I drew this today, id like to know peoples opinions and a description why
that picture is fuckin amazing, i tell you something mate ur a natural
if you can read this, you can read, well done
At 4/21/07 11:21 AM, the-dunce wrote: It sucks. 0.10/10.
Who said he was trying to go for something you'd find in an art museum? Maybe he wanted to go with a cartoonish style.
At 4/22/07 04:41 PM, Sunglasses wrote:At 4/21/07 11:21 AM, the-dunce wrote: It sucks. 0.10/10.Who said he was trying to go for something you'd find in an art museum? Maybe he wanted to go with a cartoonish style.
yeah my drawings are 90% of the time cartoonish
At 4/22/07 05:43 PM, InkyBoy wrote:At 4/21/07 11:05 AM, ALBQjew wrote: I drew this today, id like to know peoples opinions and a description whyMm, it's... lacking.
4/10
color? I am trying to find good colors right now, Style? Im trying to improve on that., more detail? I'll try but its probably not going to bethat great putting detail to basic cartoons.
uhh, its not that great, its not all bad though, probally better then what i could do though. the shoulders are to big. 6.9/10
lol, 69
I'm a banana.
Thanks Razac for the picture in my signature, and November for making it.
At 4/21/07 11:05 AM, ALBQjew wrote: I drew this today, id like to know peoples opinions and a description why
Ugh... not this again...
Okay:
-Anatomy: They aren't meant to be realistic but some thing just
don't fit (eg. the arms)
-Colour it (necessary for YOUR pic)
-Try drawing profile, frontal AND the back of their heads. Also do the most difficuilt angle you discovered yet. Most people think this is from the roof looking down to the corner.
-Eat it, and try over (Not only you but everybody does it!)
4,695/10
At 4/21/07 11:05 AM, ALBQjew wrote: I drew this today, id like to know peoples opinions and a description why
It's pointless to rate art when you didn't bother mentioning what style, kind of look you were going for -_-;
This pic may be exactly what you envisioned... or a bit lacking... or even better >.>;
a lot of cartoonists draw their characters a little bit weird on purpose. it that cartoons "look"
Hm... look cartoonish, i like that. What about... 8/10? I would recommend a steady but relaxed grip on your pencil and modify the lineart on the street. Otherwise, good job^^
yeah im kind of sorry I didn't say my style, skipped my mind thats all, my style is normaly with lage eyes and head but a body that kind of balances it, I guess you could say its like metalmavrick but the eyes and body arn't extermely out of porportion and I am almost done coloring this so I might submit a colored picture today, I was a bit shaky when I was drawing this (it was 12:30 p.m. so I was around falling asleep). Thanks for the tips but the guy on the right has to have wide shoulders to identify aspects of muscularity.
At 4/23/07 07:21 PM, ALBQjew wrote: yeah im kind of sorry I didn't say my style, skipped my mind thats all, my style is normaly with lage eyes and head but a body that kind of balances it, I guess you could say its like metalmavrick but the eyes and body arn't extermely out of porportion and I am almost done coloring this so I might submit a colored picture today, I was a bit shaky when I was drawing this (it was 12:30 p.m. so I was around falling asleep). Thanks for the tips but the guy on the right has to have wide shoulders to identify aspects of muscularity.
See what I'm saying? based on what you said.. this is exactly how you wanted it to look. And if that is the case, then why rate it?
Critique it? Okay.
-The street dashes need to be straight
-The guy with the big arms glasses are un-even
-The trash can is pushed up too close up on the wall
-Graffiti will look better if done in the coloring phase with out making a black outline around it
Just sit back and look at it. or sleeep the look at it again when you wake up ( basically when you're fresh) and you will see all these little errors easily.
Keep it up tho, the style is your artworks "look"
oh yeah and the guy flicking the big guy off....
-his left arm is way longer than his right arm -_-;
2 things i noticed....
1st the black guy has penguin feet :P
2nd the road markings havent got any perspective :)
other than that keep it up!
yeah I am pissed of because I colored the picture and I friken lost it. I did see some things after I looked at it a bit the guy on the rights glasses are unevnen in size and the guy on the left has a longer left arm I did however fix th road a bit and the trash can. I am going to draw something new though right now.
sorry about double posting but Id rew something new, and I would like people to critique it this time, my style normally is characters with large eyes and heads, and I can basicly say Im not a good background artist
My penis draw's better.
But i like it. 4.3/10.
Neck width does not match arm width.
Heads too big.
You know what? I just realised why i LOVE Newgrounds. The witty, humorous replies. Such as
"Why is there a cock in the top left corner?"
or
"Rape!"
You have diminished my faith in the world.
+1 cool point to all of NG.
At 4/24/07 09:15 AM, ALBQjew wrote: sorry about double posting but Id rew something new, and I would like people to critique it this time, my style normally is characters with large eyes and heads, and I can basicly say Im not a good background artist
-the tall guys right arm looks a bit dislocated.
-the neck does look a bit too wide (more than twice the arm size?) but maybe you want it to be like that.
-Why do use use a straight edge for the sidewalk and poster.. but then freehand draw the bricks?
The neck could be thinner I see but I might not change it, the right arm I am going to change so it doesn't look like its falling off. Im also fixing the bricks as Vortex pointed out, it really doesn't make sense, Im going to color it too, oh and rape isn't a reason to post.
I really can't color with pencils so I went over the drawing in paint.net, I recomend the program and its free too. Im also sorry it came out really pixilated. my style is cartoony with bigg eyes so please critique.
At 4/26/07 06:56 PM, ALBQjew wrote: I really can't color with pencils so I went over the drawing in paint.net, I recomend the program and its free too. Im also sorry it came out really pixilated. my style is cartoony with bigg eyes so please critique.
Yeah the pixels throw if off XD
never seen a street completely black before. not even those blacktop ones.
See how it looks with the street like... set in each for RGB
At 4/26/07 07:08 PM, Vortex00 wrote: See how it looks with the street like... set in each for RGB
oops.. set at 50
I did set the RGB to 50, not so much of a good difference, Its a bit difficult to set it to any level in this program I think.
