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At 7/2/07 09:38 PM, majorakirby wrote: Oh...so that's what it's for?

Well, the road looks a bit...vertical. I'm not that good with art-like words, but if you maybe made it less flat, it would look better.

Also, her eyebrows are bothering me. Not sure why...

Yeah, I think I'll just cut the road out as much as possible. Perspective is to complicated. I'll just redraw the eyebrow then later as well.

At 7/2/07 09:39 PM, SmilingIdiot wrote: here dude im not sure if it will help or not its just something i through together fast

Thanks but I'm not going to start over.

At 7/2/07 09:50 PM, Vortex00 wrote: perspective would do wonders

just an example it's not perfect

I'm not sure what you are trying to do/say

At 7/2/07 09:54 PM, Dudeinc wrote: I'm not sure what you are trying to do/say

I think he's showing you what the road should look like.

I copied vortex00's bridge design since it was good. And this is the second to last version. Open on how to make water better, how to make the bridge look more like a foot bridge, and any texturing or shading hints would be grate! I'm going to bed here in about 20 minuets so I probably wont get back to any of you till tomorrow.

Goddammit wrong pic.

Get's better with each post. Keep on, keepin' on.

Here it is, unless anyone sees any major flaws in the next couple hours this is my final piece.