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At 2/20/07 05:10 AM, Penboy wrote:
You need to clean up your overall ''sketchiness''. That has potential, but it's way too rough. But I liked th body language.

What do you mean by sketchiness?

At 2/20/07 05:43 AM, wolfinator-x wrote:

At 2/20/07 05:10 AM, Penboy wrote:
You need to clean up your overall ''sketchiness''. That has potential, but it's way too rough. But I liked th body language.

What do you mean by sketchiness?

Well, he means you need to clean up those graphics, they still look rushed and rough.
You've drawn your backgrounds with the line tool and those lines arent smooth...and they overlap. All you have to do, is take more time on your graphics...dont rush them, have fun while you draw them, and try to be creative but keep it simple and clean.

At 2/20/07 05:57 AM, DanWandin wrote:

Anything but ebaumsworld.

Ok. Ebaumsworld is off.

At 2/20/07 06:02 AM, chillyphilly wrote:

Well, he means you need to clean up those graphics, they still look rushed and rough.
You've drawn your backgrounds with the line tool and those lines arent smooth...and they overlap. All you have to do, is take more time on your graphics...dont rush them, have fun while you draw them, and try to be creative but keep it simple and clean.

Ok. But look at my Flashes; it's very hard to do good graphics (Most of the Flashes I did are done with Kirbynator and he does the graphics)

My part for this will be ready tomorrow.
(I couldn't post all weekend, my computer was being retarded)

At 2/20/07 11:46 AM, ArthurGhostly wrote:

At 2/19/07 11:40 PM, chillyphilly wrote: check it out [N is for Napalm]

Bloody awesome :D

Thanks mate. So does that mean you want me to send you the .fla?..or host it or whatever?

At 2/20/07 11:46 AM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Oh and about sponsor ship. Never going to happen. The money would be really worthless, seperating that much money between all of us would be more trouble than it's worth.

Unless you all had your hearts set on a fraction of a dollar?

...oh yeah and fuck sponsorship, who cares about a bit of money. If we actually end up wih a decent amount of quality parts in this collab, then it should get a pretty good score and end up on the front page. Then we will get heaps of publicity.

At 2/20/07 07:12 PM, chillyphilly wrote: ...oh yeah and **** sponsorship, who cares about a bit of money?

Me :(

At 2/21/07 05:26 AM, DanWandin wrote:
E-mail it to ArthurGhostly

...oi whats his email?...i cant be bothered going through this thread to find it.

...oh yeah and, I used some filters in the napalm one. Does that matter or do i have to take em out?

hey guys it's unknown thought do any of you guys have ny flash groups to sponsor it?

At 2/21/07 07:05 AM, chillyphilly wrote: ...oh yeah and, I used some filters in the napalm one. Does that matter or do i have to take em out?

No, he told me he has Flash 8 now.

The menu is done. All I need is the parts so I can "plug them in" with the scene selection. I guess that won't be for a while anyway.

Good, that means I still have some time to work on my part for this... I'm about two-thirds of the way done.

If we end up wanting to find a sponsor, we can start a new topic to see if anyone will sponsor it for us. This is not obligatory, but it's an idea. In anycase, if the collab gets showcased on the front page, i'll already be happy because I never got there with my Flashes.

http://denvish.net/ulf/220207/71986_B_is_for_
Battle.php

Here is what I have so far. No one responded to my questions or anything last time I posted and asked. THe run down of my peice will be this, that scene will switch to a defeated torjan style army, one last soldier will rise up, run to the gates of the fortress they attacked, and be mowed down by arrows.

I am a first time animator for a project, so any constructive comments would be appreaciated. Thanks guys, what do you think of it so far?

At 2/22/07 08:02 PM, Haloman wrote: http://denvish.net/ulf/220207/71986_B_is_for_
Battle.php

Here is what I have so far. No one responded to my questions or anything last time I posted and asked. THe run down of my peice will be this, that scene will switch to a defeated torjan style army, one last soldier will rise up, run to the gates of the fortress they attacked, and be mowed down by arrows.

I am a first time animator for a project, so any constructive comments would be appreaciated. Thanks guys, what do you think of it so far?

Sounds like a cool idea. Now if you keep going with those graphics, and take time on them, you should end up with a nice looking part for this collab. You should sketch your idea first as a story board so you have a visual guide to work off. They help alot.

At 2/22/07 08:02 PM, Haloman wrote: I am a first time animator for a project, so any constructive comments would be appreaciated. Thanks guys, what do you think of it so far?

I see you're trying to do a little motion blur there when it pans away to the right, when you just blur it equally instead.

I recommend doing an actual motion blur for great justice.

Hey guys, can we have a list with all the actual parts that we have. Even unfinished? It looks like there's around 10 people actually working on something. If anyone bothers to make a list with links, so they are at the same place and we can see them all and discuss them it's gonna be great. If noone does that and I'm not to lazy these days, I'm gonna do it soon.

I will take K for Knife

I don't have anything to show for my animation skill but i came 4th in an Australian Wide competition

Reply if you want me to make it