Hello, I'm looking for Critique.
- Ultimate7777
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Ummm... yeah... charcoal, pastel and watercolor.
HOW DO I IMPROVE THIS.
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I ran out of watercolor.
And pastel.
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I like the way it's drawn, very chaotic so it makes it look like it's moving. Good work dude.
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Shadows on the ground can use a bit more detail
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Im not sure what is in the middle, an energy ball I think, but it dosen't look good. Try fixing that up and the thing will probablly look a lot better
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to improve, you can always draw from a more difficult angel.
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Thank you, Triphophiptop. I appreciate the compliment.
Vortex, there are no shadows. I probably should have added them, but I was running out of charcoal, as you can tell by the extra-crappy 'rest of the picture.'
Umm.. yeah... I photochopped it.
Better?:
