Gun of the Jealous

[IAmTheShit]

Tell me what you think

We used to laugh,

We used to love,

But all our feelings have come undone,

All from a man I knew nothing about,

From other laughs shared,

And another ones love,

So now my hands are bloody and my heart filled with sorrow,

From the beating of my love,

And the murder of her lover,

So much pitty,

So much greif,

All too much for one to bear,

And I'm afraid tonight that one more shall die,

Only one less life,

Of a jealous murderer,

My last sound shall be heard on this very street,

Upon this very night,

So i walk to my closet,

Unlock the chest,

And walk to the spot where all shall here the shot.

[Bl00dRedKnife]

This thread was here before, why did you make another one?

[IAmTheShit]

At 2/1/07 05:15 PM, Bl00dRedKnife wrote: This thread was here before, why did you make another one?

because ng wouldnt let me reply to the guy who said i only wanted to be called emo. thats not the case. i just want to know if its any good. id rather be made fun of because i write poetry on here than by my friends so im asking if its any good before i show it off

[MindChamber]

no double posting, Emo....