At 3/15/07 05:01 PM, Master117chief wrote: some 1 rate it ove done it for zoom collab rate it 1-10
eww.. too messy...clean it up..but i see what you tried to do there, nice concept
At 3/1/07 10:25 AM, Master117chief wrote: ok here you go. I thing i gonna do an army of robots!
Awesome, the one thing I would improve on this though would be his knee joints, it just looks like his solid metal legs have a bend in them.
At 3/15/07 05:01 PM, Master117chief wrote: some 1 rate it ove done it for zoom collab rate it 1-10
Good concept and all, but it looks like this 'modern art' shit that reeks of non-talent.
Sorry it had to be said.
meh...not that good..check out my weapon tutorial..it doesnt tell you how to animate automatics, but it tells you how to animate guns, and it'll hel you quite a bit... i hope :D
At 3/16/07 05:19 PM, TomAzza wrote: meh...not that good..check out my weapon tutorial..it doesnt tell you how to animate automatics, but it tells you how to animate guns, and it'll hel you quite a bit... i hope :D
that help me . . thanks i will do semething tomarow
U
Some other people said before that you don't have the basics before you add detail, so just to expand on that idea...i drew you this picture...the point being you need a human frame that's stance is believable. The robot looks like he'd fall backward, his feet are both in front of his body, and the other drawings just feel rigid. To get this out of my system, personally, i drew a bunch of scribbles in the form of a human running or jumping or whatever just trying to get it to look like it was human. I did a few pages of this, that's all, just to get the feel of it, so that's a suggestion. Yeah so I'd say work on the forms and shapes that make up bodies, maybe try life drawing (drawing people doing things, sitting, walking, w/e).
</mythoughts>
it`s too messy..clean it up, and use a medium brush...or something, try shading and putting a little more work in your stuff... and post the pic once it`s finished, posting the process pic by pic is pretty useless unless your discussing tecniques.
work on anatomy too
At 3/20/07 03:37 PM, Master117chief wrote: ok thats the last
Well, what can i say. All in all it looks ok. The shading is fine. The anatomy is better than in any of your other drawings, but still, it's kinda messy...
Before i go any further, i kinda want to know, are you still drawing with a mouse, or got a tablet already?
Drag0nSnak3© wuz here... that means me!
