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Alas I knew the best story thread on the whole fucking BBS is now dead.

Elemtell go fucking suffocate in shit.

funny story, i hope you do another one!

Nice story. I could do with the lack of Bel Air and say it was good.

Why is it "fuck hospital" and not "fuckING hospital"?

Nice ending. I expected something diffrent, but it's even better.

THIS IS STALINGRAAAAD.

Well, that was definately the best story I've ever read on the BBS... you kept my attention better than most books have which is quite a compliment. Even though this wonderful story is over, I will keep it in my sig so others can read the wonder that is your story.

Great job. Could have done better on madness joke. But you win! very good i dont care if its stolen or not! The bbs needs to bring back BBS stories. they are the best threads!

Wow a six page thread that ends with a sparta joke so very epic. Now is there a thread hall of fame any where because this would probably be top five.

HOLY FUCKING SHIT! That was worth the wait, i am so glad you finished this story dude, top job.

i wish god wanted me dead. i have had a plank of wood broke my face right above my eye and have fallen on metal and creaked the back of my head open. he is keeping me alive for his own amusement, like a comical skit when every he wants.

me making a jackass of myself brings someone else enjoyment. but i am Christan so what can you do about? i have spent 8 years of my life learning about him i will not stop now

even thought at my age i should have life by the balls. oh well

:damn

I -- love -- you . . . . .

=D

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LULZ
EPIC WIN!!!!!

hmmmmm i thought i read something like this a few weeks ago hmmmm

amazing, just brilliant!

a wwicked story, kept me enetertained the enitire way thourgh, why? because it kicks ass...

i have personally spent alot of my life in a hospital and ive had a few bad experiences. i have friends whod yell at me for leedng on thier seets even if i nearly died ;)

keep up teh gppd work bro

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im thinking of the movie the 300
the phsyco-bitch cud prob hold teh persian army off for a few days herself :P

At 8/30/07 08:48 PM, naruto-ninja999 wrote:

THIS! IS! SPARTAAAA!

. ELEMENTLE! IS! A ASSHOLLLE!

i mean come on even if it did end that way it would still be funny...

Wait did I say that?

Thank you for finishing it properly, this is by far the best internet story I have ever read. I don't know if you're considering to make a career out of writing, but I'm sure you could.

dude i read the hole thing didnt look at the ending, you are awsome write a book do something this story diservs 10/10 lolololo lmao rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holy crap, that was awesome. First story thread to keep me entertained the whole way through.

I loved this story. 10/10.

DUDE! I Fucking love your story. It was epic!

That was seriously. Just. Fucking brilliant. Good job.

Oh my FUCKING god....
THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I'VE EVERY HEARD ANYONE SAY ABOUT ANYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U KICK ASS DUDE!!!!!

Really great story, man! Reminds me of the hospitals here with the incompetent nurses and dumb fuck doctors who don't give a rat's ass about the patients.

was a little disappointed by the 300 joke to be honest, but it was an incredibly epic story, well done indeed!

that story pwned.

there is no god

yes he does

The story was a masterpiece, but the ending just plain sucked.

Sorry.