iNinja Art!

[FatalFuryX]

Hey guys! Here is a little sample of my character for a game I am developing (iNinja) You can see a sample of the game on the link in my sig.

Can you give me some pointers on how to improve him?

[StoneColdSoul]

Make the sword straighter and the hair... more hairy.

But other than that good.

[Dark-Spark]

well first of all the sample links on your beta page are dead =(
his body looks too skiny and the head looks too big for it but thats probably just a wierd style you made up. the sword looks like crap though, clean that bitch up

[SmilingIdiot]

if your gonna keep the sword at least give em big hands...and big feet...and since his heads big it might look like a cool style...that or clean that sword up and work on the hair...put lines it it or make it sharper(anime style sharper)

[Basset-Hound]

Do you know that there is already a game called I-Ninja on the Ps2?

[SnakeSkull]

I like that sword except it looks kinda dull.

[OldShape]

zzzzzzz *wakes up* did someone post something that doesnt have an anime influence?...
no oh okay zzzzz.

[FatalFuryX]

... here is a new design I made.

Thanks for the suggestions!

[The-Eagle]

At 6/2/07 02:05 PM, OldShape wrote: zzzzzzz *wakes up* did someone post something that doesnt have an anime influence?...
no oh okay zzzzz.

zzzzzzz... huh? did a retard post? THERE WAS??? oh wait, no one cares about his opinion? oh well. zzzzzz...

[FatalFuryX]

At 6/2/07 10:51 PM, The-Eagle wrote:

At 6/2/07 02:05 PM, OldShape wrote: zzzzzzz *wakes up* did someone post something that doesnt have an anime influence?...
no oh okay zzzzz.

zzzzzzz... huh? did a retard post? THERE WAS??? oh wait, no one cares about his opinion? oh well. zzzzzz...

zzzzzzz.... does that post have nothing to do with the picture? Oh wait it does? oh well. zzzzzzzzz...

[The-Eagle]

At 6/2/07 10:53 PM, FatalFuryX wrote: zzzzzzz.... does that post have nothing to do with the picture? Oh wait it does? oh well. zzzzzzzzz...

lol, sorry about that.
Anyways, the first one, you should consider reshaping the blade and using the smudge tool on the hair (if your using photoshop)
as for the second one, well... it makes it look like you stole the first one.

[FatalFuryX]

LOL!!!!! Yah... I just made this one because a couple of people said stickmen were cool for the game... I know it sucks. (I like the sword in the second one though)

[FatalFuryX]

Update! I changed the first guy around to make him more ninja-ish. Suggestions please!

[test-object]

Wider body + smaller hands. It might be you style, but the hands are TOO big.

[SnakeSkull]

Make the first sword sharper.

[FatalFuryX]

How's this?

[BlackmarketKraig]

At 6/3/07 03:25 PM, FatalFuryX wrote: How's this?

Fuck that, I vote for big hands, it's more interesting and stylistic. The question is are you going to be able to keep your graphics consistant throughout the animations? Can you draw the same character running/jumping/whatever in the same style?

[FatalFuryX]

Thanks for the suggestions guys!

Here is the newest version...

[TomAzza]

looking even better :D

as said above, bigger hands is better....

i love to see as the character develops like this...

[FatalFuryX]

At 6/4/07 05:10 PM, TomAzza wrote: looking even better :D

Thanks =)

as said above, bigger hands is better....

Meh... I already started animating.... you can't really tell in a game though so bleh =P

i love to see as the character develops like this...

Cool =) Me too.

Thanks for the comments!

[InkyBoy]

Whats with the iPod?
Other than that, not bad.

[FatalFuryX]

Heh, read first post. iNinja = iPod Ninja = plot in game = weeeeeeee!

Check out the game in the link in my sig (iNinja) the newer game is farther in the thread.

[Un-plugged]

At 6/4/07 05:33 PM, InkyBoy wrote: Whats with the iPod?
Other than that, not bad.

No way did you just ask that...........
Anyway i played the beta game it was ok and i like how you have evolved the character as the stickman would of got a lot of crit just for being that and i hope the things you fight get a revamping because they didn t look great but keep up the work look forward to playing it!