yet another bg that needs judgement

[reality-monkey]

heres yet another bg that i need the mighty ng to judge, and this is for a movie, not like my desktop or sumthing. just be brutal,

[FatalFuryX]

Wow! It's amazing! Just make it a little higher quality (it's blurry right now).

9/10

[reality-monkey]

At 6/14/07 08:07 PM, reality-monkey wrote: heres yet another bg that i need the mighty ng to judge, and this is for a movie, not like my desktop or sumthing. just be brutal,

i didnt know it was that hideous, sorry thisn should be better

[McJesus]

Grass needs to be thinner m'lord.

[FatalFuryX]

MUCH better!

10/10

[Dash-02]

dude your going to hard on yourself but anyways good job still

[reality-monkey]

At 6/14/07 08:18 PM, Dash-02 wrote: dude your going to hard on yourself but anyways good job still

well, i wanna be the best i can be

[BazookaNinja]

Try to make the shading in the rocks smoother. Or, you could make it simpler, with a cartoonish effect.

[reality-monkey]

At 6/14/07 11:57 PM, BazookaNinja wrote: Try to make the shading in the rocks smoother. Or, you could make it simpler, with a cartoonish effect.

ya, cortoonish aint what im going for, but (and this is for everyone) the improvements that ppl say, will probably not be done in this movie, but they will be considered for the next (this is like a trial, first movie)

[OldShape]

Try to draw/shade the grass less like Adam Philips and draw it in as you personally see it.

[reality-monkey]

At 6/15/07 12:13 AM, OldShape wrote: Try to draw/shade the grass less like Adam Philips and draw it in as you personally see it.

thatll require me to redo that whole thing, and i dont wanna do that, and i didnt really copy adam, i just added what needed and this came up
grass is my weakest, but my next movie will be better, as i said this is my first and im just using it as a starting point,

[Winned]

Nice, now just color it in.

[reality-monkey]

At 6/15/07 12:34 PM, Winned wrote: Nice, now just color it in.

it....it is in color

[TomAzza]

fucking great man

finish it up `cause i want to see the movie

[Senri]

That's great. I think you know that it is and just want to show it off ;)

[reality-monkey]

At 6/15/07 05:15 PM, Senri wrote: That's great. I think you know that it is and just want to show it off ;)

no, but it never really hurts to be complimented, thats why ive only put the ones i thought were questionable in their appearence, and i did say to be brutal.

[Nicholas-Deary]

very, very good!

[FatalFuryX]

At 6/15/07 12:45 PM, reality-monkey wrote:

At 6/15/07 12:34 PM, Winned wrote: Nice, now just color it in.

it....it is in color

I think he meant the guy, not the background.

[reality-monkey]

At 6/16/07 09:21 PM, FatalFuryX wrote:

At 6/15/07 12:45 PM, reality-monkey wrote:

At 6/15/07 12:34 PM, Winned wrote: Nice, now just color it in.

it....it is in color

I think he meant the guy, not the background.

well, refining animation comes later, first the bgs

[InkyBoy]

Nice. Birds eye view of that other background you made, I'm assuming?

[reality-monkey]

At 6/16/07 10:03 PM, InkyBoy wrote: Nice. Birds eye view of that other background you made, I'm assuming?

im assuming your talking about the other one, ya this is the same one, just a different angle and zoomed out,

[RTL]

Very nice work. I like the style. That is Well done.

[reality-monkey]

this is still my first, i have alot of ideas to make my stuff better, but its not going to appear in this one, cause id have to remake alot, but this one is my first, and im making this for my friend, so all my other stuff will be better.....just saying

[Lopas1]

It's good, but you could save it with a little hight quality for it's kinda screwed in the ass area for the time :P

[Phoog]

This is fine for a movie. People alway look at the background in more detail if you are going to post it as a still in the art forum.

Just try keep your characters up to the standard of the background and it'll be fine.
Good work.

[MorrowDays]

At 6/14/07 08:10 PM, reality-monkey wrote:

At 6/14/07 08:07 PM, reality-monkey wrote: heres yet another bg that i need the mighty ng to judge, and this is for a movie, not like my desktop or sumthing. just be brutal,

i didnt know it was that hideous, sorry thisn should be better

backing looks GREAT but

please please please please please

don't use madness characters to ruin it.

[Phoog]

At 6/17/07 09:15 AM, MorrowDays wrote: backing looks GREAT but

please please please please please

don't use madness characters to ruin it.

That's jsut a sketch for the outline for his character's models. He'll flesh them out and colour them in and give them eyes and stuff later. Mostly everyone uses this method.

[Acerbic]

I fucking love the grass, 9/10!

[reality-monkey]

cool, thx for the comments, ill use them the next time i make a bg like this (im not gonna rm it, too time consuming) and no, it will not be madness characters.

[Ansel]

At 6/14/07 08:10 PM, reality-monkey wrote: i didnt know it was that hideous, sorry thisn should be better

it looks like a brackenwood bg... It's pretty. The rocks are a little too shiny, though... ,make their colors a little more flat.