Here's just a drawing I did in Calculus.
Yes, I was bored.
I like it mucho. It's a great drawing, but I think it would look even better if the sharp blade type things on his back were taken out.
Good,needs a face 9/10 if you add a face i will make it 10/10.
A solid 4/10.
I would rate it higher if it were colored in, or if this wasn't the same tired schlock we see every day in the art forum.
At 3/31/07 05:22 PM, Bolo wrote: A solid 4/10.
I would rate it higher if it were colored in, or if this wasn't the same tired schlock we see every day in the art forum.
So, you're going to rate it off of how you dislike me?
How very appropriate.
At 3/31/07 05:26 PM, Memorize wrote:At 3/31/07 05:22 PM, Bolo wrote: A solid 4/10.So, you're going to rate it off of how you dislike me?
I would rate it higher if it were colored in, or if this wasn't the same tired schlock we see every day in the art forum.
How very appropriate.
What? I gave you my reasoning. We see these kinds of topics every day, where a person posts a sketch they did in school or whatever, and it gets old pretty quick.
I never said yours was bad, I only said that it could be enhanced via coloring and perhaps more detail.
At 3/31/07 05:26 PM, Memorize wrote:At 3/31/07 05:22 PM, Bolo wrote: A solid 4/10.So, you're going to rate it off of how you dislike me?
I would rate it higher if it were colored in, or if this wasn't the same tired schlock we see every day in the art forum.
How very appropriate.
He didn't say he dislikes you. So what, everyone has their bad critiques sometimes, but you don't have to act like it's a big deal.
I kinda rate it a 5/10.
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At 3/31/07 05:34 PM, Bl00dRedKnife wrote:
He didn't say he dislikes you. So what, everyone has their bad critiques sometimes, but you don't have to act like it's a big deal.
I kinda rate it a 5/10.
Because, I said "critique". Critique. I didn't say rate.
It looks good......seems more like a base to a drawing if u ask me.....adding some colour and shading might be a good idea...and some sort of face would make it quite well done
it looks good add some detail and color it and it would look alot better, also either make the head into a helmet or put a face n the globe
looks very good, I think the left foot needs alittle more tweaking as its shap apears alil off.
the spiky things on the back, if they are removed replace with a solid something or else there will be a odd void which doesnt look grood. The spikey thingsin his arms are kind of off, but that doesnt really matter. Otherwise it look grood, paint it up !
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At 3/31/07 05:36 PM, Memorize wrote:At 3/31/07 05:34 PM, Bl00dRedKnife wrote: I kinda rate it a 5/10.Because, I said "critique". Critique. I didn't say rate.
Then why didn't you fix this misunderstanding when bird-man rated it 9/10?
But, back to the reason why you started this thread. It's an okay drawing but it doesn't look complete.
At 3/31/07 11:55 PM, Ssawa wrote:
Then why didn't you fix this misunderstanding when bird-man rated it 9/10?
Because even if Bolo rated it, he rated it by what I said rather than the actual drawing. Yes, I did it in class because I was bored. BUT, I would at least like a critique along with a bad rating (even if I asked for none). I wanted to know what I could do to make it look better before I colored it or tried to tweak it in any way.
9/10 damn good job, u quiet an artist dude
I'd give it a 3/10, since it's just a sketch and doesn't yet have any coloring, shading, etc. The other thing is that thhe lines are not very accurate and need to be straightened out. But once colored and worked one, it will make a pretty decent picture.
At 4/1/07 05:35 AM, TheGriffenFreak wrote: 9/10 damn good job, u quiet an artist dude
Or your just a complete moron that doesn't even bother to read ANYTING others have to say. CRITIQUE goddamnit! Your posts really annoy me! Get off the Art Forum!
@Memorize
Your drawing is pretty good... I'd say: 8,152/10
It misses something special. I don't know what...
The left leg isn't in order with the rest of the body and (sorry I'm saying this) you should colour it.
Well, with shading and color it would look a lot better, but that's obvious.
If you're not going to draw a face in the helmet maybe making it look shiny as if it were mirrored would help?
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