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Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 00:48:21 Reply

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Chapter 1

Intro:
In the virtual world of Windows, where you can zap into the internet. It was suppose to be nice to be virtual, no conflicts right? Wrong, this virtual world was just like real life, sex, fights, money, website cities, and war . If a person were to get killed, it would be a ip auto ban.

Beginning:
Present
It's been 50 years since the Newgrounds Civil War ended, it was said to be the greatest war in all of the internet. Complete was now 67 years old. He went into Newgrounds GraveYard. He looked at all the names of the people who got IP banned during that war. It was horrifying and a tear dropper just to see some of the people you fought with, except they were IP banned and you would never see them in the Virtual World again. They were not just co-fighters, they were friends... He dropped and starred at some of the graves of people who he didn't know.

Past...
Newgrounds, a great city. Filled with movie theaters that you can watch flashes. Filled with clubs that you can discuss in. Not exactly a good vacation city, just a nice place to chat with people. Complete, walked through the open streets. He said hello to NG members who know him, it was just a typical day. The capital of Newgrounds, known as "Newgrounds Head Office" had a big meeting going on. The meeting was between Tom, Wade, Jim, and Rose.

"Honestly, we need to change Newgrounds around a bit, Newgrounds should be a place where people can roam the streets free, we need to get rid of our dictatorship government Tom, the people of NG should vote if they want these decisions!" Wade spoke out.

"We would not have this city if people were allowed to vote, I will always be the true leader, mods protect the streets, if I don't like certain people, they will be investigated against their will, this way we won't have to worry about murderers or robberies," said Tom.

"We have to TAKE RISKS!" yelled Rose.

"Look, our city is perfect the way it is-" said Tom who was interrupted.

"Perfect? HA! People have to go on the streets and have to TRY to not like guilty of anything they didn't do, these days, the mods will search you for no reason!" said Wade.

"Tom is the leader, let him do whatever he wants," said Jim.

"You know what, I can't stand working here, I am going to buy some space, make my own City and be free!" said Wade as he stormed out of the building.

Wade made an annoucement through the speaker that he was leaving Newgrounds, so was Ross. Many old school NG users followed and they made a small town, about 100 miles from Newgrounds. They only had about 200 NG members.

Over the months, Tom slowly lost more and more NG members as his dictatorship grew, he made more mods which patrolled the streets and made even more people leave. Wade probably had about 700 by now. Tom wasn't going to take this, he prepared the NG Military for a surprise attack on Wade's "Newgrounds Rebels". Complete joined with the Rebels.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 00:49:25 Reply

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Chapter 1

Intro:
In the virtual world of Windows, where you can zap into the internet. It was suppose to be nice to be virtual, no conflicts right? Wrong, this virtual world was just like real life, sex, fights, money, website cities, and war . If a person were to get killed, it would be a ip auto ban.

Beginning:
Present
It's been 50 years since the Newgrounds Civil War ended, it was said to be the greatest war in all of the internet. Complete was now 67 years old. He went into Newgrounds GraveYard. He looked at all the names of the people who got IP banned during that war. It was horrifying and a tear dropper just to see some of the people you fought with, except they were IP banned and you would never see them in the Virtual World again. They were not just co-fighters, they were friends... He dropped and starred at some of the graves of people who he didn't know.

Past...
Newgrounds, a great city. Filled with movie theaters that you can watch flashes. Filled with clubs that you can discuss in. Not exactly a good vacation city, just a nice place to chat with people. Complete, walked through the open streets. He said hello to NG members who know him, it was just a typical day. The capital of Newgrounds, known as "Newgrounds Head Office" had a big meeting going on. The meeting was between Tom, Wade, Jim, and Rose.

"Honestly, we need to change Newgrounds around a bit, Newgrounds should be a place where people can roam the streets free, we need to get rid of our dictatorship government Tom, the people of NG should vote if they want these decisions!" Wade spoke out.

"We would not have this city if people were allowed to vote, I will always be the true leader, mods protect the streets, if I don't like certain people, they will be investigated against their will, this way we won't have to worry about murderers or robberies," said Tom.

"We have to TAKE RISKS!" yelled Rose.

"Look, our city is perfect the way it is-" said Tom who was interrupted.

"Perfect? HA! People have to go on the streets and have to TRY to not like guilty of anything they didn't do, these days, the mods will search you for no reason!" said Wade.

"Tom is the leader, let him do whatever he wants," said Jim.

"You know what, I can't stand working here, I am going to buy some space, make my own City and be free!" said Wade as he stormed out of the building.

Wade made an annoucement through the speaker that he was leaving Newgrounds, so was Ross. Many old school NG users followed and they made a small town, about 100 miles from Newgrounds. They only had about 200 NG members.

Over the months, Tom slowly lost more and more NG members as his dictatorship grew, he made more mods which patrolled the streets and made even more people leave. Wade probably had about 700 by now. Tom wasn't going to take this, he prepared the NG Military for a surprise attack on Wade's "Newgrounds Rebels". Complete joined with the Rebels.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 00:51:17 Reply

I'm not feeling it.


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I run on Mountain Dew.

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 00:55:02 Reply

Hate to break it to ya, but IP banning doesn't do crap to most people. =|

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 01:08:59 Reply

Chapter 2
The Military charged up the mountains of unowned land. They had only rifles.

10-6, who was a Rebel Member, was taking his daily walk when he saw at least 1000 Ng soldiers charging to Rebel Hill. If they managed to pass Rebel Hill, they would get access into Newgrounds Rebel City. 10-6 rushed back and met Wade and told him what he saw. Wade, at first didn't believe him seeing as he was a new member. But it worried him, he only had 100 ng members that were experienced in combat. He made an announcement for all of them to rally at Rebel Hill. The soldiers grabbed some stuff they took from Newgrounds when they left and met at the Hill.

They put down 4 mines a little ahead of Rebel Hill and placed sandbag bunkers and put down machine guns on them. Some of them hid behind trees and rocks with rifles shaking in their hands.

"How are we going to take on 1000 soldiers!" screamed Memorycard who was on of the 100 soldier.

"WE WILL DIE TRYING! IF TOM WANTS WAR, HE WILL GET IT! REBELS, GIVE THEM ALL YOU GOT, DON'T HESITATE, DON'T STOP, UNLEASH YOUR STRENGTH AGAINST THEM!" yelled Wade as he held his Rifle.

The first few Ng members stepped on some mines and 40 died. They charged up the hill with the machine guns firing at them. There was no cover for the NG soldiers.

Around 7 Rebel machine guns fired down at them. They charged up the hill hoping they would make it. The hill was pretty high up, around 200 NG soldiers were killed. 7 Ng members made it to the top and took out the machine gunners. The rifle men began firing at all the advancing NG members. Everytime a new NG member made it to the top, they would be shot by all the rifle fire. Around 400 NG members died from getting to the top of the hill. The members were being shot by 93 rebels. Then 27 NG Users made it to the top at the sametime.

They scattered for cover and distracted other Rebels while more and more made it to the top. Memorycard through a grenade and killed about 30 hiding behind a huge rock.

"GET OUT OF COVER AND SHOOT THE ADVANCING NG MEMBERS, FORGET DEATH!" screamed Wade as he pulled his rifle up and shot 2 NG members. All the rebels stood up and fired onto the advancing users. Another 100 died from that. Newgrounds had lost 700 Ng Soldiers. The last 300 ran back to Newgrounds City, which is now known, as the Newgrounds Republic.

There was only 79 rebels left, but they did an excellent job at fending off 1000. Wade could tell that Tom did not train the NG soldiers well, but Wade taught his better.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 11:56:42 Reply

Chapter 3
Wade needed to plan out better defenses for the Rebel City. If Tom attacked one more time, they would get past bunker hill and destroy the city, Wade could not let that happen. He sat down with Zen-Trai, who was one of the 100 soldiers. Zen-Trai was suppose to be a expert at defense back at newgrounds.

"How are we going to survive another attack? We don't have sentry guns, artillery or any of that stuff!" said Wade.

"We need to ask for help from other websites, Ross did bring a lot of E-Money with him," said Zen-Trai.

Wade looked up and thought of a website, his hands started shaking and he sweat. Zen-Trai looked at him.

"Any idea's?" Zen-Trai asked.

"Yeah, if I don't come back in one day, then that means I am dead," said Wade as he got up and left the small 3 story office.

He traveled a mile out from Rebel City and past 10-6, who was the new annual scout. He walked and sprang. Wade carried 3 Million E-Dollars, it was most of Rebel Newgrounds money. As he got closer to this deadly site, a storm started to come in.

Wade stood infront of the city, the City itself was just one GIGANTIC building. He looked at the sign: 4chan...

Wade walked in. It was museum gallery. Halls led everywhere, he went up to the desk.

"Hello, what can I do for you?" said the lady.

"Look, long story, a small amount of Rebels from newgrounds separated and we made our own city, Tom however who is the owner of Newgrounds made a attack on us. We survived it and we are looking for help from 4chan," said Wade.

"Sure, shall I contact /i/ or /a/ or maybe even /c/?" said the Lady.

"No, I want the /b/ army!" said Wade.

"WHAT? No don't, you risk your own life if you try to get them to help you, they're powerful raiders and whoever goes down their hall, usually never comes back, ever since they destroyed habbo hotel completely in 2015 they have been getting more members!" said the Lady in shock.

"Which way leads to /b/?" asked Wade.

She pointed to a hall that said "Random" above it.

Wade took a deep breath and walked down the hall.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 12:13:20 Reply

I'm sorry... I just don't get it. How can one IP ban another? It would just be those with administrative banning privileges that would do all the fighting. Can you please explain it more please? I don't get it, so I can't appreciate it.


Hail 7chan.

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 12:17:52 Reply

you sound like your ten years old


i know, i know, my profile rocks, no need to tell me

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 12:23:41 Reply

Well, I think it's a pretty good idea. Looking forward to more chapters.

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:00:15 Reply

At 4/22/07 12:13 PM, PlatinumWarrior wrote: I'm sorry... I just don't get it. How can one IP ban another? It would just be those with administrative banning privileges that would do all the fighting. Can you please explain it more please? I don't get it, so I can't appreciate it.

No, think of it as real life, when you die, you are dead and will not be able to experience real life again. If you get killed in the internet, you can not access it anymore but you're still alive in the real world.

At 4/22/07 12:17 PM, BIOHAZARD wrote: you sound like your ten years old

I don't have the time to respond to immature brats like yourself who don't know proper grammar or making a constructed sentence.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:03:47 Reply

At 4/22/07 12:51 AM, Rosenrot-I wrote: I'm not feeling it.

Me either it looks like some sort of pathetic hidden attempt to suck up to Wade.

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:06:43 Reply

At 4/22/07 01:03 PM, Pog wrote:
At 4/22/07 12:51 AM, Rosenrot-I wrote: I'm not feeling it.
Me either it looks like some sort of pathetic hidden attempt to suck up to Wade.

It's a story for fun, but obviously people like you can't appreciate me taking my time to write a story. So go on, would you like to post more bullshit in this thread to make it more crappy?


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:09:16 Reply

Great story, could I cameo?


Don't care

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:11:36 Reply

At 4/22/07 01:09 PM, Pog wrote: You want more shit... here have a toilet full...

I reported you to a mod.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:12:27 Reply

At 4/22/07 11:56 AM, Complete wrote:

stuff

Good job Complete see if you can feature me in the next one!


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:13:25 Reply

At 4/22/07 01:12 PM, PropagandaClock wrote:
At 4/22/07 11:56 AM, Complete wrote:
stuff

Good job Complete see if you can feature me in the next one!

Private message me.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 13:17:51 Reply

At 4/22/07 11:56 AM, Complete wrote: Good shit...

Make more plz!


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 14:09:41 Reply

I love how Wade's the good guy for once.

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 16:29:14 Reply

Chapter 4
Wade walked through the hall, pictures of shoop da whoop, a guy getting his dick ripped off, everything! He felt ill as he walked down the hall. Then he made it to the hang out room. Loud music played with /b/tard members screaming and shitting on each other. Wade tried to speak.

"Excus-"

As soon as wade said that, EVERYONE in that room turned around and looked at him.

"I am looking for the leader of /b/," said Wade.

One /b/tard member pointed right. However he tried to jump on Wade, Wade grabbed him and twisted his neck. The rest of the /b/tard members stopped. Wade moved to the other room and met the leader, his name was "Nekrozoa".

Wade gave him 3 million e-dollars.

"Look, can you help me defend my site until I can get it built up!" said Wade.

Nekrozoa slowly ate some of the money.

"Don't eat that! You use it to buy stuff!" said Wade.

"I know, 4chan doesn't buy, we raid and steal!" said Nekrozoa.

"Well, will you help us?" asked Wade.

"Depends, make us lulz," said Nekrozoa

"Typical 4chan behavior," thought Wade.

Wade then took a picture of an Anime Character and placed Shoop Da Whoop on it. Nekrozoa laughed so hard.

"Haha, okay we will help, /b/ will be there in a week!" said Nekrozoa as he was still laughing.

Wade knew this site was very odd, but very powerful.

Meanwhile..

Back at the Rebel City, Complete was sitting at a OutPost with his feet along side the wall and with esko-man beside him.

"Do you think any Newground Members will attack?" asked Esko-Man.

"Maybe, hey suppose Wade is dead?" asked Complete

"Ha, I doub-" said Esko-Man as he got interrupted.

They saw 14 Newgrounds Tanks approaching the base. They were rolling up Rebel Hill. Tom obviously wanted Wade and the Rebels dead.

"SHIT, ALERT THE TROOPS!" said Complete as they gathered there rockets and headed to the Entrance of Rebel Newgrounds.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 16:34:58 Reply

it was said to be the greatest war in all of the internet.

As much a Newgrounds rawks it is not big enough to host the greatest war on the internet.

Yet

my opinion = fact

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 16:52:43 Reply

It sounds like you're going to let the Rebels win. I don't want them to; It sounds like Wade and Ross just had a fit in the briefing room then went out and made a city because he was pissed. I'm on Tom's side for this. Team Tom!

Make it real.
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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 18:03:45 Reply

Finnish it...


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-22 21:21:46 Reply

At 4/22/07 04:52 PM, The-Darkphoenix wrote: It sounds like you're going to let the Rebels win. I don't want them to; It sounds like Wade and Ross just had a fit in the briefing room then went out and made a city because he was pissed. I'm on Tom's side for this. Team Tom!

Make it real.

Their will be a surprising ending. Not one of those "YAY GOOD GUYS WIN!"

Thats all I can tell you.

Also, next chapter will be tomorrow


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 12:19:53 Reply

Chapter 5

Only 20 troops went to the front entrance as they shake nervously and were waiting for Wade.

Racistbassist held up his rocket and aimed at the hill. The first two tanks made it up and they stopped and lifted their turrents up. The tanks fired into the city and blew up some buildings! The city wasn't that big, the Capital was a 3 story house, it wasn't as tall as Newgrounds 94 story capital. Then two more tanks came up.

"BLOW UP THOSE THANKS!" apackageofchicken screamed.

KerfuffleMach2 took his rocket and put a missile inside it and he got someone to hold the back as he aimed at the tank with patience. He fired and it hit the tank directly. It managed to disable. But as it blew up, 3 more tanks came up the hill. All of the tanks fired again and blew up more buildings. There was screaming on the streets.

"We lose, Tom won..." said Racistbassist.

Then they heard screaming:

"NO U" said a person in the forest right next to the city.

Then they saw huge hordes of people with Afro's running out and jumping onto the tanks and making a /b/erlin wall so they couldn't get out. The tanks were all hijacked and 4chan took them back to base.

"WADE, HE GOT 4CHAN?!?!" screamed Complete.

Wade walked up to those 20 solders.

"Thank you, for trying to hold off and not being a coward!" said Wade.

"Your welcome, but around 11 buildings were destroyed," said apackageofchicken.

"Don't worry, with 4chan defending us, we can get a bigger city, maybe even as big as Newgrounds, and a better wall also more soldiers!" said Wade happily.

They put down their helmets and had a nice drink of water and all of them thought "We thought we would never have this rest again!"


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 17:17:46 Reply

At 4/23/07 12:19 PM, Complete wrote: Chapter 5

There were a few mistakes i noticed and it was'nt as good as the other chapters, Also you did'nt put me in it, I'm heartbroken.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 17:26:39 Reply

At 4/22/07 01:00 PM, Complete wrote: I don't have the time to respond to immature brats like yourself who don't know proper grammar or making a constructed sentence.

1) You clearly did have the time to respond to him, as you responded to him.

2) That's not a properly constructed sentence at all. Don't you mean "or how to construct a sentence"?

3) All these "WHAT IF NG WUZ A CITY" stories are so lame.

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 17:34:17 Reply

lol, nice story. Maybe you should write a book about it.


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 17:35:30 Reply

At 4/23/07 05:26 PM, reality-check7 wrote: 3) All these "WHAT IF NG WUZ A CITY" stories are so lame.

Atleast there entertaining, You cruel bastard i want to know the ending, If he stops writing this because of people like you I'LL SET MY RABID HOES ON YO ASS >:(


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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 17:36:44 Reply

At 4/23/07 05:26 PM, reality-check7 wrote: 1) You clearly did have the time to respond to him, as you responded to him.

2) That's not a properly constructed sentence at all. Don't you mean "or how to construct a sentence"?

3) All these "WHAT IF NG WUZ A CITY" stories are so lame.

you should listen to your name and get one

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Response to Newgrounds: Civil War 2007-04-23 17:38:30 Reply

At 4/23/07 05:36 PM, kdfsjljklgjfg wrote: you should listen to your name and get one

Any particular reason?