Something is out there

[Sytheus]

Last night, I was having a dream, and was interrupted by a bright white light and a strange figure dressed in black robes, and another one next to it dressed in whitish beige robes.
I was told that when I answered to their questions I would use the word "Lord" and nothing but "Lord" before I responded. The black robed figure asked me, "Son, do you believe in god?" "Lord, no I do not" I replied. Moments later, the white robed figure asked me " Son, do you believe in satan?" I replied with the same as the previous. Then the white robed figure asked me one last question. "Son, would you like to live tonight?" "Yes I replied." The white robed figure gave me a sad look and then glanced at the black robed figure. "You didn't say Lord." I was instantly suspended into a black vortex, spiriling, and spiriling into what seemed an ever lasting abyss. I later woke to the smell of something terrible, and the sound of something terrible. I could smell it quite well, it was strong, and it was coming from my closet. The sound was terrifying, it was scratching, and with a deep, low, heaving sound, also coming from my closet. I got the courage to get up out of my covers and peek into the closet. As soon as my nose got an inch away from the hole, I was blown away by the smell. It smelt of 1000 rotting corpses, or perhaps, just one. I thought I must have been dreaming, but I don't think i was. I opened the closet ever so slowly and cautiously. There I saw the most horrifying image I had ever seen. There i was, my self, a copy, dangling from three hooks suspended from the ceiling, two in both of my ears, and one cut through my chin into the bottom of my mouth. I started to scream, and before any sound could be let out, my mouth was covered by a strange hand, and then, blackness.
I later awoke, again in my bed, and peered up, extremely frightened of what had just happened. I then saw the two robed figures again, except this time, the white robed figure had blood stains on his white glimmering robe. "Son, you have been consumed with darkness from hell, you're time has come." I then asked the figure why I must die, and where I will go. He said that information is soon to come to me, and bid farewell. He then vanished. Unknowing of what was to happen next, I went into my parents bedroom to get some comfort. I screamed, i yelled, i pounded my fists against the walls. There, they also had been struck by the hooks. There, 6 hooks suspended from the ceiling, into 6 parts of their body, and precisly at 6:00 AM. The sign of the devil, i thought to myself. This was it, i was really going to die. I saw, what it looked like to be a demonic figure, holding a scythe, with green sprits flying from it chanting weird sayings in a tongue of nothing I've ever heard of. He came closer, swung, and blackness, once again.

[Smokinggun64]

Intense. I can't wait to see what happens next.

[Girouette]

Mai dercas?

[Ushnor]

At 5/28/07 11:25 PM, Girouette wrote: Mai dercas?

!!!

[Sytheus]

Thanks, i hope more people read it

[Flameo-Ninja]

LOOK OUT FOR THE GHOST PANTHER!!!

Or should I say Phantom Panther.

[superstick]

your A good fiction wrighter

[gamedude107]

so your posting this on newgrounds?

[Sytheus]

At 5/28/07 11:59 PM, superstick wrote: your A good fiction wrighter

thanks!
yah i post this on newgrounds because.. i don't know, it was cool thought that came to my mind

[GerbilAttack]

18 and your crying to your parents?

[Icecry0]

Omfg I wanna write a story!
But i'm to lazy
So I wont
Maybe tommorow
Dunno
YAY!
:D
I'm going to plagerizim your story now to my essay
JK!
:D
...
hi!

[ripoffhitman]

Eh, that was pretty good i guess. But if you want to write a story you need to use more adjectives. Because otherwise everything is hard to picture and nobody wants to read a story that they cant picture. That is all, pretty weird story, but I expect that you were aiming for that.

[Kronkus]

At 5/28/07 11:17 PM, MiracleFruitClock wrote: paragrafs

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