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Valiance

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Posted at: 8/10/07 01:39 PM

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This is going really slow, we need everyone to band together or find some good animators to join so we can finish off collab


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Just checking... Is my part in the collab? I know it's not directly death by shaking but a death is caused by shaking because without the shaking, he wouldn't have shot the guy. Even so, the part is graphically sound and it would be funny to mix it up about halfway through the alphabet with something unexpected.

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Posted at: 8/10/07 03:32 PM

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Frozen said I should join. O: Any parts left?

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I was also wondering if L is open, cuz then i would make a stick animation (just because theres not enough enough time for full character animation) for L is for laser of a guy doging a banks obstacle course of laser grids and stuff all towards the vault then at the end the guard shoots him in the eye with his laser pointer and it blinds him causing to trip and fall thus impaling himself or something.

HE DIES FROM THE LASER POINTER STILL DYING FROM LASER JUST THE UNEXPECTED ONE

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Posted at: 8/10/07 11:58 PM

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At 8/6/07 06:30 PM, CybermonkeyStudios wrote: K, I've finished it essentially, i wanna know if its good enough to get in before i do the fine touches (background, New font, and the final transition of the him shooting the screen) so am i in?

http://denvish.net/ulf/060807/62869_Quag swag.php

Well I don't like it, sounds to me by your idea for l, you like going off on tangents. I think your a good animator but you got the idea wrong. What does everyone else think of his part?


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Posted at: 8/11/07 10:43 AM

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Bump, anyone want to do a letter in the collab?


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Posted at: 8/11/07 11:16 AM

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At 8/10/07 11:57 AM, Valiance wrote: Parts available

[b] FREE
[d] FREE
[l] FREE
[o] FREE
[w] FREE
[y] FREE
[z] FREE

Tripping metal can choose from these letters amirite?

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At 8/11/07 11:16 AM, Matt-Frozenfire wrote: Tripping metal can choose from these letters amirite?

Spoilt for choice, isn't he.


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Valiance

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Posted at: 8/11/07 11:24 AM

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At 8/11/07 11:16 AM, Matt-Frozenfire wrote:
At 8/10/07 11:57 AM, Valiance wrote: Parts available

[b] FREE
[d] FREE
[l] FREE
[o] FREE
[w] FREE
[y] FREE
[z] FREE
Tripping metal can choose from these letters amirite?

Yeh, i sent him a Pm, with those letters plus a few ideas for some of the letters if he needs help.


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Posted at: 8/11/07 11:36 AM

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I am so close to finishing my apocalypse part, im over working on it, hopefully there isn't any mistakes because I couldn't be bothered going back, I got last scene to do which is 70% done then I I will squish it together, I used so many layers of blood in this once scene, watch this it is pretty cool, I can't add anythign else to it or it might lag.

Apocalypse

After I do this I will go back to working on R which is my last part and I started it already

More people join collab or take more parts people


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Posted at: 8/11/07 11:40 AM

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Err won't upload my flash owell you will have to see it later


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I'll take it as a no, w/e........

I might be making a dead collab collab with my friends anyways, a bunch of parts that are from collabs that died b4 they got to the portal or were rejected (like this one which would be my first)

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At 8/11/07 11:50 AM, CybermonkeyStudios wrote: I'll take it as a no, w/e........

I might be making a dead collab collab with my friends anyways, a bunch of parts that are from collabs that died b4 they got to the portal or were rejected (like this one which would be my first)

MM yeh, I don't have a problem with your graphics/sound/technique just that the idea didn't represent the collab like i was refering to earlier. I know you want an author spot though, I would let you have another go but I think you should just do something simple and short. Q is the worse letter too.


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Posted at: 8/11/07 02:03 PM

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What should I have the demon at the end say, or have him say nothing, i was thinking liek die mortal


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I finished apocalyspe but its like 2 mins long and lags a bit lol, i think i put too much in it. I might make it into a movie and cut it down for the collab if need be. Whats a site to upload files over 1mb


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Posted at: 8/11/07 03:23 PM

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Ok sweet I uploaded the shiz on my deviant site

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6203 8914/

Lag and music can be anoying, what you guys think, Sure you will love the death scenes.


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hmmmm, well i get what ur saying, but im not gonna have another go, the only reason being is that im working constantly for the next little bit so i would only slow down the progress of the collab, but i wish u all good luck and look forward for this collabs release.

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i would say get rid of most of the slow tweens and pointless shots of the ground. And speed up the part where the ghosts come out of the ground.. it took too long. Also the death scenes were great, but they took too long to happen.. like one guy sat there on the ground for like 20 seconds before he started bleeding. All in all i would say reduce that to at least 50 seconds .. it was just too long.

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How have you all been..hmmm.

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Download P
http://denvish.net/ulf/110807/74806_P_is _for_Pilot.fla

Watch i (Included is a song and And preloader and Replay button)
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1367647/

Whenever Denvish stops acting gay i will give you the FLA.. or gimme your email.

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Posted at: 8/12/07 02:13 AM

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At 8/11/07 10:17 PM, Matt-Frozenfire wrote: Download P
http://denvish.net/ulf/110807/74806_P_is _for_Pilot.fla

Watch i (Included is a song and And preloader and Replay button)
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1367647/

Whenever Denvish stops acting gay i will give you the FLA.. or gimme your email.

Email is spartanluck@gmail.com

You can pick a 3rd letter


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At 8/11/07 10:17 PM, Matt-Frozenfire wrote: Download P
http://denvish.net/ulf/110807/74806_P_is _for_Pilot.fla

I couldn't see pigions in it


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At 8/11/07 03:23 PM, Valiance wrote: Ok sweet I uploaded the shiz on my deviant site

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6203 8914/

Lag and music can be anoying, what you guys think, Sure you will love the death scenes.

Hey man, nice part. I thought the detail was awesome, and you have a talent for animating blood. But seriously...its pretty long. Try to up the pacing a bit more, quicker cuts, zooms and pans. Shorten the scenes or something. Everyone elses part is like...20 seconds at the most.
Also I think you should have the title of your part "A is for Apocalypse" at the end of the part, it'll work so much better trust me. And shorten that title part aswell.
Basically yeah its pretty good, just shorten it so its still epic but fits with all the other parts.

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Posted at: 8/12/07 08:11 AM

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whaddya mean you can't see the pigeons?

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At 8/12/07 06:35 AM, chillyphilly wrote:
At 8/11/07 03:23 PM, Valiance wrote: Ok sweet I uploaded the shiz on my deviant site

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6203 8914/

Lag and music can be anoying, what you guys think, Sure you will love the death scenes.
Hey man, nice part. I thought the detail was awesome, and you have a talent for animating blood. But seriously...its pretty long. Try to up the pacing a bit more, quicker cuts, zooms and pans. Shorten the scenes or something. Everyone elses part is like...20 seconds at the most.
Also I think you should have the title of your part "A is for Apocalypse" at the end of the part, it'll work so much better trust me. And shorten that title part aswell.
Basically yeah its pretty good, just shorten it so its still epic but fits with all the other parts.

Yeh basically what you said I have already done since that post, i also got rid of all of the blurs pretty much so it doesn't look as good but plays heeps faster, changed music too. i havn't finished editing it yet

Plus I put the text in at start as it is the last part so i thought it would look cooler having the demon put his hand over then fading to credits. ( it starts with Z and ends A as Arthur suggested i think). Would you agree with that?


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Posted at: 8/12/07 09:31 AM

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At 8/12/07 08:11 AM, Matt-Frozenfire wrote: whaddya mean you can't see the pigeons?

i remember you put pigeons flying at the start of the movie and they had air around them, all i see is clouds and nothing gets hit by the plane, I can see a dead pigeon on the pilot window though.


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Posted at: 8/12/07 09:38 AM

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We need more people to join collab, or take up parts.

Did you guys like the quagswag part? it was posted 2 pages back i think.


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Posted at: 8/12/07 09:52 AM

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yes.. why didnt you take it?

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At 8/12/07 09:31 AM, Valiance wrote:
At 8/12/07 08:11 AM, Matt-Frozenfire wrote: whaddya mean you can't see the pigeons?
i remember you put pigeons flying at the start of the movie and they had air around them, all i see is clouds and nothing gets hit by the plane, I can see a dead pigeon on the pilot window though.

then you should use the link i provided first to dl. because its not corrupt.
There is something wrong with denvish. i will just email them to you.

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Posted at: 8/12/07 02:37 PM

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http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/6203 8914/

A part updated, lol the flying demons and part after that are too quick I should make it a little longer in those frames. Anyway How does it look now and thign I am wonderign most does it lag now?


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