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Some nice critique of my art?

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Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 00:36:08


This is just one of the better drawings I've done..Any advice on making it look nicer would be appreciated. Plus, post your own art! =)

Some nice critique of my art?

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 00:46:39


Dear God. Does anyone on this Earth possess just a shred of originality anymore?

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 01:13:32


At 5/24/07 12:46 AM, Dusty-Gorilla wrote: Dear God. Does anyone on this Earth possess just a shred of originality anymore?

I suppose I should add that I sketched this from a manga I read..my apologies =/ I would also like to add: please give only appropriate critiques/comments..please, no flaming. I am asking for advice, not insults. Thank you.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 01:41:21


The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 01:49:20


At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Yeah, hands are something I have a little bit of trouble with...they look easy though!

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 02:46:23


At 5/24/07 12:46 AM, Dusty-Gorilla wrote: Dear God. Does anyone on this Earth possess just a shred of originality anymore?

What he said.

And if you traced this from a manga you read, then technically you are stealing art as well.

Well fucking done.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:10:51


At 5/24/07 02:53 AM, ShirtTurtle wrote:
At 5/24/07 02:46 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: And if you traced this from a manga you read, then technically you are stealing art as well.
i don't think he traced.
he just did the whole, draw what i see thing.

but i think its a good start.
We can't be asking for much more at the moment.

She, and yes I did the whole, "draw what I see" thing. AKA "sketching". I don't usually draw only because I'm no good at drawing from scratch..gotta have somethin to look at. Thank you for the comment. ^_^

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:25:22


Just fix those fingers..

.. NOW! XD and repost the updated drawing

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:37:54


Is the hand extended toward you?
Or is it on the face?
Its pretty good just the hand is fucked.

other then that lets see you draw something from your head.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:44:18


xD I would, but I'm afraid to mess it up...

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:45:37


At 5/24/07 03:37 AM, DeadAlias wrote: Is the hand extended toward you?
Or is it on the face?
Its pretty good just the hand is fucked.

other then that lets see you draw something from your head.

Yeah, the hand is on the face...like I said earlier, I'm not the best drawer..this happens to be my favorite (and best)

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:46:52


The inside of the ear can use some work too -_-;

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:54:00


At 5/24/07 03:46 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The inside of the ear can use some work too -_-;

;-; I didn't realize how many mistakes I made...

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:54:46


Well im sure with practice you'll make vortex happy.
Since he's a pro at drawing anime.

Other than that you should make your own character and build it up, im betting in 6 months that character will be B material, and in a year A
Depending on how much you practice.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:56:38


At 5/24/07 03:54 AM, Dark-Angel07 wrote:
At 5/24/07 03:46 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The inside of the ear can use some work too -_-;
;-; I didn't realize how many mistakes I made...

Spider leg finger guy -_-;

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 03:57:45


At 5/24/07 03:54 AM, DeadAlias wrote: Well im sure with practice you'll make vortex happy.
Since he's a pro at drawing anime.

Other than that you should make your own character and build it up, im betting in 6 months that character will be B material, and in a year A
Depending on how much you practice.

Yeah..I sketched that drawing last year..I don't really draw that much anymore. I'm more a poet than I am a drawer. I'll see what I can do to do as you suggested though.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 04:09:26


At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Was the plug really necessary? That's like the door greeter at Wal-Mart saying "Thanks for shopping at Wal-Mart, my anus is between my buttcheeks."

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 04:15:26


At 5/24/07 04:09 AM, Stamper wrote:
At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.
Was the plug really necessary? That's like the door greeter at Wal-Mart saying "Thanks for shopping at Wal-Mart, my anus is between my buttcheeks."

forgive my ignorance.. but I dont know what you mean by "the plug" ><

She had typed:

Plus, post your own art! =)

so I just linked it? =/

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 08:00:47


At 5/24/07 03:10 AM, Dark-Angel07 wrote: She, and yes I did the whole, "draw what I see" thing. AKA "sketching". I don't usually draw only because I'm no good at drawing from scratch..gotta have somethin to look at. Thank you for the comment. ^_^

Ah, I remember those days, drawing what I see.... But yeah, fix that hand! Long fingers kind of creep me out...even if it is drawn.


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Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 08:18:30


Use an eraser to put a glint in her(?) eyes.

Also; I don't know what the original picture looks like, but I like the crazy long fingers. I mean if you can have ginormous anime eyes you should be able to have some creepy long fingers as well. Bodily distortion is fun. =]


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Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 08:59:07


do you know who had long hands?...freddy...and you know what happen to freddy?....ppl teesed his skinny long fingered ass...know what freddy became?....a serial killer....you know how much that pays?....media attention,book,fame,...and a lifetime of ppl knowing you...pricless.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 09:12:12


I'm sorry but can someone post some more stuff besides anime you fucking kids are all brainwashed. Sure i like anime but there's so friggin much of it out there that posting a picture of anime is pretty pointless nowadays


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Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 09:48:01


At 5/24/07 08:59 AM, SmilingIdiot wrote: you know how much that pays?....media attention,book,fame,...and a lifetime of ppl knowing you...pricless.

That's what I told them. :\

It's alright. Try to make your own style.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 11:09:00


At 5/24/07 12:36 AM, Dark-Angel07 wrote: This is just one of the better drawings I've done..Any advice on making it look nicer would be appreciated. Plus, post your own art! =)

I have a suggestion: Draw something NON-MANGA so we can see what you are REALLY capable of. Manga is most of the time a "fake nice" drawing


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Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 14:20:11


At 5/24/07 08:18 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Use an eraser to put a glint in her(?) eyes.

Also; I don't know what the original picture looks like, but I like the crazy long fingers. I mean if you can have ginormous anime eyes you should be able to have some creepy long fingers as well. Bodily distortion is fun. =]

Thank you ^^ Lol and the drawing is SUPPOSED to be a guy xD

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 15:57:31


At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

sorry vortex, you're my friend but i dissagree. I think there demon fingers. there Long claws.


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Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 18:02:16


At 5/24/07 04:09 AM, Stamper wrote:
At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.
Was the plug really necessary? That's like the door greeter at Wal-Mart saying "Thanks for shopping at Wal-Mart, my anus is between my buttcheeks."

ROFL! I cant believe that youre able to come up with something new and tasteless everytime Stamper, oh man... XD

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-24 18:32:37


At 5/24/07 04:15 AM, Vortex00 wrote: She had typed:
Plus, post your own art! =)
so I just linked it? =/

Yeah, I missed that part, my bad.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-25 00:33:58


At 5/24/07 06:32 PM, Stamper wrote:
At 5/24/07 04:15 AM, Vortex00 wrote: She had typed:
Plus, post your own art! =)
so I just linked it? =/
Yeah, I missed that part, my bad.

Oh SHIT! Stamper got fucked up! Mothafucka! Cocksucka! Dicklicka! Tom Fulp.

Response to Some nice critique of my art? 2007-05-25 00:41:28


Lol wow I love how this thread..thingy..has turned out. I think I like how those fingers are...nice "demon fingers" as crazerfish50 so nicely put it.