im...

[CyberStrike]

improving what do you think? it is small i know but that's how a drew it i used 4 layers comments on how to improve it and any tips on how to make the grass look better =]

[Doberman]

Its great, half my work isnt uploaded due to shitty scanner, and crappy webcam, i dont think anything on your drawing needs done at all, reminds me of someone elses work, not sure who`s though....

[Lazyfeet]

I like it, sure it could do with improvement but it's alright. But also as I've said before you've fallen into that style of drawing that I know about 10 or more people that draw like that. Try and go for something realistic and don't get too comfortable with a style that someone will look at and yawn.

[Ismael92]

Mmm... not bad, i think it could be used in a children's game.

[test-object]

The background is too bright... where's the guy?

[Dookiemaister]

well you got the shade right....
other than that its not that great.
:keep practicing though

[Fatchaos]

Shading on the guy is ok, but you forgot to add the shadow of the guy...

Make the grass multi-colored, use 3 different colors, try that.

[BlackmarketKraig]

Half the people here draw like that with varying degrees of quality. It is the scourge of the art forum. Sometimes this place is about as creative as an accountant's office.

Find your own style before you get too deep into that groove, all the people who draw like that will envy you. Make your work scream independence, make everyone know that CyberStrike was here.

Or go on being an anonymous copycat. Up tp you. =]

[CyberStrike]

ah wow thanks for all the great comments guys and a mod =D thanks

i will try that 3 colour grass thing =] thanks

yeah im trying to use a style that is my own but i cant find one that im comfertable using
:and i like this style of drawing
but i will try harder to get me own style
thanks again guys =]

[Raguel]

At 9/6/07 11:39 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Up tp you. =]

I agree!

Up toilet paper you =]

I do agree with what he said though =)

[CyberStrike]

:update!

i have given him a shadow changed his eye's nd mouth but once i zoomed out i couldent really see his mouth propperly but owell
:deal with it!
so here he is =3

[wiid]

It's an overused style and only a few people can actually make it half decent, which you cannot. Try using your own style instead of ripping that one. It's boring as fuck.

[gabynilico]

the dinozaurator!
GRAAAfhhhF!
im wonna eat all kentucky fried chicken!

[crazerfish50]

At 9/7/07 05:02 PM, gabynilico wrote: the dinozaurator!
GRAAAfhhhF!
im wonna eat all kentucky fried chicken!

..so..why would you spam his thread with that crap? huh? huh? HUH?

[EvilLego]

At 9/7/07 05:03 PM, crazerfish50 wrote:

At 9/7/07 05:02 PM, gabynilico wrote: the dinozaurator!
GRAAAfhhhF!
im wonna eat all kentucky fried chicken!

..so..why would you spam his thread with that crap? huh? huh? HUH?

I guess some people are just idiots crazerfish.

but as for your picture cyber i like it! if anything maybe your character could use a little personality? like hair or some interesting clothes?

[CyberStrike]

ok yeah thanks i will work on that not sure about hair though =/