Her!

[crazerfish50]

here. i've taken MOST of you're advice. i'm screwwing anime (mostly) and doin some kind of anime/realism art! this is one of my best sketches ever. i'm not that great, but good god, you have to admit this is better than the crap i usually post. thanks to the people who did support me by the way. here it goes.....

[Phoog]

All seems to be pretty good except for the face and the hair.

But not bad. Keep practising.

[crazerfish50]

At 6/5/07 02:46 PM, Gorglore wrote: All seems to be pretty good except for the face and the hair.

But not bad. Keep practising.

you don't know how much that meant to me. thanks. i've turned over a new leaf guys, a new leaf.

[Nobbin-Robin]

dude i just saw this in your other thread. If you have an art thread stick to it. Don't just spam the forum.

[poolkill]

She's standing kind of weird, and the proportions aren't quite right. The head is a 9th (correct me if i'm wrong) of the full body size. Oh yeah, arms go down to a bit after the hip. And isn't bent.

[crazerfish50]

At 6/5/07 02:48 PM, poolkill wrote: She's standing kind of weird, and the proportions aren't quite right. The head is a 9th (correct me if i'm wrong) of the full body size. Oh yeah, arms go down to a bit after the hip. And isn't bent.

thanks. i thought the arms were a little short.

[Felis]

At 6/5/07 02:48 PM, poolkill wrote: She's standing kind of weird, and the proportions aren't quite right. The head is a 9th (correct me if i'm wrong)

Lengthwise of the body, about, but the head is aso just about as wide as the chest, so it certainly isn't tiny.

It's also different for shorter or taller people, which is obvious. No one is exactly alike.

[Nobbin-Robin]

At 6/5/07 02:50 PM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Arms too short.

not to mention she doesn't have a left one.

[crazerfish50]

At 6/5/07 02:54 PM, Nobbin-Robin wrote:

At 6/5/07 02:50 PM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Arms too short.

not to mention she doesn't have a left one.

it's behind her body.

[TomAzza]

you`ve JUST posted this in another thread......

god you`ll never learn.. don't post new threads for crap like this.

i said it before, it`s an improvement, but hat doesn't make it good...

the anatomy is fucked up, and so are the proportions...

keep practicing, and you`ll see you`ll keep improving.. that`s for sure.

but refrain from making a thread for every pic you make....and dont whore this one around too much.. you might be proud of it right now, but if you keep posting it everywhere people will start getting pissed off...

[Nobbin-Robin]

At 6/5/07 02:57 PM, crazerfish50 wrote:

At 6/5/07 02:54 PM, Nobbin-Robin wrote: not to mention she doesn't have a left one.

it's behind her body.

well that's kinda awkward. Only in mid-pelvic thrust have i seen that, maybe put some indication of it's existence by putting a hand on her waist.

[test-object]

At 6/5/07 02:44 PM, crazerfish50 wrote: here. i've taken MOST of you're advice.

NO? wow?

i'm screwwing anime (mostly) and doin some kind of anime/realism art!

Huzzah!

this is one of my best sketches ever. i'm not that great, but good god, you have to admit this is better than the crap i usually post.

True. But it still isn't very good. Just keep on sketching. You'll learn with the years.

thanks to the people who did support me by the way.

Not me, that is!

here it goes.....

hehe... it.

[Luis]

this is spam. you already have your own thread where you are actually getting good feedback.