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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-23 19:21:33 Reply

At 7/23/07 05:47 PM, gunground wrote:
welcome to the crew, im a bit busy to give you a tour, but if you need anything just pm me

yes indeed welcome.

also, im posting another link to crystallix animation so i dont have to keep going back to page 4.

GIANT LINK TO THE PROJECT HQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CLICK!


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-23 21:42:38 Reply

It's not the best I've written, but I only have two on this computer and the other is a little off, so...

Gaze into the moonlight
As it overtakes your soul
Down into the well
See the icy shimmering below

I am your god
Spawn of all lies
Lick at the flames
Darkest hours arise

There are eyes
In the fog
He who denies
shall never return

Look into my eyes
As I steal away your life
You cannot deny
Truth buried in the knife

Watch closely
As the sun dies out
Final days approaching
I will overthrow the gods

I am your god
Spawn of all lies
Lick at the flames
Darkest hours arise

There are eyes
In the fog
He who denies
shall never return

There are eyes
In the fog
I'll feed you lies
You'll never return.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-23 22:31:51 Reply

i like it! is the message that you are satan talking to a sinner?


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 00:24:06 Reply

ha! i just read it again. if you hear it the right way in your head it sound kind of like a gothic linkin park.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 00:47:16 Reply

At 7/23/07 10:31 PM, MonkeyV wrote: i like it! is the message that you are satan talking to a sinner?

More or less...There's no specific person that I am in it, it's mostly just the vague concept of evil triumphing over good..


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 01:01:37 Reply

Wow...That sounded extremely cliché

sorry!

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 05:03:48 Reply

At 7/24/07 01:01 AM, Dr-Roxo wrote: Wow...That sounded extremely cliché
sorry!

Oh well, it's ok, the poem isn't bad, not too far off from my "Binding of Hell" :

"Shrieking darkness stands before me
Torment of light from behind
Darkness is all around us, let it be
In the chains of hell we bind

Fear is turned to apathy
Misery into indifference
Again we only find agony
It all makes no sense

A nomad on his endless journey
A settler in a slow painful death
How long must I carry this Burdon
Reaching out the Grim reaper's long Scythe

Happy times no more
Joy of life diminished to air
With all the hate he bore
On a lost trip to venture, will he dare"


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 06:36:21 Reply

Sorry to interrupt, but gungrounds wont be albe to log in for 2 days.
Thanks


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 08:08:30 Reply

At 7/24/07 06:36 AM, SupraZerg wrote: Sorry to interrupt, but gungrounds wont be albe to log in for 2 days.
Thanks

I guess that leaves myself and MonkeyV in charge, but did he seem to mention why?


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 08:20:20 Reply

About 2 years.
None, but I think i could if i tried.
3. I'm working on the fourth one now.
Dan.

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 08:23:31 Reply

At 7/24/07 06:36 AM, SupraZerg wrote: Sorry to interrupt, but gungrounds wont be albe to log in for 2 days.
Thanks

actually thats not true, i wasnt but now i am, i talked to wade fulp about the huge misunderstanding with the mod "yet again a new mob bans me for something i shouldn't have really been banned for* and wade agreed with me so he unbanned me. Im still here

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 10:13:22 Reply

Don't you just hate new mods? What's the crystallix forum thing for?

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 10:17:16 Reply

At 7/24/07 10:13 AM, 1Housefan wrote: Don't you just hate new mods? What's the crystallix forum thing for?

we get to be our own mods

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 11:28:28 Reply

Hey, I'd like to join, but I haven't written anything besides stuff in grade school. But I'd still like to join because I'm thinking of writng screenplays for movies.


To be or not to be....
You get the idea.

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 12:46:29 Reply

At 7/24/07 11:28 AM, blamninja1 wrote: Hey, I'd like to join, but I haven't written anything besides stuff in grade school. But I'd still like to join because I'm thinking of writng screenplays for movies.

credentials?


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 12:52:59 Reply

3-4 years
0 flash stories
1 real life story
Timmy


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 16:54:35 Reply

At 7/24/07 11:28 AM, blamninja1 wrote: But I'd still like to join because I'm thinking of writng screenplays for movies.

well you came to the write place then. for members who want to do that, we have a group for that. its called the 2 black books. Basically this is the main forum for all of them to join and meet, however we also allow members to strut their artistic ability and chat with other crewmembers

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 17:07:19 Reply

For the first year of writing I tried to write suspense/mystery type novels but god damn every thing I came up with has been done. (damn stephen king) Lately I've been more into making stories out of real life experiences. Although I do have an idea for a novel on the future of mankind. It's gonna stress my political standpoint. But hey, we'll see.

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-24 17:11:05 Reply

At 7/24/07 05:07 PM, Kreator0943 wrote: For the first year of writing I tried to write suspense/mystery type novels but god damn every thing I came up with has been done. (damn stephen king)

You know, just because werewolfs and vampires have been done, you cant be sued for making a novel about it. I mean there are hundreds of those kinds of novels, they cant sue you because just because someone writes about something, it doesnt mean he owns that subject

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-25 08:27:28 Reply

Anybody have ideas for a movie screenplay?


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-25 15:02:12 Reply

Sorry I wasn't around in a bit, my computer broke down and was only fixed today, but it's not totally fixed so I'll need to give it away on Sunday so I won't be around, but I might get something written by then, who knows... I've had some new ideas for "Face in the Sand".


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 11:51:13 Reply

So far, I've written this down:

Fade in:

A huge, epic gladitorial arena is empty, save for two figures in opposite sides of the arena. One figure, bright yellow hair, blue eyes, clad in shiny silver chain mail armor, no helmet, carries a longsword with a light blue aura about it, and a confident expression. The other figure, heavy black spiked armor and helmet, flowing black cape, carries a fearsome double morningstar with various sizes of spikes.

That's all I have so far.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 12:35:35 Reply

sounds like its gonna be awesome! (:


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 12:38:52 Reply

Thanks!


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 12:54:20 Reply

May I recommend we discouragre one line and especially one word posts, I've found it gives the thread a more intelligent side from my knowledge... For more news, I can write, I just don't have a spell checker or the feeling to write...


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 12:54:36 Reply

At 7/25/07 08:27 AM, blamninja1 wrote: Anybody have ideas for a movie screenplay?

Look around at other famous flashes. maybe combine castle series with the unforgotten realms series (in other words, make a high intense flash about this guy fighting certain things, but make a few jokes in between.

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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 13:14:44 Reply

At 7/26/07 12:54 PM, Phantom wrote: May I recommend we discouragre one line and especially one word posts, I've found it gives the thread a more intelligent side from my knowledge... For more news, I can write, I just don't have a spell checker or the feeling to write...

k, ill try to stop doing those one-liners, and also, gunground is right about the castle and and unforgotten realms thing. action and comedy. (:


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 13:25:26 Reply

At 7/26/07 12:54 PM, Phantom wrote: May I recommend we discouragre one line and especially one word posts, I've found it gives the thread a more intelligent side from my knowledge...

Oh, sorry for that. Anyway, I've written some more, hope it's good...

Then the faint foice of an announcer can be heard:

Announcer: People of the Empire, today is the opening of the great tournament, which brings fighters from far and wide to battle for the grand title of ''Champion of Gladiators" .

We hear a low roar of the crowd, which slowly materializes into the seats of the arena, crowd grows louder as the announcer speaks.

Announcer: From Mazuma comes the confident, the young, Lucern!

Crowd cheers, blue flowers rain down on him.

Lucern: (smiles, thrusts up his right hand)

Crowd begins to chant: Lucern, Lucern.

Announcer: ( raises hand to silence crowd, which takes a moment.) And from Carnalia, the dark, the fearsome, Karnalgio the Mace!

Crowd sharply stops cheering and starts to boo. (fully materialized)

Announcer: ( raises hand up again, but booing doesn't cease.)

Karnalgio: (makes the religious signal of his country)

Booing comes to a halt as the Emperor steps into his view. He wears a small frown, but is secretly happy as the crowd goes into a cacophony.

Emperor: ( holds up a small red cloth)

Crowd suddenly stops cheering, waiting.

Emperor: ( drops cloth)

The match starts, the crowd chants Lucern's name again.

The two figures start walking toward each other, ready to battle.

We hear intro to Pink Floyd's ''Obscured by Clouds''.

Just so no one gets confused, the Empire is not Roman, nor the Emperor. Also, I'm taking a vote on who should win the battle, Lucern or Karnalgio, so just pm me and tell me who should win.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 13:32:32 Reply

Also, this isn't intended for a Flash movie, but if anyone would like to make a flash based on my screenplay, I'll be glad to write one intended for Flash.


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Response to Writers Club 2007-07-26 15:17:05 Reply

well anyways if you want in on one of our projects, just pm me and we can talk it out :p