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At 10/3/07 04:14 PM, Centurion-Ryan wrote:

At 10/3/07 02:59 AM, Phantom wrote:

At 10/3/07 12:33 AM, Raymoondo wrote: END
Raymoondo.

Let me be blunt. It was boring, unsatisfying, poorly spelled and with no actual plot. My advice to you is read, read a fucking ton of good books and learn from them.

There's frankness, and there's being an asshole.

Bad move, buddy. Your ass is his. Personally, I agree with Phantom, and not because he'll beat my ass until the next sport I play is in the special Olympics, but because this is a writers crew, where people come to get reviews on what they wrote. Anyone serious about writing wouldn't submit something like that to here.

Bad move, buddy. Your ass is his. Personally, I agree with Phantom, and not because he'll beat my ass until the next sport I play is in the special Olympics, but because this is a writers crew, where people come to get reviews on what they wrote. Anyone serious about writing wouldn't submit something like that to here.

I don't think it matters you could've said It sucks instead of being a jerkoff

Alright, to end further Hostilities, I Declare that everyone get off that subject please, lets get back on topic folks.

At 10/3/07 08:18 PM, gunground wrote: Alright, to end further Hostilities, I Declare that everyone get off that subject please, lets get back on topic folks.

There's a topic? Oh, well then, I'll create a new one.

I'm almost done my sequel to the most controversial story this thread has seen. Personally, I don't think it's as good as the first, since I really only have a 36,000 character with spaces limit, and I want it to be a very long short story, or maybe a short book. So I have to shorten and drop a lot of what I wanted.

Anyone else with a problem like that?

A writers group yes sweet!
How many years have you been writing: From the 3rd grade to the 4th grade.Now not so much
How many flash story's you have written: None
How many real life story's you have written: Only a couple about my experiences
And your name: Devin

alright i am doing a group projectat school with me and my friends we gotta make our own country and well i am gunna write a story about the island so give me some ideas for the story all i got so far is that it is a floating island in outer space the flag of the country is a Griffin and that is it also it is in the future so think people think

Hello everyone! I know it's been terribly long since I last posted, and I sincerely apologize for this. But life and stuff have been happening, the average " I'm sorry Speech" But I truly am. If you need to say something to me, a witty remark, a reply to this comment left her, some form of message, please feel free to send me a Private Message, it's what I check here, and I've fallen out of loop here with no contact from GunGround for several months. So, what I wished to say has been said, and I wish you all a wonderful week.

Hello,I will join this club because ,I like to post this board.I don't good in English but I interest in this club. I think in future. It will have writting contest .

At 10/4/07 05:38 AM, Satayu wrote: Hello,I will join this club because ,I like to post this board.I don't good in English but I interest in this club. I think in future. It will have writting contest .

Ok, Satayu, we probably know that "I ungood at en-glish" is an act, and if it is not, this is a writer's club, and most writers want GOOD GRAMMAR. So stop the act or go to school and learn about grammar.

At 10/3/07 03:48 PM, TheThing wrote: That's actually how I wanted to become a writer; I read Fahrenheit 451 in like 6th grade, and Bradbury drove me to write. But not only that, I was told from an early age that I was a good writer. If you want, I can post some stories from 2nd grade and such.

I'd be more interested in current work than in 2nd grade stories, I remember writing since elementary school, when I wrote short stories in my notebook about super heroes. It was fun...

I was a bit of a maniac last night, and added a Unicorn to 2014. I also killed off Grave, which, as of my last story, you should have guessed.

Hi guys i'm making a story today and i'm posting it later on today.I need you guys to tell me if it's good.I'ts about a scientist named Edgar,a colony of elves and an evil electric king magician named Morzanko.

At 10/4/07 10:56 AM, IrishGun wrote: I was a bit of a maniac last night, and added a Unicorn to 2014. I also killed off Grave, which, as of my last story, you should have guessed.

Fuck.

I forgot to log out of my brother's account. Sorry.

At 10/4/07 08:15 AM, Zodir wrote:

At 10/4/07 05:38 AM, Satayu wrote: Hello,I will join this club because ,I like to post this board.I don't good in English but I interest in this club. I think in future. It will have writting contest .

Ok, Satayu, we probably know that "I ungood at en-glish" is an act, and if it is not, this is a writer's club, and most writers want GOOD GRAMMAR. So stop the act or go to school and learn about grammar.

It looks like a babblefish translation to me. Very much like one in fact, like Japanese to English probably. Most likely he/she is not a native English speaker.

Oh, crap... Sorry. I thought that it was just an act to tick us off. If you really are a non-English speaking person naturally I apologize.

At 10/4/07 10:02 AM, Phantom wrote:

At 10/3/07 03:48 PM, TheThing wrote: That's actually how I wanted to become a writer; I read Fahrenheit 451 in like 6th grade, and Bradbury drove me to write. But not only that, I was told from an early age that I was a good writer. If you want, I can post some stories from 2nd grade and such.

I'd be more interested in current work than in 2nd grade stories, I remember writing since elementary school, when I wrote short stories in my notebook about super heroes. It was fun...

Ah, apparently they were great for some one that old. I could include my art too, if you would like. I'm told it's the aweshum. Well, more funny than aweshum, but still.

At 10/3/07 08:43 PM, TheDog392 wrote: A writers group yes sweet!
How many years have you been writing: From the 3rd grade to the 4th grade.Now not so much
How many flash story's you have written: None
How many real life story's you have written: Only a couple about my experiences
And your name: Devin

are you saying you are in the fourth grade? that would make you, like... ten...

you dont really sound that young, so i welcome you aboard.

hey guys, we are getting the writing proficiency test at school soon and its most likely going to have to be non fiction, so i was wondering if we could have a non-fiction contest, hopefully i would be able to get a story in before my internet gets shut off.

Alright i'm a pretty good writter, I just need ideas or actually more like a topic, give me a one or two sentence description of a story and i'll make that story!

At 10/4/07 07:01 PM, smc316 wrote: Alright i'm a pretty good writter, I just need ideas or actually more like a topic, give me a one or two sentence description of a story and i'll make that story!

the altered life of a young man after he made a revolutionary vehicle that the army bought out from him and his attempt to win back relationships he had ruined in his path to success first using money and then honest apologies and the reaction of people around, include one solid deep speech, one gut wrenching scene and happy ending.

I have shedloads of ideas but I rarely find the time to execute them all, I'll let you write it if you give credit to me for the idea.

At 10/3/07 04:08 PM, Raymoondo wrote: Ooooh Well I was bored and that is what came to mind as "freestyle writing" as someone in this thread put it and if you didn't like it then go fuck your self.

aha...Well Barbie, it seems you can't take a criticism on your work, well then let me cheer up your day you insolent ass-biting moron. You have no talent at all, I'd rather shit into a rat and eat it than read another passage of your "work". I'd rather be the stunt guy on the leg chopping scene of "Saw" than be forced to go through another one of your IQ lowering shit. real writers get headaches when exposed to shit like that, poor fellow members, all must have endured true suffering because of one asshole. And now, if you still don't like me and feel like talking back, go flush your head down the toilet and rid us of one more earthly turd.

Thank you for reading, with no ounce of respect, Phantom-

Wow Phantom, that was a little harsh. I agree it did suck, but... I wouldn't say it sucked that bad. So what, we have probably all written really sucky stories at least once in our life.

At 10/5/07 08:20 AM, Zodir wrote: Wow Phantom, that was a little harsh. I agree it did suck, but... I wouldn't say it sucked that bad.

Trust me, that was being pretty nice for Phantom. If you knew him better, you'd know his rants are legendary. He has anger issues, so when he gets mad, he'll let you know.

So what, we have probably all written really sucky stories at least once in our life.

Yeah, but after posting what he could improve upon, and saying that writing might not be his thing, he posts the same kind of shitty story here, only shorter. Everyone else in this thread has some potential, while Raymoondo currently doesn't have any.

Alright, Everyones entitled to the opinions but please don't be too harsh on your opinions :\. being told you suck at that rate of level really makes writers quit, which is the total opposite of what this clan is about. But I have to agree with phantom, it didn't really grab my attention

At 10/5/07 07:55 AM, Phantom wrote:

At 10/3/07 04:08 PM, Raymoondo wrote: Ooooh Well I was bored and that is what came to mind as "freestyle writing" as someone in this thread put it and if you didn't like it then go fuck your self.

<rant>
reply back and ill kill you for dinner.

wow phantom, a little harsh... but still i laughed.
i guess i should read the story before i give my opinion...

At 10/5/07 06:03 PM, MonkeyV wrote: wow phantom, a little harsh... but still i laughed.
i guess i should read the story before i give my opinion...

Do you honestly think anyone else in the industry would go easier on him, I'm just preparing him for real life replies before he kills himself when some all-mighty publisher says the same to him.

Anyways, Im creating another contest. This time its for the best Gif Banner for the club. The winner will Be granted VIP. Anyone can enter, Simply post a "banner" For the club. Now the rules for this Banner are simple, No racist language and/or pictures, and no sexual content

At 10/6/07 10:27 AM, gunground wrote: Anyways, Im creating another contest. This time its for the best Gif Banner for the club. The winner will Be granted VIP. Anyone can enter, Simply post a "banner" For the club. Now the rules for this Banner are simple, No racist language and/or pictures, and no sexual content

I got people who got people who have people that belong to their people who are working on a banner, I'll get you a nice banner, but I'll take no VIP thing, don't need it. Thank me later.

Meh, Credit to Lebastic. Cool no?

At 10/6/07 04:33 PM, Phantom wrote: Meh, Credit to Lebastic. Cool no?

While that is pretty fucking awsome, it don't look like much of a banner.

I got people who got people who have people that belong to their people who are working on a banner, I'll get you a nice banner, but I'll take no VIP thing, don't need it. Thank me later.

Lol, You already are a ViP for being a black group leader. Btw, I like the banner, but I was thinking more of something that has a book in it.