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The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:31:57 Reply

As she slept in the expensive hotel room in Praia da Luz, her golden locks framing her perfect little head, a young Portuguese man named Paris lurked outside the ground floor suite window.

He shook with nervous agitation as he witnessed her parents leave after a second thirty minute check up and knew that if he was going to follow through with this shitcake of a plan he would have to act now.

He waited until the parents were a safe distance away, counting the seconds as their footsteps dwindled into nothingness, he checked his equipment; a quilted hammer to break the glass with a dull thud, a plastic toy pistol and a cloth soaked in some chloroform. He readied himself, preparing his body and mind for this crime, he lifted up his arm and tensed his muscles.

He smashed the window.

The children cried as they awoke with shock.

The intruder had entered into the hotel room and covered their little faces with the damp cloth. The children stopped crying and drifted into a deep sleep once more. All except for Madeleine who hadn't even heard the window being smashed and lay silent in bed wearing nothing but Pajamas.

Paris took out his syringe, filled it with some strange yellow liquid and pierced the six year olds skin with the needle. A dribble of blood emerged from the prick, but Madeleine stirred not, she was still blissfully unaware of the events surrounding her as she slipped into a deeper and darker slumber.

Paris lifted her body over her shoulder, discarded the remnents of his equipment bar his toy gun and kicked his entry hole into the hotel room making it large enough for Madeleine and himself.

Paris looked back at the mess he had created, the other children bleeding from their noses as they lay silent in the hotel room, the discarded syringe and damp cloth left carelessly on the bedside. Overall, it didn't look at all like any professional had broken in and kidnapped a six year old child, but of course it wasn't meant to.

Paris bundled his heavy load into his cheap car and began his journey back to his clients home. As he drove, Paris talked to the sleeping lump of the child, he tried to explain why he had kidnapped her and why he needed the money.

Y'see Paris was a shit gambler but he didn't know he was a shit gambler and so after losing all of his borrowed money to the guy who lent him the money and shortly learning thereafter of the exceptionally high interest rate that came with the money Paris simply had no choice but to kidnap a little girl or lose his most favoured asset.

Unfortunately Paris liked his penis.

So, he kidnapped Madeleine and was now taking her to some paedophelic crimelord.

"But" Paris explained "At least at the end of this I can have a wank."

The humour was lost on Madeleine as she was asleep.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:45:22 Reply

More?


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:47:55 Reply

NSFW? Like if a co-worker might accidentally read that? And be offended?


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:49:18 Reply

Pretty good story if I do say so myself.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:50:48 Reply

Hahaha, I thought it would end up as some sort of sick sex scene but it wasn't too bad.
Thankfully, there was no 6 year old girl screwing.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:51:33 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:47 PM, Catoblepas wrote: NSFW? Like if a co-worker might accidentally read that? And be offended?

When I include the hardcore rape, torture and death of the six year old it will be Nsfw.

I don't want it deleted on a technicallity.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:51:49 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:47 PM, Catoblepas wrote: NSFW? Like if a co-worker might accidentally read that? And be offended?

Yeah... I wanted to see some NSFW pics >:|

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:53:34 Reply

Too soon, perhaps.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:55:42 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:53 PM, BananaBreadMuffin wrote: Too soon, perhaps.

What if I write the death scene and it turns out to be true?


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 15:59:26 Reply

Just keep typing you bastard.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:00:00 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:51 PM, Bunnyreaper wrote:
At 5/9/07 03:47 PM, Catoblepas wrote: NSFW? Like if a co-worker might accidentally read that? And be offended?
When I include the hardcore rape, torture and death of the six year old it will be Nsfw.

SPOILERS! DAMN YOU!

Now there's no reason to read it, since we already have the pleasure of fantasizing the scene.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:02:20 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:31 PM, Bunnyreaper wrote:
So, he kidnapped Madeleine and was now taking her to some paedophelic crimelord.

Lets hope cancer runs in you're family.

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:03:26 Reply

At 5/9/07 04:00 PM, Catoblepas wrote:
SPOILERS! DAMN YOU!

Now there's no reason to read it, since we already have the pleasure of fantasizing the scene.

But you don't know how i'm going to torture the child or how it will die.

Will it be flayed or eaten? Crushed or melted?

You never know.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:05:13 Reply

At 5/9/07 04:02 PM, Brick-top wrote: Lets hope cancer runs in you're family.

Lets (a Let is a something, and there's many of them) hope: Cancer runs. You are a family?


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:17:21 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:31 PM, Bunnyreaper wrote: The humour was lost on Madeleine as she was asleep.

Haha.

BTW, Maddy was only 3. That's right, 3 years more fresh.

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:25:27 Reply

At 5/9/07 04:17 PM, HeartbreakHoldout wrote:
Haha.

BTW, Maddy was only 3. That's right, 3 years more fresh.

The BBC lied to me.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:49:43 Reply

At 5/9/07 04:05 PM, Catoblepas wrote:
At 5/9/07 04:02 PM, Brick-top wrote: Lets hope cancer runs in you're family.
Lets (a Let is a something, and there's many of them) hope: Cancer runs. You are a family?

Strokes and heart attacks but this isn't about me is it you nonce?

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:51:10 Reply

Oshit
NSFW text...


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 16:59:47 Reply

At 5/9/07 04:51 PM, Net-terrorist wrote: Oshit
NSFW text...

Patience.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 17:06:59 Reply

You people are sick.

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 17:27:51 Reply

At 5/9/07 05:06 PM, SouthAsian wrote: You people are sick.

The death of an individual constitutes nothing if they did not do anything with their lives.

I doubt this fictional three year old has done anything with her life thus her death should at least be worth some meaning.

If you deny her this then what would be the point in her existing?


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 17:30:55 Reply

At 5/9/07 05:27 PM, Bunnyreaper wrote:
At 5/9/07 05:06 PM, SouthAsian wrote: You people are sick.
The death of an individual constitutes nothing if they did not do anything with their lives.

I doubt this fictional three year old has done anything with her life thus her death should at least be worth some meaning.

If you deny her this then what would be the point in her existing?

To fill in value to her life, you sick fuck. She does not deserve to die.

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 17:33:07 Reply

At 5/9/07 05:30 PM, uhnoesanoob wrote:
To fill in value to her life, you sick fuck. She does not deserve to die.

Loving the irony your sig dictates.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 18:18:11 Reply

At 5/9/07 05:27 PM, Bunnyreaper wrote: fictional three year old

That's like claiming that any similarities between your story and current affairs are purely coincidental and not intended. Which is a load of bollocks.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-09 18:25:48 Reply

At 5/9/07 05:33 PM, Bunnyreaper wrote:
At 5/9/07 05:30 PM, uhnoesanoob wrote:
To fill in value to her life, you sick fuck. She does not deserve to die.
Loving the irony your sig dictates.

That Israel is fighting for its children? How is that irony again......?

But at least I do not write stories about a real life 3 year old getting raped and killed....

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-10 11:06:12 Reply

At 5/9/07 06:25 PM, uhnoesanoob wrote:
But at least I do not write stories about a real life 3 year old getting raped and killed....

Without experience how can you judge?

At 5/9/07 06:18 PM, BananaBreadMuffin wrote:
That's like claiming that any similarities between your story and current affairs are purely coincidental and not intended. Which is a load of bollocks.

Have you been up close with this child?

Do you truly know without any doubt whatsoever that this child exists?

She is an image on television nothing more.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-10 11:25:37 Reply

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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-05-10 12:00:17 Reply

At 5/9/07 03:47 PM, Catoblepas wrote: NSFW? Like if a co-worker might accidentally read that? And be offended?

Word, pedo stories are the rage in workplaces these days.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-09-15 16:43:36 Reply

Paris softly passed the little girl into the arms of various henchmen number one, a muscular chap dressed in orange with a large "1" on his chest, smiling at the irony of her treatment.

Soon she will be reduced to a fuck toy, a slave to her masters cock, or cooked for some specialist dinner but who cares? Paris had is penis intact and was debt free. He had the rest of his life ahead of him and he wasn't going to waste it hanging outside some pervert's castle maybe he cou-

Paris fell to the floor with two gaping bullet holes in his back, an Australian man stepped out of the darkness wielding a 9mm, a large number "3" marked his orange chest, "Just tying up loose ends mate... Sorry and all that." speaking with a cheerful overtone his apology did not provoke forgiveness.

Madeleine stirred, signalling a quickening of pace for the two henchmen, they brought the girl to the Master and laid her out in front of him. "Strip her" She was stripped. "Wake her" she was woken. The six year old shivered on the cold floor as she awoke to the piercing gaze of the Master, she was woozy from the drugs and thus unable to comprehend her unfortunate situation, "Whip her" she was whipped.

The leather strap smacked against her soft preteen flesh leaving a glowing red mark, her screams providing satisfaction with every swing, she was held down by henchmen number one whilst number three whacked her ass and lower back with his belt.

As blood began to leak onto the floor, Madeleine's screams dwindled to a whimper, Henchmen three continued to beat her tender flesh raw until the Master called out "Stop" and he did.

Madeleine lay in a bloody heap on the floor, her breathing heavy, her six year old mind unable to comprehend what was happening to her. Her little voice cried out for her mother, which earned her a kick from henchmen number one, Madeleine couldn't scream any longer and settled for long sobs.

"Pull out her teeth" The Master instructed and her teeth were pulled. Henchmen number two appeared with a pair of pliers and set about removing her incisors, his big manly arms overpowering the bloodied six year old with ease. When he reached the molars she had passed out but henchmen number two continued regardless, finished he left her a toothless infant once more.

The Master unfurled his cock from his trousers and placed it in front of the six year old. "Suck" he uttered so Madeleine placed her bloodied mouth around his tip, wincing as it brushed against her toothless stumps, and licked. "More" he said "Lick faster" frightened she obeyed.

Soon the Master was thrusting himself into the innocent face of Madeleine, his penis pushing against the back of her throat causing her to choke, however he continued to rub his cock in between her lips until he sprayed his juice down her innocent gullet.

The Master picked up her baby teeth and sprinkled them over the ruined body of Madeleine, "Give my love to the Toothfairy" He laughed and began to leave "Train her" she was trained.


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Response to The Incident In Portugal. Nsfw 2007-09-15 17:03:56 Reply

This might not be too far from the truth, sadly...


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