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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 10:25:35 Reply

If you need me too re send aneything just tell me.

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 10:26:56 Reply

At 4/28/07 10:13 AM, MetalDart wrote: Also yodd: I dont know if I renamed all of my symbols in that .fla I posted. I'll check.

lol I was right. I forgot to rename them for my parts. :P
http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/37562_30_hour_p art_2.fla
That has the unique symbols and are all in the "MetalDart Folder."

At 4/28/07 09:08 AM, Pezboy440 wrote: I made another!!!
http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/32854_fr.php

I don't want to be rude or anything, but we're really trying to make this collab as perfect as possible. It's the last one of the series, and kind of filling up squares with the paint bucket tool each frame is just kind of mediocre.

Spice it up a bit. You have 30 hours. Take your time man.


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 11:17:53 Reply

Yodd i fixed all my parts and sent them to your email.

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 11:33:36 Reply

I don't want to be rude or anything, but we're really trying to make this collab as perfect as possible. It's the last one of the series, and kind of filling up squares with the paint bucket tool each frame is just kind of mediocre.

Spice it up a bit. You have 30 hours. Take your time man.

kk , but how much time do we have now???

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 11:43:41 Reply

At 4/28/07 11:33 AM, Pezboy440 wrote: kk , but how much time do we have now???

Until Sunday at 2:00 am in the morning


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 11:57:37 Reply

Heres what I have so far. I might add more soon:
http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/39428_30hourlim it.php

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 12:01:14 Reply

At 4/28/07 11:57 AM, ToasterDemon wrote: Heres what I have so far. I might add more soon:
http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/39428_30hourlim it.php

This is a good example of what your submissions should be on the par of in my opinon.
I really like this Toaster, only problem is that the bullet doesn't come out of the right part of the gun. Seems kind of delayed if you get my drift.

Also, yodd if youre reading, when do you get unbanned? :P


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 12:03:55 Reply

At 4/28/07 12:01 PM, MetalDart wrote: This is a good example of what your submissions should be on the par of in my opinon.
I really like this Toaster, only problem is that the bullet doesn't come out of the right part of the gun. Seems kind of delayed if you get my drift.

Thanks :D
Ill try and work on the bullet part. :)

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 13:29:32 Reply

So yeah.. Join people :D

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 13:50:00 Reply

Seriously guys read this:

Stop making new parts and fix up the parts you have. I am tired of this low quality.

The things that made the first two good were that even though we only had 30 hours to make it, we all poured our devotion into it, not just quickly whip something up. 30 hours is a lot of time.

Many of the parts seen in this thread are "mediocre" and some are even less than that. You probably know who you are, so please, make your part as good as possible. It's either in or out, no in betweens here.

Also, do you guys realize this is the final one? There probably will be none after this. We want to go out with a bang.


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 13:50:21 Reply

Here's mine so far!

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 13:53:20 Reply

At 4/28/07 01:50 PM, ZombieLincoln wrote: Here's mine so far!

Haha that's real awsome :D Now finish it in time!
I'm going to spruce mine up since I'm sure I could do something more.


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 13:53:30 Reply

At 4/28/07 01:50 PM, MetalDart wrote: Seriously guys read this:

Stop making new parts and fix up the parts you have. I am tired of this low quality.

The things that made the first two good were that even though we only had 30 hours to make it, we all poured our devotion into it, not just quickly whip something up. 30 hours is a lot of time.

Many of the parts seen in this thread are "mediocre" and some are even less than that. You probably know who you are, so please, make your part as good as possible. It's either in or out, no in betweens here.

I don't know thirty hours seems like a bit much to make a just 10 second clip
Also Your most likely talking about me so sorry about that.
But I thought my third part was good
well I'll spice up my other animations and resend them peace I'm out


Also, do you guys realize this is the final one? There probably will be none after this. We want to go out with a bang.
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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 13:55:21 Reply

At 4/28/07 01:53 PM, godsondagger wrote: I don't know thirty hours seems like a bit much to make a just 10 second clip
Also Your most likely talking about me so sorry about that.

Actually, the one that reminds me of Vinnie Verata's style is one of my favorite parts.
I was not talking to you, if that makes you feel better.

also, that post above was yodd and my's way to motivate people.

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:06:12 Reply

At 4/28/07 01:55 PM, MetalDart wrote:

Thx I can't imagine being as good as vinnie tho
but Me , my sister and cousin are making a cartoon with his style
I hope I can get a wacom tablet tho
mouse is so hard to actually draw good with
Also I'm fixing up my parts as we speak

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:09:12 Reply

Sure why not!


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:16:34 Reply

Man, I wanted to make more than one part for this one, but I seem to be out of ideas.


A Bedtime Tale | 1 | 2 | 3 |

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:36:00 Reply

Here are my parts modified slightly
I mainly optimized most of the frames

http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/48718_30_2.php

http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/48778_30.php

http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/48871_Hour_3.ph p

I know I only fixed them up a little , but anyone else got an idea of how to fix it up
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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:43:06 Reply

Links aren't working for me..?


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:45:52 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:43 PM, Wurmy1029 wrote: Links aren't working for me..?

Weird I uploaded them to denvish and their working for me

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:49:03 Reply

Also sorry for te double post , but I was wondering
could I use some old animations or do I make new ones for this collab

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:49:13 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:45 PM, godsondagger wrote:
At 4/28/07 02:43 PM, Wurmy1029 wrote: Links aren't working for me..?
Weird I uploaded them to denvish and their working for me

Now they work..? Weird.. Well keep on refining! Refine one completely then go on to the next one. You need to smooth your animation more.

And here's mine, I just added the beginning, nothing else.
http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/49746_30HourCol lab_Wurmy.php
Should I add a background or is it fine?


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:54:39 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:49 PM, Wurmy1029 wrote: Should I add a background or is it fine?

I think you should add more of those robotic arms, maybe with computer screens at the end of them, giving readouts on the construction as it goes.

Maybe even make it a factory - add some treadmills and some tiny little guys running around on the floor!

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:55:51 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:49 PM, Wurmy1029 wrote:

And here's mine, I just added the beginning, nothing else.
http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/49746_30HourCol lab_Wurmy.php
Should I add a background or is it fine?

No background that looks cool by itself
Also to make my animations look slightly better I'll just filter some parts I guess I don't really know
how I'd smoothen it up anymore

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:55:58 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:49 PM, Wurmy1029 wrote: Should I add a background or is it fine?

I personally think that it looks fine as it is. That looks awesome just the way you made it. :)


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:56:08 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:54 PM, ZombieLincoln wrote: I think you should add more of those robotic arms, maybe with computer screens at the end of them, giving readouts on the construction as it goes.

Maybe even make it a factory - add some treadmills and some tiny little guys running around on the floor!

I'm going to have a busy day ahead of me then! I'll get started on that now :D


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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:56:37 Reply

Heres another i worked harder onthis one . And yodd i snet it to your email.

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 14:57:55 Reply

forot the link http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/53840_1.php

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 15:27:45 Reply

OK spicing my parts up right now
Also yodd if your reading this I sent you a buddy invite

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Response to 30 hour collab 3 2007-04-28 15:53:04 Reply

At 4/28/07 02:57 PM, Pezboy440 wrote: forot the link http://denvish.net/ulf/280407/53840_1.php

Pezboy, none of your parts look too good. You should really try putting a lot of time into one good segment.