Upcoming flash movie!

[TheGriffenFreak]

Ok so i am making another flash skating movie! BUT WITH NO STICKMEN!
Well i have wiped up some examples of what i have so far! Please critize!

http://denvish.net/ulf/250507/63560_skate_vid eo.php

[DarkScythes]

It was ok I guess :/
work on the art and the animation a bit more. And DEFINATTLY add sounds.

[TheGriffenFreak]

Thx, yes i will only add sounds if this is worth it

[TheGriffenFreak]

anyone?

[Schmut]

Sound would definately improve it. Doesn't need to be skating sounds. Just add some music to it and it will automatically improve.

The art and animation, as also already stated, could do with some work but it is decent.
It did all seem a bit slow and mundane. If you work on your art and maybe have some parts where the camera follows the skater rather than remain static, I think it would look a lot better.
So sound, artwork and some camera movement would vastly improve this.
Keep up the good work.

[flip-finger]

it was pretty good but you should add sounds,and when he bails from the building you should make him bleed a bit haha

[MarioBilly]

its good, its good

my only advice is make it move s little bit more hes kind of still riding that skateboard

[Blue-Devil23]

Not bad, but not that good either.

[Dash-02]

looks good :]

[chillyphilly]

Try and actually animate the character when he does a trick, even when he ollie's. All youve done is motion tween and stretch and rotate the skater.
You have to try and make him look like the board isnt stuck to his feet and give the board some pop. Animate his arms and legs moving, make him twist, turn, and shit like that so it looks a little more realistic.
Work on the art, take your time on animating the character, have patience, add some music, possibly some sounds and maybe even a story line...and then you've got a pretty good skate flash on your hands.
Ive actually made one, it's called Skater Kid. One of my first animations, simple character design so the animating of him wasnt too tedious and allowed me to not get frustrated and I enjoyed making it. I put my music in early so I could sync up some things with my movie. I do regret that I only used the one camera angle though. Mix it up, make it hectic.