The Enchanted Cave 2
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So, I started working on this comic today (took 2 hours or something), and would like to know what do you think of it. Is it even remotely funny? Anyways, this is just crappy line-art/sketch, I'll start coloring maybe tomorrow, or at the weekend.
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reminds me of that one webcomic... something about a war, postapocaliptic society.
reds, blues, yellos..
except in a more contemporary war.
KEEP GOING!
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At 9/4/07 12:59 PM, Winned wrote: Pretty good looking, could use some color. But it's not really that funny.
This is just a WIP, I'll color it later when I have time. And I'm not too good at writing, and just came out with this random idea. I guess some people find those funny. Or not. I dunno. Thanks!
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At 9/4/07 01:00 PM, kernalphage wrote: reminds me of that one webcomic... something about a war, postapocaliptic society.reds, blues, yellos..except in a more contemporary war.
KEEP GOING!</capslock>
I guess you're referring to "Gone with the Blastwave"? Yeah, I think it's awesome, and I was heavily influenced by it. Thanks!
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At 9/4/07 01:04 PM, Sgt-Mac wrote: I guess you're referring to "Gone with the Blastwave"? Yeah, I think it's awesome, and I was heavily influenced by it. Thanks!
ah yes... always forget the names of them webcomics...
i can TASTE the influence.
everyone loves stupid humor.
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looks good, but the text is kinda hard to see.
:what you can do is but a white box behind the text, change the box to a symbol and lower the brightness. just a suggestion.
:or make some more open space for the text.
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At 9/4/07 08:00 PM, poxpower wrote: He could have just shot the dude in the back of the head. Then he would have the tv all for himself!
Bahaha, yes!
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Thanks everyone for the comments!
I'm not sure if some of you read my description, this is WORK IN PROGRESS, I will color it, and I'll add speech bubbles so the text will be easier to read.
And about shooting the other guy... Yeah, it would be somewhat funny, haha... But, if I'm gonna make a series about this (that is, if I get ideas), shooting the other character right at the beginning would be kinda bad for the story developement, don't you think?
