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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-11 13:45:27 Reply

At 6/9/07 09:21 PM, Monocrom wrote:
At 6/9/07 08:13 AM, HiniberusDelius wrote: Yeah but I need some people to say "Sure I want in" or somthing like that. But fine I'll do the 1st chapter soon if no one else wants in.
Do what every other Writer on NG does.

1 - Pick out a few Regulars.

2 - PM them, and ask.

I really... really... really don't know why, but for some reason, when you said "Do what every other Writer on NG does." I thought, "TRY TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD!" and then have the Pinky and the Brain theme song play...


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-11 13:57:58 Reply

Is it too late to include me? Again?


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-11 16:29:24 Reply

At 6/11/07 10:00 AM, HiniberusDelius wrote:
So do you like the length of this chapter bitch?
Also wtf happend to Bus-Driver and SCUD14?<corrected

yeah, it seems good. I would also like to know what happens to me.


Stop looking

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-11 18:25:16 Reply

At 6/11/07 04:29 PM, SCUD14 wrote:
Also wtf happend to Bus-Driver and SCUD14?<corrected
yeah, it seems good. I would also like to know what happens to me.

That is also to be figured out, even by me =S.

At 6/11/07 01:57 PM, Black-Ops wrote: Is it too late to include me? Again?

Not at all my friend, just gotta find out how I'll suddenly get you back from where the hell you were befour.


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-12 13:25:34 Reply

"TJ, think we got a problem 'ere" I said
"Huh? What's going on?" He asked
"Bus-Driver and SCUD were here when we left. Something is wrong." I said
"Well no shit?" Dalmo stated

I went out of the ally and looked up and down the street for Driver's car, it was not found.

"Think they ditched us?" Dalmo said
"I'll call him" TJ said "He never left me no matter how shit things went with the deals."

TJ punched in the number to call Driver.

"Driver where the fuck are you!" TJ demanded
"Some of those fuckers chased us; thankfully SCUD really knows when to throw a nade. I'm around the corner get ready to jump in." he added

When TJ cut driver just stoped right in front of me.

"Well get in!" He said very irritated of the fact he couldn't shake the chasers off.

So we all got in, TJ was telling driver where to go when a black BMW started to come right behind us.

"Shit that's the car that was chasing us!" SCUD said
"What you didn't nade it?" I said
"They managed to get out of the way all the time somehow!" He responded
"Well if nades don't work, a good batch of armour-piercing rounds could help." Dalmo said while getting out an M16

Dalmo aimed for the driver and said "Hey wait, isn't that Ops and Kiddmeizter?"
"How the fuck did he fined me?" TJ said
"Yo bus-driver, stop the car" I said
"Umm... I don't know but sure" He said while pulling over to the side

I got out and so did Ops and Kid from their car.

"Yo Ops, how have you been?" I said
"Not bad, I managed to find you by some guy who told us that you were on a mission to kill some gang or something. When he mentioned you and TJ I got Kid and decided to join up with you guys."

So now with the gang back to gather we set off for the hideout of the 'Hells Children' gang, I got out some weapons from the booth and prepared to raid the hideout.


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-30 13:24:11 Reply

I like it! I want in. Plus I've heard ur music and i like it.

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-30 13:25:34 Reply

I win in!!!

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-30 13:25:44 Reply

At 6/30/07 01:24 PM, IPFreely12 wrote: I like it! I want in. Plus I've heard ur music and i like it.

The next chapter that is...

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-30 13:32:12 Reply

At 6/30/07 01:25 PM, IPFreely12 wrote:
At 6/30/07 01:24 PM, IPFreely12 wrote: I like it! I want in. Plus I've heard ur music and i like it.
The next chapter that is...

I changed my mind. I dont want in

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-30 13:33:13 Reply

Can I still get in?


Barev dzez.

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-06-30 14:18:28 Reply

Use the search next time


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-12 21:42:28 Reply

At 6/30/07 01:24 PM, IPFreely12 wrote: I like it! I want in. Plus I've heard ur music and i like it.

Much appreciated, leave a review next time ;-)

Now I don't know why I stopped. I just couldn't come up with anything at all I guess I've also had some problems with my clan and shit w/e.

The break-in:

"Okay, here's the deal. Ops seeing how you have been stealth trained'n’shit you try and find a way in. Either take some cloths from any of the dead guys here or something. Just say you are new and try to get past the security. After go to the security room and be sure to stop recording the security cams and all other equipment that would fuck us up ok?" I said in a hushed voice. Ops nodded in reply, "Hin, what if he is caught or there is a complication?" Tj said." Well let's just say that I didn't get spare ammo for nothing" I answered with a sick smile on my face.
After a few minutes of searching ops found and cleaned a uniform of the gang, slipped it on and searched for any form of identity of its deceased owner. It was an un-natural warm feeling to it as if the flames of hell were embedded into the material of the suit.
Everybody hid as ops knocked on the door. "I don't recognise you! Where you from?" Said the guard behind the steel door. There was a small window so only a part of the face could be seen. He had beady green eyes and seemed to be one that can easily assert authority if needs be.
"I am new here please can you let me in?" Ops asked in a calm voice
"Where's your mentor?" The beady-eyed guard questioned
"He could not make it, he said that he had to make an unexpected visit to the hospital" Ops said while retaining his calm composure.
"Oh you are talking about 1337er-than-you or just 1337 we call him. He's been having some problems lately that not even an arch bishop could help him with. So he had to be taken to one of the modern day hospitals that use all this technology and energy of witch is of no use to us." The guard said "You may come in my brother, I am father klean (Kel-ian) a blessed keeper of the sanctuary with Satan’s power added to my soul for extra strength I was allowed to stay at the door." he added

"Damn this guy talks a lil bit too much eh?" Dalmo complained.
"Well long as every goes like I planned it I don't really care about time, although I'm surprised none of the explosions were heard from in there." I said "Maybe sound proof doors?" I mumbled.

As Ops was walking though the corridor with the satanic star painted at least once on every wall alongside a quote from their bible. Ops was starting to lose his composure and worried that the keeper would notice. Weird thing is every one seemed to be alright and there were no use of drugs or stocks of them. Then Ops peered though a door and found them using the cocaine being added to vile mixtures of other unidentifiable liquids. As the guard saw Ops’s face cringing he mentioned "That's one of our brews used for meditation, it makes the drinker sleep that they listen to our words and accept our blessings." Ops put his hand on his pocket to be sure that hi's trusty beeper was on him, just a push of a button and TJ would know that Ops is fucked. They approached the room of the arch bishop of the cult and the keeper stood outside saying "You must go alone from now, may the blessings of Diablo be with you." Ops was really starting to get nervous, he was brought up in a strict christen environment. Reason how he got into weapon dealing with TJ is because he was broke with nothing to lose.
The room of the bishop was disgusting to the average human. Blood coated the walls, some fresh and still dripping while others were incrusted in the walls for decades. There was a stench, he knew his reeking smell but couldn’t figure out what it was. Only candles lit the room and the flames were dancing like as if they could never be extinguished, a festival including an endless dance that was starting to memorise ops.
To break the silence there was the voice of an old man, dry as a vulture's squawk "Hello my child" he said with the utmost of care for each word he chose. Please tell me about the rituals that you were involved in with my brother 1337.
At this point ops lost it, looking at the teeth that were red, the pale ghostly white skin and the increasing heat from the uniform was too much. He pushed the button of the beeper and TJ said "Well guys, looks like we are gonna do something tonight after all."


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-12 21:51:09 Reply

I want in!


The Lack of content here, Is suprising.

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 16:38:37 Reply

While we were getting the gear out I heard somthing rustleing in the background. As I turned I saw somthing a little bit blond. I wanted to just shoot it but I decided to at least not waste the bullet and see what it was.
As I got closer the blond thing just moved and tryied to take a quick stab to my chest. Completely revealing its self, the person was with blond hair, ornage jump suit and somehow had whiskers on his face. I kick him hard behind both knee-caps got my trusty SAS shotty with one hand and got him in a good headlock in another hand.
"Who the fuck are you?" I demanded


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 17:01:50 Reply

Umm.. I pressed the post it by accident... so here's part 2 :D

An unwanted visitor:

"My...my name is naruto-ninja999" he blurted out. With this TJ's eye started to twitch "WHAAAA ANOTHER NARUTO FAN-BOY!" he practically screamed out loseing his normally relaxed monotone voice completely. "Oh shit" I mutterd, knowing TJ and how much he hates Naruto and all of the fan-boys this guy ain't gonna get out of this with all bodyparts attached. Dalmo musted all of his strenght to keep TJ pinned down with his weight, or at least try to. TJ slipped out like Dalmo was coverd in soap and TJ was like a wet fish, he charged for Naruto who made the mistake of kicking me in the nuts to get out of my lock and jumped onto a roof. "Oh god...my balls...no babies for me I guess" I mumbled under my breath, then again I was never fond of children. After a minute of silent crying for my precious buddies I managed to get up and see that Naruto was looming over me, TJ somehow was not trying to kill the dude but I didn't really care.
"Uuuh, sorry about your nuts mister. I was just afraid of that guy." He said with a shaky voice, somthing told me that he was a child trying to cover up somthing. "Good god, I'm not gonna be able to run for a bit" I lied hopeing he will come close enough for me to get hold of him and blow his head out with my shotty. "Where are the others?" I asked still hearing the crys of my nuts to kill the bastard. "They went inside, told me to stay out here and make sure that you get better." He started to look around avoiding my eyes. He took one step closer and I managed to get a good swing with my right leg into HIS nuts... that is if he had any.
"Oh good god, I hope we are even mister!" he said kneeling on the ground holding his nuts and expression filled with suprise and pure agoney.
"Yeah, now you are going to tell me what really happend." I said standing up with my shotty to his head, this time I made sure that my nuts were not pointing in his general direction.
"A...as I said, th...ey go...in" He said, on the floor just stopping himself from shrieking due to the pain surging through him. "I don't fucking believe you kid." I prepared for another swing at him with my right foot like a soccer player would prepare to do a last ditch shot into the net.
"Oh fuck! Fuck fuck fuck, fine fine! They did go in but one climbed the roof. I saw him with a mobile phone, didn't say who he was going to call!" he said while temporaraly forgot about the pain in between his legs.
"About fucking time you said!" I told him "Now, get out or I'll burn your whole Naruto collection." I added with a sinister smile
His eyes were open wide with the fear of loseing over 100$ in fan-boy items and DVD's so he ran. I climbed to the roof only to see that no one was there. Wondering what the fuck was going on I thought best would be to wait an houre or more until they come or call for help.


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 17:09:02 Reply

Yay new chapter

I hope the Naturo fan dies

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 17:11:09 Reply

i want in.


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 17:56:17 Reply

At 7/13/07 05:11 PM, camobch0 wrote: i want in.

Sure

So now it's been over an hour, just listening to the music on the radio wondering what was going on in there. I had the boot closed, doors locked and windows up. Some guy taps on the window glass, as I turn I face thankfully not the Naruto guy but someone else. I shoo him away but when he shows me a 100$ note I start to get curious what he wants soo badly. I pull down the window, just a crack so he can't do anything stupid but still talk to me.
"Yeah, what you want?" I said. "I beleive my boss told me that you were ment to take care of a situation, I've been following you to make and submitt process reports to him. May I ask why you are in the car doing nothing?" The man said, I had to see what I can say. Might as well be the truth seeing that he's been watching. "Well after I recoverd from my incident with that kid they were all gone. I was waiting in here to see if the rest would come out. They havn't said anything so I'm begining to worry." I said
"So you know the kid was right, they all did go in." He said with a small chuckle added
"Oh well, do you have any tracers on them or anything for me to find them?" I asked
"Umm no, I was just told to watch you. So you know my name is camobch0 or just cam for short. " he said, a lil bit embarrised about how his nick name sounded.
"Alright, I'll go in and try to find them then." I said getting out of the car with all my weapons ready.
I pushed the door and it opend, I heard alot of gunshots so there must have been sound-proofing for some reason or another. I closed the door quickly as to avoid any outside attention and ran with my SAS shotty out to the direction of the gunfire.
I found them and let me tell you, this was the closet bit to hell I'd ever go to befour I died. Blood encrusted walls, people nailed to the wall and their blood dripping in cups, others with a large hole in their chest and more grousome unexplicable things in the room. I looked over the railings they were sourronded by the cultists all with mele weapons such as daggers and swords. Dalmo seemed to enjoy finally haveing a good mele fight, while the rest were just being mowed down by showers of lead spewing out from the guns. I decided to take advantage of my position and chucked a few nades over and managed a nice amount of dead considering the fact that they were just 2 nades. I saw somthing moveing, a rather old man so to speak hobbleing to a door that I didn't notice. I ran after him and kicked the door as he attempted to close it with his little body I easily opend it and flung him back a bit. He attmpetd to scramble back to his feet, only pinned down by my self foot on his chest and my shotty pointing to his crow like face.
"Where are your drugs!" I commanded him to tell me. "Drugs? We know of no such thing, yet we do have special powders for our needs." He skawked. "Take me to them or may your god help you." I said with a sinister tone. "He shall" the man replied simply, "just not now. In the after life my soul shall be stronger than yours and tear you apart!" he added with a preacher like voice. I let him get up and he opend a vault filled with a lifetime supply of drugs, a junkie's heaven. "Here they are, just please let me live." he begged. "I will, just tell me where your other places with this stuff are located." Note letting him out of my sight he went to a desk and took out a map with a lot of circles on it. There was a small index, the orange ones were the places with the drugs. I didn't really really care. "Will you let me go?" He asked "Well you are important, will you make your followers stop?" I said, with that and one hand with the shotty pointed to his head. The other in my pocket putting the map away. We left the room and he said "My follwers, please stop. If you continue fighting I shall be killed. Not as a sacrifice so my death will mean nothing to our god. Stop fighting so I shall die a meaningful death to our god." With this they instantly stopped, there was a loud bang and the hawk like man fell off the railing, onto the floor.

OH SNAPS! WHAT NOW!

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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 19:50:03 Reply

I like the idea of adding in a cult to the story , gives it twist that's original. Plus i love the suspense used at the end of each chapter

Therefore , bumped


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 21:18:45 Reply

At 7/13/07 05:56 PM, HiniberusDelius wrote: OH SNAPS! WHAT NOW!

Now this is the part that I tell you what happens D:

Even I was suprised that he was killed, I mean I didn't shoot anything (At least not fornow). As I turned I saw Kidd behind me with his own version of the M82 berretta on his back and a coustom made revolver. With their leader dead they did not know what to do at all. I knew what I had to do though, I ran back outside to see that camobch0 was still there.
"Hey, you made it out alive. What you need?" He asked happily
"I need you to call the boss, if he wants there is a HUGE stash of drugs in a vault. The followers aren't doing anything, like they had some mental connection with the leader. Now seeing that he's daead they all seemed to "Shut down" so to speak." I infomed him
"Hmm, boss might be happy enough to give you a raise if the stuff is of good quality."
"Also" I added "If he has a weak stomach I suggest he dosn't go in, there's some fucked up shit in there man."

The rest came out and I got the map onto the roof of the car. I serched for where we were and made a small hole in the orange circle to show that place is done for. What I did notice though it that there was only one place with a red circle and another with a blue circle. There were not on the index for some reason. "TJ, come 'ere" I said "Yes?" he asked. I told him about the map and the 2 unknown circles, "Well then, let's tell the stalker see if he realises anything." TJ whisperd. "Yo camobch0 come and take a look at this map, there are some marks that weren't on the index, do you notice anything?" I said
"Oh shit, they must have somthing going on in our orginisation. The red one shows our main wearhouse stash and the blue one is boss's usual house. I'll tell him about this, there must be some of the shits over here being moles." he said frustratedly "Did you see anything on their bodyies that made them all seem the same? A tatoo or pierceing anything?" he asked
"I know, they do the HC (Hell's Children) mark on their chest, above the heard and another on on the right thigh. It's the satanic star with a child in the middle of it, the star is usually red and the child looks like a person, black hair with a pale face, red eyes and black cloathing with the satanic star on it." Said ops from behind
"Alright, we'll have security shoot any bastards with their mark on them. As for the house, we'll do the same and keep boss in another pent house."
Cam started to call the boss as we went off back to my apartment as it was the closest. Tomorrow we go to another one, report the stash to cam and repeat until we find asassin.


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May I join?


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-13 21:23:58 Reply

I had to look up what the Hells Children mark was

Ah well , i liked the story , keep up the good work


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-14 07:07:51 Reply

Disclaimer if you have a weak stomach you might want to just "Jump" though this chapter

The dream:

From what I can remember this is what happened. We all stayed at my place, and then I saw something move. Now knowing that I just came back from one of the many hideouts of a fucked up cult I was rather paranoid of anything. I didn't find my SAS but a good Winchester suited me. I looked around to see if I could find the thing, just sitting there really proved to do jack shit for me. So then I got up, something cold touched my head. It slithered around my neck and covered my mouth in one quick motion I was knocked out. I awoke to a boot to the head; I quickly got up remembering the smell of the stuff that knocked me out. Had to be chloroform I guessed, it was cheap and did its job pretty well.
As I looked around reality seemed to bitch slap me in the face and all my senses kicked in. From what I saw there were blood encrusted walls, with internal organs somehow used as a decoration. Stomachs, Intestines, gonads you name it, it was hanging on the wall. The smell, of rotting corpses, sewage and other disgusting things. I started to gag but when I started to breath from my mouth it was worse. The air got stuck to my lips, tasting it.
I summoned all my strength and grabbed a railing in front of me, what I saw would haunt me for the rest of my years. Two tables, a person laying down on each. I had a perfect view of what was happening, the holes witch once accommodated their precious eyes were gone. The ears had been cut down all the way to the base to reveal two holes. Blood spewing out from the hands as they cut off the fingers and toes with knifes that became blunt, blood coated hence rusty over time. This created even more pain as it was harder to get off the fingers and toes. Some how the victim has not died yet of shock, no they did not stop there they continued to cut the nose in half, and then cut it all off. They got the same knife they have been using and cut a deep gash within the stomach. They got salt at least one whole 500G packet and dumped it into the wound, from what I could her "for purifying purposes". Then they got an acid, not sure that it was maybe dilute hydrochloric acid. A good one litre and did the same as for the salt. They proceeded to remove the intestines and other organs. Due to my disgust, I did not realise the rather large mark of the HC on the wall where the victims were facing. I looked away, attempted to calm down and check if I crapped my pants. Thankfully I did not.
I head some chanting, with it came a rather large quake. As I looked I found somthing hideous, it had blue skin, and steel claws the length of a human fist. The legs were covered in orange marking. The cultists moved out of the way and the demon I suppose devoured the body that was dissected and had the organs removed.
"Delius? DELIUS!" I heard a voice; I awoke to TJ shaking me violently. In actual fact I was shivering, warm sweat covered my face and I felt cold. "Wha...what happened?" I asked shaking. "I have no damn clue I just woke up and found you shaking like you were having an epileptic fit." He said slowly most probably due to the fact that he just awoke.


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-18 12:16:35 Reply

Loving the new chapter , so i thought i'd bump it for everybody's enjoyment


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Response to Another BBS story 2007-07-19 14:05:17 Reply

A Bad night, not much better for this day.

Odd name I know

God, I've never felt this shit for a while. I checked my self to see if my bladder went out of controll as well, luckely I did not. I did rush to the bathroom to have a quick leak... and a puke after.
"TJ, get me my stong mints" I said while needeing the mints to make the stench and taste of the puke to fuck off. "Ere you go, pretty fucked up night for ya?" he asked the rehtorical question while handing me the mint. "Ugh, thanks" I managed to grunt.
"Delius, what the fuck?" Scud asked, "Just a shit dream dude, I don't want to talk about it." I said with a frosty tone. "Well I've been cooped up here so I don't know what made you act like that dude." Scud complained childishly. "Just leave Delius alone, I know what fucked him up. Same thing happend to me, I didn't sleep either." TJ interupted SCUD befrour he could say anything else to piss me off.
"So, what now?" Dalmo asked. The phone started to ring as he finished, I picked it up and it was that guy who got us into this thing in the first place.
"Hello, is this mister Delius speaking?" Said the deep and bassy tone, "It is, what do you want?" I said trying to remove the sleepyness from my voice.
"Just wanted to say that the hideout you busted had some very good quality stuff in it. I'll be sure to compensate you extra for when this is all over. An extra bonus also for the fact that I had to kill about seven of my so called "Workers" for they were with the groupe too."
"Thanks, I'll keep you informed okay?" I said
"Don't need to worry about thatI got some connections that keep an eye on you when you leave for another one of their hideouts. The faster you kill 42242IN the better, it's him that is being the biggest bitch of them all."
"I'll do it fast as I can." I said and then cut.
I started to hear some sirens and some one on the megaphone said "Hiniberus Delius, get out now! There has been some information that a band of high pirority criminals recideing within your appartment. Get out so we can raid it!"
"Shit! Okay guys I know where you can hide, come with me." I went into the bathroom and punched the mirror hard. The glass did not break and a room appeard next to the sink, they went in and I punched the mirror again to close the room.
"Delius, please come out NOW!" said the officer, as he said now I poped out from the main door.
"Alright, serch I just had to put some cloaths on. I tend to sleep in the nude." I lied it worked too as I watched the officer flinch a bit when I said 'nude'.
"Okay, just go to the local cafe or somthing and get somthing to eat from there." He said
Even though I didn't want to take orders from a newbie I did go and get somthing to eat, for some reason I can never start the day properly without my 'brekkie'. When I came back the officers told me that I should be more careful.
"May I ask how these people got such high priority?" I asked
"Well as you may have noticed there has been a sharp decline in drug dealing from a few nights ago. Reason being that they were all slaughterd, last night someone called leeter-than-you came and told us that there were about five people who managed to cause a massive salughtering. When he explained to us in great detail the people another person called and said that they were entering your apartment the other night. Hence the reason why we came here, seeing that they left through a back door or somthing we'll be on our way then. Sorry about the disturbance mister Delius, have a good day"
Pff, a good day eh? Things seem pretty fucked up right now.
I went back in and punched the mirror to let the others out, I told them that someone reporeted you guys by some one called leeter-than-you. With this Ops's eyes started to widen and bulge out with fear. "H...he was the one that esourted me to their bishop, the crow faced guy!"
"Shit, we have a problem." TJ said
"Yeah and it just got worse." Dalmo said ominously
"Eh?" Scud said baffled, then turned only to find about twent HC gangesters with guns ready drawn.
"Okay, this is the part where I go OH SHIT SON!" I shouted

Oh shit son indeed D:

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I want in, please


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Oh shit son!

Yes that's the chapter title

When we last left off our main- Oh fuck it!

"Hmm... twenty armed gansters managed to sneak in? The police just left so... isn't this kinda awkward?" Ops asked with a bead of sweat running down his neck. "Hey look, the shit bag owner of the place had one whore of a girl." One of the gangsters said, he had a sorta broken voice and was looking at the picture of my long dead wife. I loved her dearly and for some one who only burdens society to say such a think was unthinkable. My eyes started to bulge, not scared due to the fact that this might be my last day on this earth... no they were bulging out with rage and fury.
"D...Delius?" Tj asked, stammering. "Dalmo... where is your sword?" I asked with a death impending tone. "'ere you go." he gave it to me with some hesitation. The worthless gangsters just laughed as I had a melee while they had their guns. I took the sword out and something odd happened, it lost its shape and became longer, with spikes budding out. I experimented with this and increased my rage the blade became more brutal this time dripping blood, it was blood lust getting to me and I couldn't give more of a fuck.
I sprinted to them while they were either laughing or in awe at the massive blade. The first target was the one who insulted my wife. I did a quick 360 spin to gain extra momentum and made a slash that not only created a gash so deep that the internal organs were visible but blood spewed out like a huge dam broken due to the pressure of the water. I felt the blood on me and savoured its warmth. After the death of their comrade they aimed and attempted to shoot, I feigned a slash drew back and made a furious stab with great precision the blade went through and the lungs were visible from behind him. One of the gangsters puked and the other raced for the door.
"Oh fuck no!" I said with a malevolent tone as I drew out a knife from my pocket and managed to throw it at the back of the running gangster's head. It slid in like as it his head was meant to be the seethe for it. As for the one that puked I stomped on his face and used it to partly wipe the floor. Then I got him to the kitchen where I opened the door of the fridge and slammed his for head on it until he screamed "WHAT DO YOU WANT!!" I said "You to be dead." After a few more slams the guy's skull finally cracked open hence killing him after his 3 minute torture. (I let him wither a bit between each smash to let him wallow in the pit of pain I wanted him to be in.)
"Okay... now I know not to make fun of Delius's past." Ops mumbled to him self.


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You know some comments from the general NG public would be apprciated


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At 7/23/07 06:52 AM, HiniberusDelius wrote: You know some comments from the general NG public would be apprciated

I remember that this started before the re design so it should be okay for me to continue here.
To stop using "He said" ect I'll try out a new way for dialogues. Tell me if you like it more.

A new home:

TJ: Holy shit Hin, a bit of an over-kill right there?
Hini: You know how I am 'bout my past man, don't even think of going there

I gave Dalmo his sword back, I was guessing that I was hallucinating about the added spikes. Guess rage can really mess with your head.

TJ: Hmm, they know where you live Delius. You should get what you can and stay at my place
Hini: Guess it is time that I moved on, it's been a while and guess I should.

So I packed my bags and called an agency to say that I wanted my house to be on sale. At least like this I can get a nice chunk of cash in my pocket.

Dealer: All right Mr.Delius, we will put it up for £250 grand. (£ for Euros not Sterling)
Hini: Fine with me, when some one wants to buy it just tell me.

With that I cut and got in the car

TJ: Oi driver, off to my place.
Driver: What the hell? No one told me 'bout luggage. What are we going to do?
Hini: Dude, I have my car. It should be fine. I'll follow behind you.

So with that we made our was to TJ's.

Hini: Dude this is just your store.
TJ: Nope, this is the ground floor. The upper floor is for residence and the two basements are for when we have a celebration.
Mind you by "Celebration" that tends to either mean one hell of a deal went well or a good stripper party.

Hini: All right, show me to my room and let me familiarise my self with the place.

So TJ showed me around and notified me about some useful exits in case something happens.

TJ: Hiniberus, I would suggest that you do not show up at most of the celebrations. Most of the people here do not like police. You may have helped me but not them, the selfish rat-bastards would gun you and me down without hesitation.

Hini: Sure, I'll stay outta the way for ya.
TJ: So got any plans? I gave the map to Cam so I say we should just wait and see what happens.
Hini: Ugh, sure if we do nothing the'll eventually come for us to say why we ain't doing anything or inform us in some way.

What is going to happen now? With the gang down who knows what the monopoly will do the us. Find out next time when I can be bothered to do another chapter!

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