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Final version of K. I fixed some of the small rough things and added more to the background. Any good?

the stomach leaking was because he was so fat it kinda poped.
i can improve it a litle bit thoe but would take a wile because whole thing was fbf.

I'm currently working on N for ninja with UnknownThought.

i know lol i just sadi that incase.

alright sorry Arthur

:I'm banned currently on UnknownThought

Good Job Dan! I love the detail, it's exellent, yet I seem to se some drawing quality difference, it seems you put most of your effort on the clown and his look and animation, while, the main character, is not as good, , it's a minor detail, other than that it's perfect

I would also like to ask Arthur to review my peice on page 11 I got good comments overall, but I'd like to hear what's your point of view about it becauase it's mainly you and Penboy's submission

At 2/19/07 12:53 PM, ArthurGhostly wrote: Really? I don't see it as that. :D

Well it IS all of us who're making it, but I guess you're the one judging what should be made in the collab along with Penboyy

Anyway, your peice is good.

I thought so

The neck still bugs me, though. perhaps if you start from the head and scroll down to the neck? :\ I'm just thinking it'll be hard to work out from a first glance.

Yeah it bothers me a bit too what I'm gonna do is wait for my tablet to come back from repair and adda nice chin.

The body needs abit more definition I think, to show it's the torso and what not.

Am I that bad? it's the stomach area :(

The rest of the foibles are just from personal preference really, Like those boxes i'd just have stretch out, as apposed to come from the center. If that makes sense?

No :P

And that blood scene, should have the glass, shattered or solid and maybe a limp hand either besides it or clasping it.

Yes I can add the glass in photoshop solid yet broken, I mean after all he didn't smah it for it to be shattered.

But they're not necissary - just a personal thing.

Anyway, Good idea, Keep it up, love the blood. ;)

Lol that was the simpest part of it XD,Photoshop is much easier than flash. should I give you the bitmap traced?

Also can someone do something portal related, it'd be nice to see S for Star Syndicate or something? should be fun. Ad are there parts that *gulp* you may not accept? because thias is actually my first real work in Flash, all I do is test my Actionscript and sligt drawing attempts.

At 2/19/07 04:37 AM, chillyphilly wrote: That's a wicked menu, but there needs to be a back button from the scene selection back to the main menu.

Okay.

lol still working on mine wow i am lazy if i wasn't it wuld have been done all ready..

At 2/18/07 09:16 AM, DanWandin wrote: About Wolfinator?

or Does it feel good to take control?

Hey, sorry for everything. But I was just trying to help out, you know. Aww well, it doesn't matter. May the collab continue as nothing happenned.

[j] is for 'Joel Carli' - Taken by Wolfinator-x

Dude, I dropped the J a long time ago and besides, It wasn't very popular. Quite original, though, I'd say.

At 2/19/07 01:55 AM, Penboy wrote: Scratch my last post, I read all the pages. Seems Wolfinator-x has been stirring some trouble..

O_O

But lets move on shall we? Do any of you know what time of the day we should submit this? I think when all the Americans wake up, so we'll have a better audience, and a better chance at front page :D

I can do it, I'm Canadian.

Sorry if I'm talking so much, but since I couldn't get J on the list, if we have time, can we make a section for "deleted scenes" with a highly compressed version of the previous [J] is for Joel Carli? I'm not imposing anything.

Update

http://denvish.net/ulf/190207/76841_B_is_for_
Battle.php

THe main jist of my piece will be the following. The grounds below the great walls of Troy, army has just bee crushed. That first panel you just looked at will start it off and streak to a view of the defeated army, one last soldier will rise up, sprint to the gates and be mowed down by arrow. Oh yeah, and there will be lots more blood,one of th last things i will probably add to each part.

Wewt.

Suggestions appreciated muchly. =D

Oh and btw, this is my first serious flash, so any suggestions will be awesome for me, thanks guys.

Hey, the list says you still need the 'n' part...and that no one has taken it. If you want you can use this one instead of my xylophone one. It's your choice, which ever one you choose doesnt atter to me, i like both of them.

check it out [N is for Napalm]

Comments?

...you can even use both if you want to, but that has already caused some uproar within this collab. But yeah do what ever....

Aww so there are still some letters to fill in the gaps, who got me exited?

Perhaps you were wondering...

The time differences are so annoying! It may seem that I'm not contributing much to this collab, but I am trying. When I write stuff, no one's here to read it. When you guys are online, I'm at school. But, when I'm at school I do check out this thread to see what's going on when you guys re online, but I can't reply to anything becasue of the school's proxy.

Ok, just had to get that out of the way :D

Now on to business...

SPONSORSHIP:

Ahh yes, sponsorship. I seriously think we could get a sponsor for this collab, not necessarily a paying sponsor, but a sponsor who is willing to put our collab on his/her site. If any of you know any willing sponsors, feel free to talk about them here.

At 2/20/07 03:05 AM, Penboy wrote:
SPONSORSHIP:

Ahh yes, sponsorship. I seriously think we could get a sponsor for this collab, not necessarily a paying sponsor, but a sponsor who is willing to put our collab on his/her site. If any of you know any willing sponsors, feel free to talk about them here.

Here's a good flash sponser.

http://www.flashportal.com

They have this thing going on, so you could get money.

http://www.flashportal.com/flashcontests.html

At 2/19/07 11:40 PM, chillyphilly wrote:
check it out [N is for Napalm]

Comments?

That's what I thought would happen; polynicro (many deaths). Oh, and it ran slow when I played it so you should try adding the AS to make the graphics quality to Medium or Low.

Guys, I have good news for you! It's 4:00 GMT and I'm going to take my [S] and try to make the graphics better.

At 2/20/07 03:50 AM, wolfinator-x wrote:

That's what I thought would happen; polynicro (many deaths). Oh, and it ran slow when I played it so you should try adding the AS to make the graphics quality to Medium or Low.

eh... it worked perfectly fine on my computer.

At 2/20/07 04:13 AM, chillyphilly wrote:

eh... it worked perfectly fine on my computer.

Ok. It doesn't matter.

At 2/20/07 03:05 AM, Penboy wrote:
SPONSORSHIP:

Ahh yes, sponsorship. I seriously think we could get a sponsor for this collab, not necessarily a paying sponsor, but a sponsor who is willing to put our collab on his/her site. If any of you know any willing sponsors, feel free to talk about them here.

How about funnypart.com? or ebaumsworld.com? Maybe we can do a website for all our Flashes? Seriously. And BTW, I sent AG an updated version of [S], with better graphics.

At 2/20/07 04:36 AM, wolfinator-x wrote: How about funnypart.com? or ebaumsworld.com? Maybe we can do a website for all our Flashes? Seriously. And BTW, I sent AG an updated version of [S], with better graphics.

It's ArthurGhostly not AG...

P

At 2/20/07 04:36 AM, wolfinator-x wrote: How about funnypart.com? or ebaumsworld.com? Maybe we can do a website for all our Flashes? Seriously. And BTW, I sent AG an updated version of [S], with better graphics.

Can we see it?...post a link.

At 2/20/07 04:47 AM, chillyphilly wrote:

At 2/20/07 04:36 AM, wolfinator-x wrote: How about funnypart.com? or ebaumsworld.com? Maybe we can do a website for all our Flashes? Seriously. And BTW, I sent AG an updated version of [S], with better graphics.

Can we see it?...post a link.

Sure you can :

Page: http://denvish.net/ulf/200207/17734_Untitled-
6.php
File: http://denvish.net/ulf/200207/17734_Untitled-
6.swf

Let me know if there is other stuff to add. This is the .swf, but I sent the .fla.

At 2/20/07 04:54 AM, wolfinator-x wrote: Sure you can :

Page: http://denvish.net/ulf/200207/17734_Untitled-
6.php
File: http://denvish.net/ulf/200207/17734_Untitled-
6.swf

Let me know if there is other stuff to add. This is the .swf, but I sent the .fla.

You need to clean up your overall ''sketchiness''. That has potential, but it's way too rough. But I liked th body language.