What do you think?

[Revert-07]

This is my first image that I have submitted to the art forum, and I was wondering what you guys think of it. I made it using MS paint, and it took me a couple of days to complete.

So, please let me know what you think of it. And please, constructive criticism only.

Thanks.

[Willhudski]

Well, the first thing I have to say is that his head is a ball.. It needs to have a structure, and various features (Nose, Eyebrows)

The second point I have is that the arm seems to be made of a flexible substance? Because my arm definately can't curl around like that.

Now, I'm not gonna put you down. It's good for a first, and good for a Paint as well, but it needs to have simple things in it, (eg Shadows to bring out shades and environment)

What you need to do is get a picture of somebody's face side-on and learn the structure of it, how far the nose should come out and how big the dip is between nose and mouth.

Keep workin' at it. :)

[crazerfish50]

just look at the pic. i think it looks good for a simple anime character, but try to spice it up :D it's to bland!

[DarkEclipse50]

At 7/30/07 10:33 AM, Revert-07 wrote: This is my first image that I have submitted to the art forum, and I was wondering what you guys think of it. I made it using MS paint, and it took me a couple of days to complete.

So, please let me know what you think of it. And please, constructive criticism only.

Thanks.

hmm its not good but its a start. at least i know its a guy. u said it took u a few days? ur using a mouse arent u? the hairs great i think but the bandannas have to straight of lines inside it makes me think its not moving. if u use curved lines in the right spot thatd b better. and the gun is on the wrong side. if u wanted to have the gun on that side of him than ud have to put his left hand on the trigger and his right on the gun. besides that its not that bad its ok. ull get there with work on ms paint. keep trying

[ImaFreekozoid]

The hair is too sporadic.