Nothing major just feedback wanted.

[Darkaxl]

Yeah, basicly just wanted feedback from people who are more experianced or have achieved more..or anyone who basicly has any feedback xd

Thanks

[Jimp]

I really like it! although I dont have more experience... I really like the style, keep up the good work!

[I-Like-Muffins]

I like it...its pretty cool
but color it up ^-^

[Darkaxl]

Dude i really can't colour. I could flash colour it but if i even attempted to use Photoshop it'd turn into a 70's movie poster =P

[Dilarus]

his arms and hands arent clear and his ass looks really saggy, but good job otherwise ^-^

[Darkaxl]

He has no arse...THATS WHY HES UNIQUE.

In all seriousness though yeah i know it needs touching it but noone on Ng has seen anything i can draw as i rarely post SKETCHED things i do. All the feedback is appreciated cause then i can go back and know what i did wrong and improve upon ^_^

[Dookiemaister]

At 8/10/07 08:14 PM, Darkaxl wrote: Yeah, basicly just wanted feedback from people who are more experianced or have achieved more..or anyone who basicly has any feedback xd

Thanks

1) the bottom edge of the wings could be drawn better
2) the arm and hand have very little detail
3) wtf is he sitting on?
not too impressive

[Darkaxl]

1) the bottom edge of the wings could be drawn better
2) the arm and hand have very little detail
3) wtf is he sitting on?
not too impressive

Yeah i was trying to think of the wings perspective thus the scrappyness.
Posistioning was changed midway thus the over biro'd arms and hands.
It's a re-inforced seat de-dicated to his dad (Animation storyline in mah head)

Thanks for the feedback

[Darkaxl]

Here is the re-colour hopefully know the arms and hands dont look as sloppy. Just feedback wanted like before rly =P

Thanks

[InkyBoy]

You know the wings should be going the same way... Unless it was bent around somehow.

[Darkaxl]

In fucking deed' they should ;o... i was thinking he was twisted a little thus the perspective of the wings would be out.. Thanks ^^

[Darkaxl]

Update =p

[PandaMime]

At 8/11/07 12:21 PM, Darkaxl wrote: Update =p

Can we see without the lense flair, looks good though.

[test-object]

The wings should hang depending his mood.
He looks depressed, so have the wings hang down.

It's a below average pic.

[idiot-buster]

that pretty good if u did it freehand

[nirvelyar]

At 8/11/07 01:52 PM, test-object wrote: The wings should hang depending his mood.
He looks depressed, so have the wings hang down.

It's a below average pic.

good point.

[Darkaxl]

Wow thanks for all the reply's =P i guess i should take into consideration althought the wings don't have a mind of there own if someone is depressed or sad there not gonna be all tight and stirdy kinda like the muscles on a character, the wings SHOULD be alot more relaxed.

On that note i'll go back and correct the wings asap ^_^, oh and i am workin on more of the same character as i will hopefully be bringing him into a flash animation once i've storyboarded it all and drew more characters.

Ill update soon ^^. Thanks

[ExtraTim]

Looks cool, but I would first make the left wing more behind the guy and second, clean up the lines. I would rather it be less scratchy, know what I mean?

[ExtraTim]

Sorry, didn't read down and see the *final picture. Anyway, I think the wings still need work. I mean, I'm not sure if they are feathered or just that kind of skin stuff. Also, I would almost like to say to make them bigger by a bit.

Bah, summed up = work on wings. =P

[Winned]

At 8/11/07 12:21 PM, Darkaxl wrote: Update =p

Wow, it looks way better that way. It's really awesome.

[Darkaxl]

lol thanks althought this is a learning phase with the critique from other users the posotive feedback is always a huge confidence booster ^_^ So i just wanna thank you all :P

Cheers.

[Darkaxl]

Ok i decided that the 1st peice was good enough as scrap material for the animation so i decided to sketch another up this i what i got. same character minus the wings.

Oh and i know the chair is HELLA wrong that will be changed in the re-colour ^_^. Feedback please:P

[Darkaxl]

Started the re-colour looking ok i guess ^_^

Ignore the white just a rip from flash cba to photoshop it .

[Darkaxl]

Ok last update me sleepy ^_^ G'night all.

[Zhacross]

At 8/11/07 09:08 PM, Darkaxl wrote: Ok last update me sleepy ^_^ G'night all.

It looks good and all, but I got one critique: His left leg is way to long. It's pretty much the same length as the right, outstretched leg. Good job otherwise.