00:00
00:00
Newgrounds Background Image Theme

Zombiehit just joined the crew!

We need you on the team, too.

Support Newgrounds and get tons of perks for just $2.99!

Create a Free Account and then..

Become a Supporter!

Hello, I'm looking for Critique.

773 Views | 7 Replies
New Topic Respond to this Topic

Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-05 23:18:11


Ummm... yeah... charcoal, pastel and watercolor.

HOW DO I IMPROVE THIS.

Hello, I'm looking for Critique.


BBS Signature

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-05 23:21:46


color the people...


KLONE_____________________________S .F.

BBS Signature

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-05 23:23:13


I ran out of watercolor.

And pastel.


BBS Signature

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-06 00:06:29


I like the way it's drawn, very chaotic so it makes it look like it's moving. Good work dude.

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-06 00:33:45


Shadows on the ground can use a bit more detail

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-06 01:52:10


Im not sure what is in the middle, an energy ball I think, but it dosen't look good. Try fixing that up and the thing will probablly look a lot better

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-06 02:47:26


to improve, you can always draw from a more difficult angel.

Response to Hello, I'm looking for Critique. 2007-08-07 08:37:41


Thank you, Triphophiptop. I appreciate the compliment.

Vortex, there are no shadows. I probably should have added them, but I was running out of charcoal, as you can tell by the extra-crappy 'rest of the picture.'

Umm.. yeah... I photochopped it.

Better?:

Hello, I'm looking for Critique.


BBS Signature