Round 2

[DEFF]

i have submitted this art before but the judgement i got were not on topic so i am re submitting mine. This technically belongs to my friend kelly for original idea but i helped/edited some of it so it was more like a collab. i am aware with the rules and im looking for my small sketchbook for better images. sorry for bad quality pic because my scanner sucks... terribly. if this doesn't work well, do not post and let it be scrap.

me and my friend prefer if you could give reasonable ideas/improvements not needs to be better or something un specific.

[crazerfish50]

rave :D

[DEFF]

At 7/27/07 02:44 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: rave :D

after 7 mins for 1 reply.. this is the best criticism you can give?

better then insulting and yet true

[DEFF]

this isn't to bump but how many people actually draw with pencil and scan?

this is out lined in thin marker to be more vibrant but was originally pencil

[crazerfish50]

At 7/27/07 02:57 PM, DEFF wrote: this isn't to bump but how many people actually draw with pencil and scan?

this is out lined in thin marker to be more vibrant but was originally pencil

me :D

[Vortex00]

At 7/27/07 02:37 PM, DEFF wrote: i have submitted this art before

lol....I remember this pic

but the judgement i got were not on topic so i am re submitting mine.
me and my friend prefer if you could give reasonable ideas/improvements not needs to be better or something un specific.

Don't like the comments eh? Maybe we should all resubmit the stuff we do if we don't like the comments? XD

but seriously..
That's because it's a cartoon... It looks exactly like how you probably wanted it to look.

Can't really critique cartoons like that, because it's difficult to decipher what is wrong and what was just the style. It looks like a fun sticker or something.

That why the posts were retarded. .... anyways..

Crits
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Hold your hand in the air like in the picture.. can turn your ring and pinky fingers horizontal like that?

Her boobs look like they hate each other

what's that under her eye? blush or something?

The face isn't symmetrical

Shoes need more definition

So can the necklace :O

....fin

[SmilingIdiot]

i do the scan pencil, pen, marker sniffin thing....wanna get HIGHHHH...but to all serious reality and stuff that can be serious at times.....your pic.....**takes long breth**.....what can be said....anatomy.....hands....head size....but since it looks like you and your friend are aiming for anime.....im gonna suggest the hands and porportions.....hands are easy to draw....sometimes at a slight angle they can be very anoying.....but if you look at your hands for ideas when you draw....your drawing would look nicer....the detail your aiming for is saying you want to be great at this....so all i can say is practice makes some stuff...so just touch up the proportion thing and im betting your gonna do alright

and i already took into conciderations thing.....that that pics over and done with ecept for the colouring

[crazerfish50]

Crits
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Hold your hand in the air like in the picture.. can turn your ring and pinky fingers horizontal like that?

i tried that :P..they don't..

Her boobs look like they hate each other

they do, don't they...i wonder why :/

what's that under her eye? blush or something?

..i think..maybe..maybe she's a fish :D

The face isn't symmetrical

true.

Shoes need more definition

So can the necklace :O

lol

....fin

moviees :D