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At 5/23/07 01:00 AM, YoinK wrote: http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/3422_BestAround Collab_Part4.php
Here's the animated background I put together. Any comments or suggestions so far? I like feedback.

When you have a different angle, why don't you have your guy do a leaping kick towards the screen? Just one idea.

At 5/23/07 01:18 AM, Yhtomit wrote:

At 5/23/07 01:00 AM, YoinK wrote: http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/3422_BestAround Collab_Part4.php
Here's the animated background I put together. Any comments or suggestions so far? I like feedback.

When you have a different angle, why don't you have your guy do a leaping kick towards the screen? Just one idea.

hmm, that would be a great idea. I'll have to put that together when I get the chance.

cool and joeiscooler you can take part 19. Sorry KyleDaFox, you already have a part and I want to give other guys a change to

Hu, there is something wrong. Ziwon, part 1 and 6 that you sent me doesnt play music.
WhenI open the file the music doesnt play and when I am trying to add the music again it still doesnt play. How did you export it? I have flash 8

At 5/23/07 01:54 AM, Fora wrote: Hu, there is something wrong. Ziwon, part 1 and 6 that you sent me doesnt play music.
WhenI open the file the music doesnt play and when I am trying to add the music again it still doesnt play. How did you export it? I have flash 8

???
And part 13? I'm using flash 5, but that shouldn't be the problem. shall I send you the parts without music, maybe then it will work when you add it?

At 5/23/07 01:00 AM, YoinK wrote: http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/3422_BestAround Collab_Part4.php
Here's the animated background I put together. Any comments or suggestions so far? I like feedback.

looks good.

My bios:

Name: Philip
NG name: CiA-Vamp
Age: 17
Why i joined: Seemed like a cool collab. Liked the song.
Male

dang!

Yoink, yours looks awesome!

and Fora, i'm fixing the "boring" moment on mine....
gimme a little bit...

At 5/23/07 06:08 AM, Ziwon wrote:

???
And part 13? I'm using flash 5, but that shouldn't be the problem. shall I send you the parts without music, maybe then it will work when you add it?

Part 13 works fine, can you send the .fla without music?

Hey, can you post a list of the people who've finished?

And please, fora, include me on that list. Today my (finished) part comes in.

At 5/23/07 12:05 PM, FlashKn1ght wrote: And please, fora, include me on that list. Today my (finished) part comes in.

Stop fucking complaning, why i shouldnt put you on the list?

I will post the list soon,

updated list:

Preloader and menu : Toy-machine
preloader game: Kart-men
part1 : Ziwon
part2 : Doomshock**
part3 :Cia-Vamp**
part4 : Yoink
part5 : KyledaFox**
part6 : Ziwon**
part7 spare-jello**
part8 :Devinlundy*
part9 : Fora ( me )
part10 :flashbum*
part11 : A-wahl
part12 : Toasterdemon
part13 : Ziwon**
part14 :flashkn1ght
part15 :Yhtomit
part16 :Kanadian-Keith
part17 :Kanadian-Keith
part18 :Spacewalk**
part19 : JoeisCooler
part20 : TheGreatPatten
part21 :ThatsMrLazy
part22 :ThatsMrLazy
part23: Kanadian-Keith
part24 : Doomshock
part25 : Dreadfear1
part26 :Devinlundy
( and
replay
button )

author list:

Toy-machine
Kart-men
Ziwon
Doomshock
Cia-Vamp
Yoink
KyledaFox
spare-jello
Devinlundy
Fora
flashbum
A-wahl
Toasterdemon
flashkn1ght
Yhtomit
Spacewalk
JoeisCooler
TheGreatPatten
ThatsMrLazy
Kanadian-Keith
Dreadfear1

Wow, I think this collab's running along quite smoothly. I have a lot of faith in this collab that it'll do well. If any parts open up I want it, also if there is anything else that I can do I'll do it.

At 5/23/07 01:07 PM, KyleDaFox wrote: Wow, I think this collab's running along quite smoothly. I have a lot of faith in this collab that it'll do well. If any parts open up I want it, also if there is anything else that I can do I'll do it.

But there is still stress here. Because I'm making the bios right now, but NO AND REALLY NOBODY CANT LEAVE NOW, you cant do that to me :P.

At 5/23/07 01:07 PM, KyleDaFox wrote: Wow, I think this collab's running along quite smoothly. I have a lot of faith in this collab that it'll do well. If any parts open up I want it, also if there is anything else that I can do I'll do it.

Can you plz answer this shit:

Real name:
NG alias:
age:
male/female:
why did you joined?:

You can make a picture for your author bioswith the size:
131 W x 131 H
( Please tell me if you want to make a picture for your bios )
I will pm all of you for this bios!

Fora, are my parts now working? I've sent you a mail.

Real name: Kyle R.
NG alias: KyleDaFox
age: 12
male/female: Male
why did you joined?: I really liked the song, all of the people in it were cool and inviting and I had a pretty good idea to animate.

I believe my part is complete.
http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/53301_BestAroun dCollab_Part4.php
check it and tell me if it's good enough, then i'll send the .fla

At 5/23/07 02:51 PM, YoinK wrote: I believe my part is complete.
http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/53301_BestAroun dCollab_Part4.php
check it and tell me if it's good enough, then i'll send the .fla

I think you overused gradients, also the mountains are just triangles. I've never seen a purple perfect triangle mountain in my life. Also, there's a big jitter in the middle, is that intentional? Other than that, the style and animation is nice.

At 5/23/07 02:55 PM, KyleDaFox wrote:

At 5/23/07 02:51 PM, YoinK wrote: I believe my part is complete.
http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/53301_BestAroun dCollab_Part4.php
check it and tell me if it's good enough, then i'll send the .fla

I think you overused gradients, also the mountains are just triangles. I've never seen a purple perfect triangle mountain in my life. Also, there's a big jitter in the middle, is that intentional? Other than that, the style and animation is nice.

Thanks for the feedback. hmm... I used gradients because the sun was setting. How should I change the mountains? It's suppose to be cartoon style. what do you mean by big jitter? big jitter where?

At 5/23/07 03:04 PM, YoinK wrote: I used gradients because the sun was setting. How should I change the mountains? It's suppose to be cartoon style. what do you mean by big jitter? big jitter where?

Make the mountains a dark gray maybe? Round them a bit at the top, add little lines for like ledges and maybe add a snow top? In the middle, the camera just jumps up.

At 5/23/07 03:15 PM, KyleDaFox wrote:

At 5/23/07 03:04 PM, YoinK wrote: I used gradients because the sun was setting. How should I change the mountains? It's suppose to be cartoon style. what do you mean by big jitter? big jitter where?

Make the mountains a dark gray maybe? Round them a bit at the top, add little lines for like ledges and maybe add a snow top? In the middle, the camera just jumps up.

Yeah, that anooyed me to. But for the rest it was good :D
Some news: I finished the author bios, I will do some updates on it because some people didnt send their bios

ok.. so hmm.. it will just be one perspective but I think that's fine because it's only 5 seconds.
http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/55998_BestAroun dCollab_Part4.php
what do you guys think now? Is it better?

At 5/23/07 03:35 PM, YoinK wrote: ok.. so hmm.. it will just be one perspective but I think that's fine because it's only 5 seconds.
http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/55998_BestAroun dCollab_Part4.php
what do you guys think now? Is it better?

YEAAA

At 5/23/07 03:36 PM, Fora wrote:

At 5/23/07 03:35 PM, YoinK wrote: ok.. so hmm.. it will just be one perspective but I think that's fine because it's only 5 seconds.
http://denvish.net/ulf/230507/55998_BestAroun dCollab_Part4.php
what do you guys think now? Is it better?

YEAAA

okkk. FLA sent! :)

Yeah, great job, YoinK! I think it really improved a lot.

At 5/23/07 03:51 PM, KyleDaFox wrote: Yeah, great job, YoinK! I think it really improved a lot.

thanks again for the feedback. Was there a due date for this collab?

At 5/23/07 04:00 PM, YoinK wrote:

thanks again for the feedback. Was there a due date for this collab?

No problem, I think Fora said the beginning of June.