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BonusStage

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:13 AM

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My name is Braydan. Now, before i go into all this and you call me a stalker, I'd like to tell you that i am currently dating a girl. Her name is Chloe, this story is about how i somehow love her.

You think, somehow? Yeah, it's kinda hard to explain ... most guys wouldn't be proud to be with her ... but i love her with everything I am.

Ok, so her story.

Tell them about you too dumbass

What? Ugh, what about me? I'm not important, for god sakes, throw me a fucking bone.

Hey, fuck you, they might as well know about you before you go and brag about your slut

SHE'S NOT A FUCKING SLUT

You know she is, so shut up and tell them about ...us

Ugh, my name is Braydan. Now, before i go into all this and you call me a stalker, I'd like to tell you about ... myself. Us, i guess.

Hi, I'm Kyle, the non-fuckhead side of this asshole, i'll be throwing in useful information and insults about this pussy whipped bitch that'll be bragging about his whore ok?

The lovely asshole you've been hearing from is Kyle. He is the me that my brain created so i would have some self-confidence according to my therapist. IF ANYTHING, HE'S JUST KEPT SUICIDE OFF MY MIND BY PISSING ME OFF AND HELPING ME GET MY ASS KICKED.

Fuck, see what you did, i'm on a tangent.

Not listening pussylips, get on with my story.

Our story, asshole.

Ugh, look, mine's not COOL, mine's not interesting. The most interesting story i have is when i was 4.

It was Christmas.

My remote control car kinda ... malfunctioned.

That's dumbass' way of saying BOOM MUTHAFUCKA

Yeah, one of the pieces of plastic kind of ricocheted off my chest ... not after digging a whole that went down to my ribs... I call it my battle-scar now

You're such a faggot

Fuck you, anyways, onto the story about a girl who FUCKING DESERVES A STORY.

Speaking of fucking, that bitch.

Very funny Kyle, you're SO HILARIOUS.

Now please, shall I?

Not like i can stop your rants Brayden, go ahead.

Chloe had a ... bad life.

You see she was raped as a child by her father ... well ... molested until she was 10 ... her father caught her the first time she bled, he shoved his tongue down her throat while he made her bleed even more and cry harder than ever.

She lost all emotion by age fourteen when she told her mother what happened.

The pig was dead in two months .... I guess that whole "Pedophiles in Prison" deal is kinda ... EXACTLY how it happens.

He was found quartered in the bathroom, supposedly the guards let them do it, he hated the fucker too, we all did. He got 10 years and he barely lasted 5 weeks.

They supposedly tortured him for hours. Chloe had me read off the death causes to her a few years back, she never had the strength to do it herself, she cried the entire time, saying how happy she was.

She deserved it.

Oh, tell them about the shit they did, it's fucking awesome

Alright, alright, you're like a ten year old.

Basically they had 4 men old down the extremities, the first thing they did was turn the showers on full and scald his up good, his skin was nearly burned off by the time they found him.

They also anally raped him ... about 7 times, seemingly each man took a turn, basically to make up for the shit he did, he deserved each dick up his ass. Fucker.

In addition, they cut off his dick with one of those knives snuck in through the talking area's breathing holes, how nice of them. Chloe smiled so much when she heard that.

Chloe though ... she didn't recover with his death, in fact, she learned how to manipulate boys.

She had partners ... lots of them ... maybe fifty before i came along, maybe 19 more before i became the last guy she ever wished to sleep with, the only one to make love to.

Tell about her exploits stalker boy, tell them more about her slutty ways.

You're the one that fucking loves it so much, YOU TELL THEM KYLE.

Fuck you Brayden.

AHEM

Now listen you little fucks, I hate talking but BOY do i have some shit to tell you.

This girl once fucked four of her guys in one night, for fifty dollars each. Actually ONE of them gave her 100$, he got anal though. Whore.

SHE DID IT BECAUSE HER MOTHER WAS DIRT POOR, THEY HAD NO MONEY, SHE HAD NO WHERE ELSE TO GO, NOTHING ELSE TO DO YOU BASTARD.

YEAH YEAH, WHAT THE FUCK EVER

Anyways, she also once held a bukkake party, with her as the cum guzzling birdbath. The ticket to get in was 10$, again it was because she "couldn't do ANYTHING ELSE," said the whore lover.

Ugh, why did i even let you talk.

Because the kids want to hear about sluts, then they'll think they have a fucking chance.

Yeah, whatever, I saw her use guys. Say bye to one with an "I love you" and go into the arms and make out with another in 5 minutes ... she only did what she had to do ... please understand.

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Michael

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:13 AM

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I remember when i finally had enough hair on my nuts to ask her why she did it.

SLAP ... ow, she used some of the money to buy a ring it seems ... what'd i do?

I asked again.

OH FUCK THAT'S MY BALLS ... ow
ow
ow
ow
ow

Now for a few quotations:
"WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?"
"DON'T COME TO ME ASKING ME WHY I DO SHIT YOU ASSHOLE!"
"I JUST WANT TO FUCKING KNOW WHY!"
"WHY WHAT, WHY I'M A FILTHY WHORE RIGHT? WHY I'M RAVAGED WITH DICK IN MY LIPS EVERY OTHER GODDAMN DAY?! WHY I HAVE LIVE WITH MY FILTHY FUCKING SELF AS A WHORE JUST TO EAT? IS THAT YOUR MOTHER FUCKING QUESTION?"
(sidenote: she still had the emotion anger ... it seems)
"NO, I'm asking why you do it because you could be so much more ..."

Her eyes ... at that moment ... oh god, LET'S SIDESTEP FOR A BIT

Basically Chloe was a 5 foot 3 inch goddess ... albeit the whole fifty plus lovers deal. Her hair was a soft Strawberry Blonde and her eyes were grey, but dazzling, they sparkled ... i swear they did when i said that ... Her 34C bust, that gorgeous waste, huge hips ... and ass, she was a man's dream ... she deserve more.

You just wanted to fuck her, pervert.

...Anyways, read the dialogue again if you don't remember it, ANYWAYS.

"Like what, ... a Hooters waitress? A Strip Club pole slut? What else can i fucking be besides a whore huh?"
"You could be mine."
"Oh, a Knight in Shining Armor eh? I've seen your type before, you always talk this shit for a few weeks, then become like the rest, a fuck buddy paying for the pussy."
"... I'm hardly cute enough to be called a Knight ... milady"

... Ow, that slap hurt bad ... ow, but she laughed ... she fucking laughed.

Oh god, Casanova with his shpiel about her laugh

(To sum it up kids, it's AMAZING AND MAKES HIM SO HAPPY TO HEAR, BLAH BLAH, excuse me while i fucking gag)

... Kyle's right, that's basically what i think when she laughs. ... Anyways.

"Why are you trying so hard Mr ..."
"It's Brayden, i'll even tell you my last name if you give me a date."
"Ohhhh, so you DO have confidence, ... fine, i always need more clients."

There's no need to go into the date ... it was cliche

romantic
dinner
flowers
she was gorgeous
i ... tried to be handsome

blah blah teenager love bullshit, THE IMPORTANT PART WAS THIS.

When i walked her up to the house ... me a seventeen year old virgin, her a fifteen year old whore. She offered to let me in, I kissed her goodnight and went home.

She was dumbfounded.

The next days she asks, "I was inviting you in you idiot, you gave me a good date, i was gonna reward you."
"I didn't take you out to fuck you, i took you out because you're worth more than fucking."

At that moment she smiled again ... oh her smile

GET ON WITH IT FUCKFACE

OH ... UM ... UH, yes, basically she said to go to her house that night.

I did, she was laying on her couch, sobbing, right then and there she told me her entire life ... i was stricken with the utmost of need to be with her.

On a second's blip I asked her out ... she said she never had a boyfriend, asked if it was sad.

I told her i was just lucky to be her first in something.

... Her slaps really do hurt.

And we've been together ever since ...

WOW, A HAPPY ENDING, at least my side of this fuckhead is finally getting laid.

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Unreal-Me

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:26 AM

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Should that be real: Good for you. Honestly. We need more people like this. And its horrifying to know how shit like that happens in life. Thank you for sharing this. (and strange alter ego thar :p)

Should this be fictional: Somewhat strange writing, but still captivating. Good job.


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Michael

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:27 AM

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At 7/9/07 02:26 AM, Unreal-Me wrote: Should this be fictional: Somewhat strange writing, but still captivating. Good job.

If you like this, check through the post history or the "NG Library" in the Where is/ How to? Section of the BBS ... all of my stories are here.

I'm just Michael though, a boy with a lot of inspiration.

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thedude27

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:33 AM

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you sir, are a insane moron

why are you wearing that stupid bunny suit?
why are you wearing that sutupid man suit?<-- watch that movieill bite YOU!!!
ILL BITE YOU TWICE!!


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armbiter

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:33 AM

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That's amazing dude but I was confused on the second part. I didn't understand for a while that you were quoting past events. I thought you might have been talking to yourself. (Not Kyle)
Anyways I think you're doing a great job, and yes that deserves a fucking story. Good job, mate.


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Michael

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Posted at: 7/9/07 02:37 AM

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At 7/9/07 02:33 AM, thedude27 wrote: you sir, are a insane moron

I think you mean

AN* insane moron.

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BonusStage

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Posted at: 7/9/07 04:27 AM

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At 7/9/07 02:33 AM, armbiter wrote: Anyways I think you're doing a great job, and yes that deserves a fucking story. Good job, mate.

Thanks for the compliment, mate.

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ageofthoughts

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Posted at: 7/9/07 04:28 AM

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damn dudes....tldr for the first two but i read enough to get the gist of it.....

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Invaderchris

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Posted at: 7/9/07 05:37 AM

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Errr... Nice?

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Posted at: 7/9/07 05:39 AM

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ok... its this simple... you ARE a Stalker... and the 2nd person is way too excitable...

MissingNYC - Administrator AntoArts.com
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L33TM4573R

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Posted at: 7/9/07 05:41 AM

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Wonderful read -- You kept the characters separate, you kept it interesting and the dialog between them all very neat and clean, yet entertaining. Wonderful job.


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Posted at: 7/9/07 07:12 AM

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i fuckin love you bonusstage, and i dont even know you

You people may be cunning linguists but I'm a master debator.

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KingRugger

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Posted at: 7/9/07 07:22 AM

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That was pretty good stuff, man. Keep up the good work :)

"Wit is educated insolence." - Aristotle

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Reaperyami

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Posted at: 7/9/07 07:24 AM

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I love your stories they're so different and new. I also like to lol at the people who say: " Iz dis re4l?" You bring life into the BBS.


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McJesus

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Posted at: 7/9/07 07:26 AM

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The only BBS stories that rock.

And make you think.

And make you gag.


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Posted at: 7/9/07 08:39 AM

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shut the fuck up


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BonusStage

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Posted at: 7/9/07 09:50 AM

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At 7/9/07 05:39 AM, MissingNYC wrote: ok... its this simple... you ARE a Stalker... and the 2nd person is way too excitable...

Said the ultra obsessed SMBZ fan.

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