At 7/13/07 08:39 PM, Illu wrote:
It looks good, but the cape looks wrong and goopy. I don't think the fabric would drape that way, in sprite world or in real life. Try enlarging the sprite to see, because the cape looks more convincing in it than in your version. The rest of it is fine, but to take it up a notch, like Some-Stupid-Idiot said, add more depth by giving it more than cell shading. Give it several more layers of darker color and maybe highlights.
Thank you, i couldn't see what was wrong but now i do :D
At the moment i am very discouraged :\ i wish i was better, the only way to get better is to draw and study others art, but i guess i'm being emo and i feel that i can never be as good as most of the contest submissions.
and again, Great work contestants.