My First attempt at a Flash Movie..

[chasemanjansen]

This is more of a beta, really.

It's title is "Machine", and I plan on making other parts of the machine moveable. I don't think it's going to be Portal worthy, though.

I obtained the machine via boredom in 4th hour, scanned it, and began making a movie.

As you can see, electricity shoots through the rod with the plus on it every 6 seconds or so.

The music in the background is "Brinstar - Subterranean" from Super Metroid.

Rate from 1-10 if you don't mind, also add your thoughts.

[chasemanjansen]

I see... nobody loves me...

/wrist

[Shittywall]

Hmm. Im not sure this should be considered a "movie" yet.... All it is is a looping picture + sound with a very uninteresting electricity spurt. I suggest you make something more interesting and animating it.

Also, just cause someone doesnt post on your thread after 10 minutes doesnt mean you should double post.

[Gi-go]

I kind of agree with Wall.

It has the potential to be cool, but it isnt much yet.

Good start, but keep working.

-Seth

[chasemanjansen]

At 3/20/07 10:38 PM, Gi-go wrote: I kind of agree with Wall.

It has the potential to be cool, but it isnt much yet.

I'm not sure if I said this, but I will add more things to the machine and make it operate better sooner. This is more of a "beta", to get it out there.

[Mushaboom]

Even as a beta this isn't very good to be honest, because it's basically a still loop with a 0,1 second flash in it. That's not animation. It has some potential, but you're gonna have to stick some effort into it. For example, when you click the horn, some Thai lesbians pop out of it. That'd be awesome!

[patu1]

i am with wall...
also make it smaller