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Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 06:51:03 Reply

Apparently i need to stop using photoshop filters as an excuse for art and start using paper and pencil!

So i did a 45 minute thing... the hairs not done... but meh.

I'll be doing more later since apparently i cant draw.

I realized once i scanned it her face isn't wide enough and some other minor details.

Tell me what you think.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 06:53:48 Reply

it's really well done but something isent quite right with her face it's odd


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 06:55:30 Reply

At 8/30/07 06:53 AM, CyberStrike wrote: it's really well done but something isent quite right with her face it's odd

Yea it kind of looks like shes being forced to smile by terrorists who are forcing her to make a ransom video and holding a gun next to her head. ^_^

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 07:18:11 Reply

Wha...what's a pencil?


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 08:27:01 Reply

i like it! i have always wondered how to shade like that XD

and too the guy above me...bad boy.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 08:32:42 Reply

well i dont think its finishied (cuz the right side of the hair isnt sketched)
whats that flap under each eye? i think they belong there.
the shadow looks a lil off to me.
overall its ok (everything looks like its in the right place, and most of the anatomy looks well done)


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 08:33:49 Reply

At 8/30/07 08:20 AM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Haha, was this intentional or just coincidence? :)

That is exactly what I thought, too.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 08:44:44 Reply

At 8/30/07 07:18 AM, Searp3nt wrote: Wha...what's a pencil?

I think it's a new photoshop plugin you download


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 09:36:30 Reply

At 8/30/07 08:44 AM, Sticky wrote: I think it's a new photoshop plugin you download

Yeah but, you have to pay for it.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 10:05:51 Reply

At 8/30/07 08:27 AM, crazerfish50 wrote: i like it! i have always wondered how to shade like that XD

Smudge it with your finger.

Anyway, it looks nice. Eyes are wrong.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 10:17:54 Reply

the emoticon sez all !!!!


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 14:52:06 Reply

At 8/30/07 08:20 AM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Haha, was this intentional or just coincidence? :)

Omfg lmfao i didn't realize that xD.

=O maybe i traced that now too?

At 8/30/07 08:27 AM, crazerfish50 wrote: i like it! i have always wondered how to shade like that XD

Lmfao it's just shading. =3

At 8/30/07 08:32 AM, Dookiemaister wrote: well i dont think its finishied (cuz the right side of the hair isnt sketched)

I never said it was =P

whats that flap under each eye? i think they belong there.

If you smile, skins gathers under your eye.

the shadow looks a lil off to me.

Meh.

overall its ok (everything looks like its in the right place, and most of the anatomy looks well done)

Thanks, and people think i cannot draw ish xD

At 8/30/07 08:33 AM, PandaMime wrote:
At 8/30/07 08:20 AM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Haha, was this intentional or just coincidence? :)
That is exactly what I thought, too.

Lol i didn't xD

At 8/30/07 08:44 AM, Sticky wrote:
At 8/30/07 07:18 AM, Searp3nt wrote: Wha...what's a pencil?
I think it's a new photoshop plugin you download

Yeah thats it.

At 8/30/07 10:05 AM, idiot-monarch wrote:
At 8/30/07 08:27 AM, crazerfish50 wrote: i like it! i have always wondered how to shade like that XD
Smudge it with your finger.

Anyway, it looks nice. Eyes are wrong.

I did smudge, and i guess ill work on the eyes.

At 8/30/07 10:17 AM, XkakiharaX wrote: the emoticon sez all !!!!

Purple?

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 14:58:32 Reply

She looks like she has horse teeth, but it looks pretty realistic.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 15:26:13 Reply

You scared the shit outta me.

You started off good, but during the process you forgot about the proportions.
Let me help you:

I know it's done on computer, not by hand, bladie-bladie-bla...

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 16:44:34 Reply

meh......is this thread for everybody or only for you? because if it's for everybody i woud like to present''the bane of my existence" dunno where the title came from....it looks scanned but i did not know this was photoshopped

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 16:57:18 Reply

pouting man.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 16:59:14 Reply

At 8/30/07 04:57 PM, StoneColdSoul wrote: pouting man.

awwwww..... he needs a hug.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 17:01:42 Reply

I love it. Youve been doing real life art, the best thing an artist can do. Me meanwhile, havent done it yet and is still stuck in the cartoon world practicing low level doodles such as anime and other random toon crap. Youve come far. Im gettin nowhere with what ive got. In other words, im now envious of you >:)

Keep it up. And dont leave NG, that would make me regret that i ever envied you.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 17:04:27 Reply

At 8/30/07 05:01 PM, Hammi wrote: I love it. Youve been doing real life art, the best thing an artist can do. Me meanwhile, havent done it yet and is still stuck in the cartoon world practicing low level doodles such as anime and other random toon crap. Youve come far. Im gettin nowhere with what ive got. In other words, im now envious of you >:)

Keep it up. And dont leave NG, that would make me regret that i ever envied you.

Lol thank, i've actually always worked with more real life things.

I never did the anime thing... =3

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 17:13:30 Reply

At 8/30/07 06:53 AM, CyberStrike wrote: it's really well done but something isent quite right with her face it's odd

vary odd


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 17:27:01 Reply

At 8/30/07 05:17 PM, PrinceFlea wrote: What was it about anime that you have never made an attempt of?I cant find one that looks even close to anime in your history heck nothing even on that bashes anime.You make it the Good choice that someone should try drawing from real life Before they even claim an "style" without knowing the basics.

Yeah basically i don't think anime is realistic and i would prefer to go with a realistic style and practice before i get into different styles. Plus im not Asian.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 17:53:34 Reply

Fun little update before i go to soccer practice.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 17:59:56 Reply

At 8/30/07 05:53 PM, StoneColdSoul wrote: Fun little update before i go to soccer practice.

The nose is weird, the lines above the actual nose are too straight, I think you should curve them a bit, towards the eyes.

Your art is great, I suck at realistic so I just use cartoons where everything is exaggerated, like big eyes, gigantic nose, you get the point.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 18:13:45 Reply

I had time to shade before i leave...

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-30 20:36:55 Reply

bump.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-31 22:35:40 Reply

Heres another.

It's of beavis-love. for that 10$ drawing thing.

I may or may not finish it.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-31 22:52:12 Reply

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More defined.

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-31 23:13:25 Reply

As far as proportion goes, the mouth should be as wide as the nose. Truth. I mean, you can make it slightly bigger or smaller, no one has perfect proportions, but right now they look like blackface lips.


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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-08-31 23:43:36 Reply

pic 1-...i think it shows your better on paper when it comes to drawing faces....though the porportions are off its better than your digital art....its a well drawn picture....not the best but like i always say practice makes stuff.....but yeah

pic 2-...this pic reminds me of that guy off that movie that does stuff.....but i think he may need a hairline of some sort....his mouth is awfully big for his mug....and his ears are pretty low....like there sagging.....maybe thats your style ....but yeah

pic 3- its not done so i cant say anything but mouth ears?, eyes....but then again it could be your style

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Response to Paper and pencil 2007-09-02 03:11:13 Reply

overall its ok (everything looks like its in the right place, and most of the anatomy looks well done)
Thanks, and people think i cannot draw ish xD

Really u cant!! LOL. I think U should learn. Here's a lesson:

PS- do urself a favor artn00b and do ur homework before u cast disparagements. piece...

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