link 2 my movie

[BAD-EMOboy]

heres a link to my movie. please message me with some input. http://img128.imageshack.us/my.php?image=woot eu6.swf

[64]

Improve your graphics.

...By a lot.

[ChilliDog]

What he said.
And just keep working at it. You're learning techniques and such and what you can or can't do and that's good. Practice really does make perfect. All of our flash movies looked like that at some time, you can only get better from this point.

[Lone-Ronin1]

I am not sure why but I think you are either 10 or have 0 artistic skill. If you improve your graphics and add a background (drawn by you or someone else). Add sound and get an original idea.

[dragonjet]

ye i can see a bright future my boy, but for now... improve on the graphics, add more details and stuff, sounds or music should give it a boost :)

[Jako-inc]

It needs better graphics and it needs to be faster. (e.g. quicker movements)

[Greth-of-choas]

yah make it maybe 16 fps? if not then 18.

[ZeeAk]

At 5/2/07 05:15 AM, Jako-inc wrote: It needs better graphics and it needs to be faster. (e.g. quicker movements)

Seconded. But, it looks alrite for a first flash. My first flash was like 10 minutes long, completely tweened.

[kdfsjljklgjfg]

either better graphics, or downgrade to high-quality stick figures
add sound