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Baller22CT
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Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 10:00:57 Reply

Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 10:02:35 Reply

At 4/28/07 10:00 AM, Baller22CT wrote: Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.

5/10

Nothing special. Although the shading is okay...other than that its just an easy-to-make pattern.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 10:05:55 Reply

At 4/28/07 10:02 AM, MisterDielectric wrote:
At 4/28/07 10:00 AM, Baller22CT wrote: Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.
5/10

Nothing special. Although the shading is okay...other than that its just an easy-to-make pattern.

Thanks for the rating. And yeah, i have to agree with you, it was just an easy pattern.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 10:14:49 Reply

1/10

You scribbled, and used some dodgey HB pencil.

Know what a sharpener is?


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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 10:42:52 Reply

3/10
Shading is okay; although not blended enough.

I know it is a comma, not a semicolon, that should go there.

Also, it looks completely flat, which would be horrible for a shield.

It isn't centered; just crop the damn thing.

that is a correct semicolon

And I don't like the pattern. Make it better.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 14:39:19 Reply

At 4/28/07 10:00 AM, Baller22CT wrote: Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.

1/10

it`s a scribbled shield, not straight neither does it have a good design.

simple pattern and the shading is too easy, i mean, a goddam flat piece of metal...if you got that wrong you might as well have killed yourself.

dont post a pic unless you feel it is worth it`s own thread.


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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-28 14:46:29 Reply

3/10
The design is too simple. There should be an insignia or something to add some detail. Also, it is way out of shape. You need to center it, and made the shape definite. That point at the end is not very protective, and it does look flat.

Add some small details too. Such as the trimmiing; it should have nuts and bolts attaching it to the shield. Also put shading from the trimming to the shield to show that it does have a sense of 3D.

If you make another shield, take these notes into account.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 03:15:45 Reply

Sorry buddy but I give it a 3/10

I know you drew it with a pencil but its not very semetrical and its very plain. Perhaps if there was an emblem in the center like a lion
or even an object like a spade (cards no shovel/spade)

All in all very basic.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 03:44:14 Reply

I Give It A 3/10... BUT WITH THE NEW VERSION I MADE FOR YOU!!

:O 6/10 :D A x2 Improvement :O

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 05:12:41 Reply

4/10

Nothing special really ....


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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 05:36:54 Reply

2.
it doesnt look like a shield... though a nice metal sheet maybe.... but not a shield.


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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 07:36:26 Reply

At 4/29/07 03:44 AM, Puppet-Lord wrote: I Give It A 3/10... BUT WITH THE NEW VERSION I MADE FOR YOU!!

O 6/10 :D A x2 Improvement :O

Dick, you made it worse


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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 08:03:33 Reply

I agree

Its not a bad start though, you have the basics i guess and the shading isnt too bad

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 08:13:33 Reply

I´d give it a 4/10. Like people say, it´s not straight...it´s bigger on one side than the other....i also think the corners are a bit too sharp. Also, the design. for me was a bit simple and boring maybe....try something with a bit more detail and i think you´ll get better results.

Oh, i knocked up a quick shield using flash in 5 minutes. It´s not great, but with a mouse it´s not as easy as using pencil, but i don´t have a scanner, so hey. Anyway...i call it the moonshield..what do ya guys think?

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 09:20:15 Reply

At 4/29/07 03:44 AM, Puppet-Lord wrote: I Give It A 3/10... BUT WITH THE NEW VERSION I MADE FOR YOU!!

O 6/10 :D A x2 Improvement :O

Puppet-Lord... PLEASE stop talking with a cap starting at each word. It's really annoying me.

Shield... Redo it, so we can see your improvement from the hints of shadow other people have given you.

I rate it 2,221/10
Same advice as everyone has given: Shadow


A rather disgusting-looking git that should have been disposed of ages ago.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 10:42:31 Reply

Your newer version is an improvement, but not by much. I'm not really sure, but the trimming shouldn't look like tin foil. Keep it up, and do work on the major things like shape, lighting and shading. I give the shield version 1.2 a 4/10.

As for the moon shield, you did that in paint? Or photoshop? Because it looks ok, but really do center the point with the middle. I notice this right of the bat. But it does look good. 6/10 for you.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 10:51:26 Reply

No, i used flash, and it´s not bent, if you look at it carefully, it´s because i drew it at an angle, hence the curved top. Know what i mean?

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 10:53:26 Reply

Ok, I see now. But maybe it is me, but it looks like its concaving than convexing.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 11:09:00 Reply

At 4/28/07 10:00 AM, Baller22CT wrote: Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.

4/10

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-29 11:13:50 Reply

Ok, so i wipped this up in photoshop in a couple of minutes. There isn't much to look at, but here is mine.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-30 01:06:40 Reply

Something I made for my gaming clan a couple years ago. There's a few things I would change if I were to remake it now.

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Response to Rate My Shield 2007-04-30 03:14:02 Reply

At 4/28/07 10:00 AM, Baller22CT wrote: Here's my shield rate it from 1-10.
1 being total shit 10 being epic masterpiece.

4/10, it needs to be slimmer and look more jagged and metal/hard look to it. maybe add a few rivets, dents, scratches etc.


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