Some nice critique of my art?

[Dark-Angel07]

This is just one of the better drawings I've done..Any advice on making it look nicer would be appreciated. Plus, post your own art! =)

[Dusty-Gorilla]

Dear God. Does anyone on this Earth possess just a shred of originality anymore?

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 12:46 AM, Dusty-Gorilla wrote: Dear God. Does anyone on this Earth possess just a shred of originality anymore?

I suppose I should add that I sketched this from a manga I read..my apologies =/ I would also like to add: please give only appropriate critiques/comments..please, no flaming. I am asking for advice, not insults. Thank you.

[Vortex00]

The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Yeah, hands are something I have a little bit of trouble with...they look easy though!

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

At 5/24/07 12:46 AM, Dusty-Gorilla wrote: Dear God. Does anyone on this Earth possess just a shred of originality anymore?

What he said.

And if you traced this from a manga you read, then technically you are stealing art as well.

Well fucking done.

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 02:53 AM, ShirtTurtle wrote:

At 5/24/07 02:46 AM, ZekeySpaceyLizard wrote: And if you traced this from a manga you read, then technically you are stealing art as well.

i don't think he traced.
he just did the whole, draw what i see thing.

but i think its a good start.
We can't be asking for much more at the moment.

She, and yes I did the whole, "draw what I see" thing. AKA "sketching". I don't usually draw only because I'm no good at drawing from scratch..gotta have somethin to look at. Thank you for the comment. ^_^

[Vortex00]

Just fix those fingers..

.. NOW! XD and repost the updated drawing

[DeadAlias]

Is the hand extended toward you?
Or is it on the face?
Its pretty good just the hand is fucked.

other then that lets see you draw something from your head.

[Dark-Angel07]

xD I would, but I'm afraid to mess it up...

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 03:37 AM, DeadAlias wrote: Is the hand extended toward you?
Or is it on the face?
Its pretty good just the hand is fucked.

other then that lets see you draw something from your head.

Yeah, the hand is on the face...like I said earlier, I'm not the best drawer..this happens to be my favorite (and best)

[Vortex00]

The inside of the ear can use some work too -_-;

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 03:46 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The inside of the ear can use some work too -_-;

;-; I didn't realize how many mistakes I made...

[DeadAlias]

Well im sure with practice you'll make vortex happy.
Since he's a pro at drawing anime.

Other than that you should make your own character and build it up, im betting in 6 months that character will be B material, and in a year A
Depending on how much you practice.

[Vortex00]

At 5/24/07 03:54 AM, Dark-Angel07 wrote:

At 5/24/07 03:46 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The inside of the ear can use some work too -_-;

;-; I didn't realize how many mistakes I made...

Spider leg finger guy -_-;

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 03:54 AM, DeadAlias wrote: Well im sure with practice you'll make vortex happy.
Since he's a pro at drawing anime.

Other than that you should make your own character and build it up, im betting in 6 months that character will be B material, and in a year A
Depending on how much you practice.

Yeah..I sketched that drawing last year..I don't really draw that much anymore. I'm more a poet than I am a drawer. I'll see what I can do to do as you suggested though.

[Stamper]

At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Was the plug really necessary? That's like the door greeter at Wal-Mart saying "Thanks for shopping at Wal-Mart, my anus is between my buttcheeks."

[Vortex00]

At 5/24/07 04:09 AM, Stamper wrote:

At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Was the plug really necessary? That's like the door greeter at Wal-Mart saying "Thanks for shopping at Wal-Mart, my anus is between my buttcheeks."

forgive my ignorance.. but I dont know what you mean by "the plug" ><

She had typed:

Plus, post your own art! =)

so I just linked it? =/

[DemitriousDoom]

At 5/24/07 03:10 AM, Dark-Angel07 wrote: She, and yes I did the whole, "draw what I see" thing. AKA "sketching". I don't usually draw only because I'm no good at drawing from scratch..gotta have somethin to look at. Thank you for the comment. ^_^

Ah, I remember those days, drawing what I see.... But yeah, fix that hand! Long fingers kind of creep me out...even if it is drawn.

[BlackmarketKraig]

Use an eraser to put a glint in her(?) eyes.

Also; I don't know what the original picture looks like, but I like the crazy long fingers. I mean if you can have ginormous anime eyes you should be able to have some creepy long fingers as well. Bodily distortion is fun. =]

[SmilingIdiot]

do you know who had long hands?...freddy...and you know what happen to freddy?....ppl teesed his skinny long fingered ass...know what freddy became?....a serial killer....you know how much that pays?....media attention,book,fame,...and a lifetime of ppl knowing you...pricless.

[s1nt3ch]

I'm sorry but can someone post some more stuff besides anime you fucking kids are all brainwashed. Sure i like anime but there's so friggin much of it out there that posting a picture of anime is pretty pointless nowadays

[McJesus]

At 5/24/07 08:59 AM, SmilingIdiot wrote: you know how much that pays?....media attention,book,fame,...and a lifetime of ppl knowing you...pricless.

That's what I told them. :\

It's alright. Try to make your own style.

[test-object]

At 5/24/07 12:36 AM, Dark-Angel07 wrote: This is just one of the better drawings I've done..Any advice on making it look nicer would be appreciated. Plus, post your own art! =)

I have a suggestion: Draw something NON-MANGA so we can see what you are REALLY capable of. Manga is most of the time a "fake nice" drawing

[Dark-Angel07]

At 5/24/07 08:18 AM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: Use an eraser to put a glint in her(?) eyes.

Also; I don't know what the original picture looks like, but I like the crazy long fingers. I mean if you can have ginormous anime eyes you should be able to have some creepy long fingers as well. Bodily distortion is fun. =]

Thank you ^^ Lol and the drawing is SUPPOSED to be a guy xD

[crazerfish50]

At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

sorry vortex, you're my friend but i dissagree. I think there demon fingers. there Long claws.

[Hammi]

At 5/24/07 04:09 AM, Stamper wrote:

At 5/24/07 01:41 AM, Vortex00 wrote: The fingers look way too long.. it's kinda creepy =/

my art can be found here.

Was the plug really necessary? That's like the door greeter at Wal-Mart saying "Thanks for shopping at Wal-Mart, my anus is between my buttcheeks."

ROFL! I cant believe that youre able to come up with something new and tasteless everytime Stamper, oh man... XD

[Stamper]

At 5/24/07 04:15 AM, Vortex00 wrote: She had typed:

Plus, post your own art! =)

so I just linked it? =/

Yeah, I missed that part, my bad.

[Dusty-Gorilla]

At 5/24/07 06:32 PM, Stamper wrote:

At 5/24/07 04:15 AM, Vortex00 wrote: She had typed:

Plus, post your own art! =)

so I just linked it? =/

Yeah, I missed that part, my bad.

Oh SHIT! Stamper got fucked up! Mothafucka! Cocksucka! Dicklicka! Tom Fulp.

[Dark-Angel07]

Lol wow I love how this thread..thingy..has turned out. I think I like how those fingers are...nice "demon fingers" as crazerfish50 so nicely put it.