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Aww, it's adorable.

At 9/4/07 06:58 PM, MindChamber wrote:

At 9/4/07 06:50 AM, Havayosunu wrote:
i wouldnt like to piss a master like you but.. this pic looks raw. lines are not smooth filterings may be much better.

thats funny coming from someone who looks like he took drawing lessons from Micheal J Fox

well at last sentence of my post i said i understand if it s the way he wants. also i criticise according to my favorite art style, not my own drawing skills (othervise i dont have a right to criticise :P), and my favorite style includes yours. sorry if I pissed you off, master.

I m not flattering btw, i really admire you.

I love the floor.

At 9/5/07 12:55 PM, Havayosunu wrote: also i criticise according to my favorite art style, not my own drawing skills (othervise i dont have a right to criticise :P)

..cant wait for the 08s

At 9/5/07 02:42 AM, ShirtTurtle wrote:

At 9/4/07 07:13 PM, PrinceFlea wrote: Since When did Micheal J Fox ever do drawings?

The point is that he had parkinsons.

well i don't use a tablet and mouse is a fucking trippy device that makes you draw like a parkinson.

however i m learning to use bezier curves these days, it may help.

It looks incredible. And I envy your talent.

What the hell, the next thing i see is Havayosunu being whopped around. Its not like he flew up on Zekey and started dissing him, leave the poor man alone xD Lol we are all so consumed by the sarcasm, that we could serve big plates of it on silver dishes.

Anyways, i like the pic. Its a good bioshock tribute, altho ive never played the game. Im sure you got a lot to shine it up with.

Alright guys now we've all had our fun but honestly.

Lets get serious here for a minute.

Parkinsons is a nasty disease that affects alot of people and we really shouldnt make fun of people who have it.

On that note, I am going to hell for this:

At 9/6/07 06:25 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: Alright guys now we've all had our fun but honestly.

Lets get serious here for a minute.

Parkinsons is a nasty disease that affects alot of people and we really shouldnt make fun of people who have it.

On that note, I am going to hell for this:

okay Zekey, we all understood i think. sorry for not liking yer pic, i only thought you could do much better.

At 9/6/07 01:13 PM, Havayosunu wrote:
okay Zekey, we all understood i think. sorry for not liking yer pic, i only thought you could do much better.

actually, no. you wrote me some paragraph of gibberish that made almost no sense. I don't know if english is your first language or not, but a grammar check could come in handy. And from what I could gather, you wanted me to do the drawing in a "european" or "japanese" style. Seeing as Europe has a whole bevvy of styles, I cant possibly comprehend what you meant by that. Unless your trying to point to some specific artist but couldnt because you were still trying to teach yourself how to type. Japanese means you want it anime style. Fuck that. Why would you want that? Why would you want it done in the same art style EVERYONE uses these days? Idea: when critisizing something, find a flaw in the picture and suggest how to improve upon it. Don't spout meaningless immature junk like "make it more japan style plz". End of rant.

At 9/6/07 04:30 PM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote:

At 9/6/07 01:13 PM, Havayosunu wrote:
okay Zekey, we all understood i think. sorry for not liking yer pic, i only thought you could do much better.

actually, no. you wrote me some paragraph of gibberish that made almost no sense. I don't know if english is your first language or not---------------- HELLUVA LOT OF RANT

... ouch. >_<

kicking rad man

At 9/6/07 05:33 AM, Hammi wrote: What the hell, the next thing i see is Havayosunu being whopped around. Its not like he flew up on Zekey and started dissing him, leave the poor man alone xD Lol we are all so consumed by the sarcasm, that we could serve big plates of it on silver dishes.

Lol another 'artist' that loves to draw themselves, and their goaties way more than they should.

At 9/6/07 08:47 PM, MindChamber wrote:

Lol another 'artist' that loves to draw themselves, and their goaties way more than they should.

Im gonna try not to take that personally, because i will always remember what you did for me. But still im gonna rant now for a bit. You pulled me up once when i was down, and now im some sort of a basket ball that you can pick up and bounce with because i happened to comment here? C'mon man, wheres the luv now? And btw, i dont have ego in me. You got the picture wrong man :( That i love drawing myself? Heh nope, i do freehand randoms and dedications. I happen sometimes to draw myself when testing something new ive learned, because i find that easier to do, and fun. Ive never proclaimed myself as an "artist" either, i just keep beating myself 'till i improve to become one. You dont like my goatie? Pull it.

There, empty. No hatin, only <3. Respect! xP

Okay so.

Ignoring the gay soap opera that has occurred in this festering boil of an art topic......

I have added some more detail and whatnot. I sharpened some edges that were a bit too blurry. I added some very subtle dents to the helmet. Put stains on the bodysuit, walls, floor. Fixed the shading on the floor, ceiling, walls, etc.

Now the question is:

Did you guys think it looked better BEFORE I added all the new stuff? If so, what should I get rid of. I could see the stains on the floor being a turn-off, but I quite like the way the dirt on his suit and legs looks.
But I am asking you guys if I should undo any changes before I continue on painting this crap

At 9/6/07 04:30 PM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote:

At 9/6/07 01:13 PM, Havayosunu wrote:
okay Zekey, we all understood i think. sorry for not liking yer pic, i only thought you could do much better.

pawnage

well in fact i used wrong description. after seeing the smooth and cartoony lines you made in this great movie about a cube city, i found that pic a bit raw for your style, about jap or european style, yeah i just twaddled at that point. okay okay, my whole criticism was a twaddle! but i say again, i said it s okay if you wanted to make that pic in this way. phew, i really feel noob now, although i accept my fault.

and yeah english is not my mother language and i often make grammar mistakes.

At 9/7/07 03:41 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: Okay so.

Ignoring the gay soap opera that has occurred in this festering boil of an art topic......

I have added some more detail and whatnot. I sharpened some edges that were a bit too blurry. I added some very subtle dents to the helmet. Put stains on the bodysuit, walls, floor. Fixed the shading on the floor, ceiling, walls, etc.

Now the question is:

Did you guys think it looked better BEFORE I added all the new stuff? If so, what should I get rid of. I could see the stains on the floor being a turn-off, but I quite like the way the dirt on his suit and legs looks.
But I am asking you guys if I should undo any changes before I continue on painting this crap

and now, i LOVED this pic! yeah it looks great, and i say it from heart. it s all smooth and splendid.

also, about european style, i meant european comic style which Uderzo and Moebius use. What can I say, it s my taste and yeah, it was a fault to criticise it according to my personal point of view.

At 9/7/07 03:41 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: Did you guys think it looked better BEFORE I added all the new stuff? If so, what should I get rid of. I could see the stains on the floor being a turn-off, but I quite like the way the dirt on his suit and legs looks.

It looks way better now, but I don't like the blood stains on the floor near him. They look a bit too smudgy and blurry. Everything else is a great improvement, though. Maybe a little less fog in the backround?

At 9/7/07 06:44 AM, Havayosunu wrote: well in fact i used wrong description. after seeing yada yada yadas you made in this blah blah blah about a cube city, yada yada yada bit raw for your style, blah blah opean style, yeah i just twaddled at that point. yada yada yada, my whole criticism blah blah! but i say again, yada yada yada.

This has got to be the funniest thread I've read all day! And that's not a lot.

At 9/7/07 03:41 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: But I am asking you guys if I should undo any changes before I continue on painting this crap

I think you should remove these 4.

Looks very nice by the way.

At 9/6/07 09:36 PM, Hammi wrote:

At 9/6/07 08:47 PM, MindChamber wrote:

Lol another 'artist' that loves to draw themselves, and their goaties way more than they should.

Im gonna try not to take that personally, because i will always remember what you did for me. But still im gonna rant now for a bit. You pulled me up once when i was down, and now im some sort of a basket ball that you can pick up and bounce with because i happened to comment here?

There, empty. No hatin, only <3. Respect! xP

haha, I just think its funny you back someone up, that isn intentionally being annoying for the sake of it.

At 9/7/07 12:18 PM, MindChamber wrote: haha, I just think its funny you back someone up, that isn intentionally being annoying for the sake of it.

LOLZ! I'm quoting Mindchamber with unnescesary rant! STOP RANTING, CHAMBER! I still <3 you!!
People, Mindchamber is a mod. Just shut the fuck up, the chance of win is never >_>

k, Zekey. Smooth pic. His right foot is flat. Give it some volume, like the right one.

At 9/7/07 03:41 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: Okay so.

Ignoring the gay soap opera that has occurred in this festering boil of an art topic......

I have added some more detail and whatnot. I sharpened some edges that were a bit too blurry. I added some very subtle dents to the helmet. Put stains on the bodysuit, walls, floor. Fixed the shading on the floor, ceiling, walls, etc.

Now the question is:

Did you guys think it looked better BEFORE I added all the new stuff? If so, what should I get rid of. I could see the stains on the floor being a turn-off, but I quite like the way the dirt on his suit and legs looks.
But I am asking you guys if I should undo any changes before I continue on painting this crap

Ok onto the picture, I love the latest version, totally hot.

I find it a tiny bit too dark tho, but Im sure that what you were going for.

might I suggestion some secondary lighting? JohnnyUtah does that alot with his pics, and I have since incorporated into my own stuff, and love the result.
maybe an ominous red light source coming from the lower left picture could outlined the art a but without giving away to much detail.

bang up job tho

Still kinda adorable in a psychopath robot sea-diver sort of way.
The hand is kinda weird.

At 9/7/07 01:41 PM, SapphireLight wrote: Still kinda adorable in a psychopath robot sea-diver sort of way.
The hand is kinda weird.

Probably because it being a slightly realistic painting, I gave him the standard 4-fingered cartoon hand. Probably cause I didn't think I was going to do as much fancy painting and texturing as I've done to it.

At 9/7/07 06:49 AM, Havayosunu wrote:
also, about european style, i meant european comic style which Uderzo and Moebius use. What can I say, it s my taste and yeah, it was a fault to criticise it according to my personal point of view.

If you like Moebius, you clearly have good taste, as he's pretty damn awesome.

At 9/7/07 11:58 AM, PeiMei wrote: I think you should remove these 4.

Yeah, they do seem to stick out a bit much.
I am pondering if perhaps, instead of removing them altogether I should maybe make them more transparent so they are more subtle and dont stick out too much. They're too thick for a stain and too blurry for a puddle, so I'm thinking of fading them a fair bit so they dont POP so much.

At 9/7/07 01:29 PM, MindChamber wrote: might I suggestion some secondary lighting? JohnnyUtah does that alot with his pics, and I have since incorporated into my own stuff, and love the result.
maybe an ominous red light source coming from the lower left picture could outlined the art a but without giving away to much detail.

bang up job tho

Well actually, I was planning on doing that. :)
In the left hand side, I was planning on putting a second hallway there, with sort of an ambient green spooky light emmanating from it, that would also cast green light on the big daddy. I was also pondering placing either a Splicer or a Little Sister in there as well. Or possibly one of the "Ammunition Bandito" vending machines. But I'm not going to fiddle with that until I get the larger half of the painting done.
You pretty much read my mind though.

At 9/7/07 12:33 PM, test-object wrote: k, Zekey. Smooth pic. His right foot is flat. Give it some volume, like the right one.

.............wha?

*head a splode*

At 9/7/07 12:18 PM, MindChamber wrote:

haha, I just think its funny you back someone up, that isn intentionally being annoying for the sake of it.

Lol well it is obviously as it seems, that youre having fun trolling people who lays flat for you while calling you "master" lmao. I hope ive amused you enough now. Next time, dont even touch my goatie >:)

Very nice. Not much to complain expect that of my taste which is:
I dont find that Bid Daddy too indimidating like the ones you really see on Bioshock. And no, adding red light coming behind the glass wont change that :P

His hook looks a bit too, well, how to put it... "UNdangerous". Maybe if you had added something else...?
He looks a bit like he could be smashed with the wrench (until you'd be beaten to death)... :P
Dont get me wrong though, that pic is pretty much genuine pro stuff, keep it up!

WOULD YOU KINDLY GET STEPPED ON BY A BIG DADDY?

I like it! BigDaddys are intimidating! you could probably stand to change the texture on his legs, it's slightly skewed as is.

i laughed out loud when i saw this because i recognized the style to be yours. Well done.

thats pretty nice, I think the fact that it was cartoony made it stand out. Id would only wounder what a drill or gun on thier hands may look like.

thats funny coming from someone who looks like he took drawing lessons from Micheal J Fox

Since When did Micheal J Fox ever do drawings?

Pretty sure he has Parkinson's desease, implying he can't draw a straight line.

If you dont what Parkinson's desease is Google it!!!

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