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Posted at: 2/18/07 08:53 AM

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Sorry I havnt been very active lately =D

Nice taking control there.. while i was reading, I was thinking about posting what Dan posted.


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I think I have a good part for 64's awesome preloader,what if itshows a Dirty smiley face by it but when the load is done the smiley explodes?

just my thought.........

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About Wolfinator?

or Does it feel good to take control?

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Ok, I've decided to post a screenshot of what my part looks like so far..

[IMG]http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g214/W andin712/Screen.png[/IMG]

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<img src="http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g214/W andin712/Screen.png">

this better work otherwise just click the link.

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At 2/18/07 10:34 AM, DanWandin wrote: Ok, I've decided to post a screenshot of what my part looks like so far..

[IMG]http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g214/W andin712/Screen.png[/IMG]

Too much detail on the blood on the clown's cheek - that's gonna be a bitch to animate :P Are you fbf'ing or tweening? If you're tweening, then that standard of detail is perfect. Of course, if it is fbf, then I'd reccommend chunkifying the blood to make it easier for you.

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Please excuse my attempt to try and make the image appear in the post, I obviously don't know how to do that :P.

The way I'm going to be animating the characters is mostly tweening, but for some parts for a better effect I will be using fbf.

The part is currently 40-50%% finished.

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Heres K, for Koala

One problem though, I just realized my program dosn't save in the .Fla format. Lol my bad.
If you still want the clip though, you can go up to "tools" in you internets top bar...thing then "internet options" then "settings" then "veiw files" after you watch it you can drag the file off that into some random folder, right click and open it with your flash version, and just copy & paste the symbole I saved the clip in into your movie.
(if it dosn't show up in the "veiw files" folder it means the storage your comps allowing is full, you can go to "delete files" and just do the same thing.

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mines almost dont about half way.


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which one is better my soccer one our my new one


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At 2/18/07 12:43 PM, Shoop-Da-Whoop wrote: which one is better my soccer one our my new one

In idea the soccer one. But hopefully that's not an example of your animating full capacity. :\


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At 2/18/07 01:05 PM, ArthurGhostly wrote:
At 2/18/07 12:43 PM, Shoop-Da-Whoop wrote: which one is better my soccer one our my new one
In idea the soccer one. But hopefully that's not an example of your animating full capacity. :\

Don't worry they are just tests.


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At 2/18/07 11:38 AM, Sh0T-D0wN wrote: Heres K, for Koala

Tools > Page info > Save as.

Anyway, The guy is ugly and square. ): Try making him more fluid, the animation is nice and smooth, and the idea is good. But right now, he's looking too robotic.

Fix that up. :D


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here is my part may need a lil fixing and also not shure how to post the site so you might have to copy and paste.
http://denvish.net/ulf/180207/48106_f-isforfa t.swf


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Hows this eh?

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At 2/18/07 03:30 PM, Sh0T-D0wN wrote: Hows this eh?

Thats better, it makes me laugh. :D
Still a couple of things.
When he's walking to begin with, he doesn't move any limb. It just doens't look natural. Then, when he's pulling the bushes away. His hands are horridly square - that's probably the thing that needs fixing the most, in my book.

The last thing and this is just personal preference here, I suggest that you leave out the running back and the gunshot bit. It's overkill to an otherwise funny punch line.


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Instead of desiring two or five letters, why don't you fuckin' make the ONE that you have more detailed and nice looking. (this is refering to whoever desided that is taking care of the thread himself). What's the purpose of having two pieces of shit. There's probably only 5 or 6 ideas that I like so far. There's no deadline, so take your time and make something nice, OK??? And there's no sense whatsoever for people to make different menus and preloaders and stuff. I think it's just a waste of time and energy. Is it just the co-author thing? Instead, make your letter good and you'll get a co-author spot. I like the one that we have so far - 64's, although the music can be more brutal.

Click it!!! Click it, I tell you!

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At 2/18/07 01:23 PM, ConKer-9 wrote: here is my part may need a lil fixing and also not shure how to post the site so you might have to copy and paste.
http://denvish.net/ulf/180207/48106_f-isforfa t.swf

I think it's good, i like the letter design a lot, but the animation can be more detailed, for instance the falling thing isn't convincing, make it bounce a little or something.

Click it!!! Click it, I tell you!

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At 2/18/07 01:23 PM, ConKer-9 wrote: http://denvish.net/ulf/180207/48106_f-isforfa t.swf

That 'stomach leaking' doesn't really make sense to me :\ I don't get it at all.

Nice idea, though. Although there needs to be more emphesis in the fall and contact, here's a demo, to show what I mean: http://denvish.net/ulf/180207/75597_fallexamp le.php

So basically, the force he hits the ground at, changes his shape, which then in turn, gives him the push back to launch himself off the ground again.

It makes the animation seem less clunky.

The other thing that buged me is the lack of faces. It makes the characters seem more real, right now, there's no real death, it's something being flattened, if you flesh it out with some features, eyes and a mouth etc, it'll make it much better.


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Here's a better test of me IT's JUST A test!

http://denvish.net/ulf/180207/58624_D_FOR.php


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ok man ill fix it up like i said may need to be improved anyway.


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Any better? I knew I was gonna have to remove that gun in the end, lol.

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At 2/18/07 04:33 PM, Sh0T-D0wN wrote: Any better? I knew I was gonna have to remove that gun in the end, lol.

Much better. It gets a good laugh out of me. :D

I still don't like those hands. They're too static. They should appear as they are now, when he's pulling the bushes back, before that, they should be pretty flat - ready to grab.

If that made sense. :\


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arthur what u think about my new test??

It's Unknownthought.

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At 2/18/07 04:40 PM, ArthurGhostly wrote:
I still don't like those hands. They're too static. They should appear as they are now, when he's pulling the bushes back, before that, they should be pretty flat - ready to grab.

If that made sense. :\

Like so?

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At 2/18/07 04:54 PM, Sh0T-D0wN wrote:
At 2/18/07 04:40 PM, ArthurGhostly wrote:
I still don't like those hands. They're too static. They should appear as they are now, when he's pulling the bushes back, before that, they should be pretty flat - ready to grab.

If that made sense. :\
Like so?

I like it.

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what do you guys think about my sample drawings


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Very poor, sorry.

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At 2/18/07 03:30 PM, Sh0T-D0wN wrote: Hows this eh?

I would like it better if you had the guy beatup the angry koala and while he walks away the first koala shoots him down, also instead of the koala holding the guy's head at the end the koala does the "west side" sign. Cus' then it would funny and gangsta. Other then all that, it's great.

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