My friend and I are making a comic in our spare time and she mostly does the art work because our comic is in anime form but this one picture was made by me.I don't ussually do anime so i would really like some critique on this picture.
lol, anime emotes are the best ^_^
It looks great!
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for anime its pretty good, you've done alot with shading etc. but I think its a bit lacking in facial expression and pose. shes just standing there, which is rather uninteresting.
it'd be really cool if you drew her sitting on a rock while smirking, because smirking is hard to master, and having her on a rock would be good practise for position and body language.
Not bad, I can definately see the anime influence. I like the general darkeness and the hair is pretty nifty.
One major flaw is that her shoulders are not equal. Also her mouth seems a bit odd as anime girls don't really have lips most of the time.
Anyway, good job. =]
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At 5/28/07 09:13 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote:
One major flaw is that her shoulders are not equal. Also her mouth seems a bit odd as anime girls don't really have lips most of the time.
thanks ya i see what you mean about the mouth.She's really just standing behind them talking.
grr... i hate anime...
but the shadings ok.
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