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It looked better on paper

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It looked better on paper 2007-08-22 11:55:29


this is a drawing of a school kid who got stabbed in the arm, lol.
It looked better on paper, i tried to keep the lines smoother than my last post which was done scribbly, but i think it would look better scribbly. tell me what you think plz.

PS. this is my second ever drawing on the computer.

It looked better on paper


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Response to It looked better on paper 2007-08-22 11:56:31


Also, on paper, his left foot wasn't fuk't!


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Response to It looked better on paper 2007-08-22 11:58:22


Pretty well done.

The arm that's holding the wound is smaller than the other arm though.

Response to It looked better on paper 2007-08-22 12:14:29


At 8/22/07 11:56 AM, FistOfBlood wrote: Also, on paper, his left foot wasn't fuk't!

If we dont see the paper-verison (not telling you that you should post it) you could say anything about it. The fact that you made it on paper first doesnt really matter.
Though, if you think that the paper-verison looked better you can compare the two images and understand what does look better and learn from it.

Now to the posted picture. Use smaller outlines and take a good look at the anatomy. The right arm looks like its been broken, or the elbow is at the same height as his nipples. Wheres the left hands thumb?

Keep drawing

Response to It looked better on paper 2007-08-22 12:20:44


At 8/22/07 12:14 PM, LaserKarl wrote:
Keep drawing

Yeah, but don't make a new thread every single time.


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Response to It looked better on paper 2007-08-22 12:25:52


At 8/22/07 12:20 PM, Diphallia wrote:
At 8/22/07 12:14 PM, LaserKarl wrote:
Keep drawing
Yeah, but don't make a new thread every single time.

No need to get annoyed at him.

But yeah, most people around here have an own thread in wich they put all their images, its really a good idea.