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nirvelyar
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Which Is Better 2007-07-30 03:28:54 Reply

Which pencil mouth is better for my upcoming cartoon? 1. or 2. constructive critisism please.

is the hair okay?

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 03:32:33 Reply

The hair is fine, and I like the second mouth better because it looks like it would fit his "personality" and it looks better than the other one.

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 03:33:06 Reply

Don't really see differences between them, except for the mouths. Both of them are very good, you don't have anything to worry about, IMHO.

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 03:35:05 Reply

Deary me, misread the first post. Second one, it just seems so right, haha, if that's a good enough reason.

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 03:35:38 Reply
At 7/30/07 03:32 AM, Cubagon wrote: The hair is fine, and I like the second mouth better because it looks like it would fit his "personality" and it looks better than the other one.

VERY good point!

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 06:45:24 Reply

... A pencil with a mouth should talk, right? Why can't you use both?

A rather disgusting-looking git that should have been disposed of ages ago.

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 08:02:18 Reply
At 7/30/07 06:45 AM, test-object wrote: ... A pencil with a mouth should talk, right? Why can't you use both?

There 2 different styles.- I like no.1 , but I think I'm gonna go with 2.

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 11:20:11 Reply

second one

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Response to Which Is Better 2007-07-30 11:24:05 Reply

the 2nd one makes him look insane, much funnier than the first :)

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