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Posted at: 1/18/07 05:42 AM
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Posted at: 1/18/07 06:23 AM
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This is disgusting. Everyone, get your hands off your cocks and look at this. It's fucking disgusting. You should all be ashamed of yourselves for reading this, and encouraging him
Posted at: 1/18/07 06:30 AM
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This is stupid.
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Posted at: 1/18/07 07:08 AM
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At 1/18/07 06:23 AM, suckyura wrote: This is disgusting. Everyone, get your hands off your cocks and look at this. It's fucking disgusting. You should all be ashamed of yourselves for reading this, and encouraging him
FUCK YOU! IF you don't like, gtfo if this thread you whinney bitch!
You must compleat the story!
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Posted at: 1/18/07 08:08 AM
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Well, actually, we only have one hand on our wangs. The other one is typing, and the other is slowing fighting its way trhough s horde of flesh eating russian hampsters. Besides, you've seen nothing of the wonderful world of BBS stories >:D
Did you hear what I said? It gives you a boner!
Posted at: 1/18/07 09:16 AM
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I've got news for you, sweetie. I'm no "him," lol. Girls can write raunchy stories too. And you ain't seen nothing yet. xD
Fiction is a fun way to release sexual tension without complicating your life. You should try it sometime. ;)
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Posted at: 1/18/07 10:04 AM
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I've got news for you, sweetie. I'm no "him," lol. Girls can write raunchy stories too. And you ain't seen nothing yet. xD Fiction is a fun way to release sexual tension without complicating your life. You should try it sometime. ;)
Well then seeing that you have made a few animations in the past why not try a hand at this one eh? Also MAKE MORE! You sohuld create your own Novel every one (Except that whiny bitch) would buy it!
Too true: SCUD14 wrote: I got kicked out a bookshop because someone misplaced the bibles. I returned them to their brethren in fiction.
Posted at: 1/18/07 10:05 AM
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Hatw.
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Posted at: 1/18/07 10:25 AM
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To be honest with you, I'm not reading this so much for the sexual tension, rather, I find the story quite interresting. I can't wait to read the rest.
Posted at: 1/18/07 10:35 AM
At 1/18/07 10:25 AM, GraveForkast wrote: To be honest with you, I'm not reading this so much for the sexual tension, rather, I find the story quite interresting. I can't wait to read the rest.
I kind of meant that "writing" fiction was good for sexual tension, lol. Anyway, thanks for the compliment. ;)
Posted at: 1/18/07 10:51 AM
I know what you meant, but the sexual tension of the story itself is what seems to keep most other people reading. While it adds an interresting spin to the whole thing, the story progression on its own takes some classic Japanese hentai concepts and applies them in a different fashion.
Posted at: 1/18/07 12:33 PM
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Wow, I must say that you have an interesting fantasy, as in not just regular tentacle rape, but this whole new idea. With this start, you can put anything in it that you want, in stead of just standard hero stories. Also your writhing style is very good. I can't wait to read more..
Posted at: 1/18/07 12:39 PM
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FapFapFapFap.
I lol'd.
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Posted at: 1/18/07 12:43 PM
At 1/18/07 04:50 AM, twist-tie wrote: and not a single girl has even commented on what i'm positive what they would label as "gross," "twisted," and quite possibly "immature."
Maybe a lot girls, but not all of them. But we all should agree that Shuko is special for coming up with a story just like that. I'm sure even the guys wouldn't write such a story with such vocabulary, just like that.
Posted at: 1/18/07 01:18 PM
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This story is incredibly awesome.
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Posted at: 1/18/07 01:24 PM
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Shucko is a girl, surprisingly enough. Or so her profile says, but w/e.
GOOD NEWS!! I LEFT!!
Posted at: 1/18/07 01:52 PM
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You're a good writer, i too am reading this not for it's sexual detail, but beacuse it's just an interesting story lol. And what a death for that "sexbeast" straight after climaxing lol. I'd like to konw more about the sex beasts description though, atm i've got an image of that squid Pokemon lol XD
Posted at: 1/18/07 02:51 PM
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Lol at the people who is getting horny.
Nice story, by the way.
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Posted at: 1/18/07 03:00 PM
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At 1/16/07 01:13 PM, ArmouredDeath wrote: Pics please? And yea.. japanese girls with mini skirts are sexy :)
HELL YEAH
Posted at: 1/18/07 03:08 PM
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At 1/18/07 12:43 PM, Mai wrote: I'm sure even the guys wouldn't write such a story with such vocabulary, just like that.
I could write a story like that, just not with that vocabulary. I r teh suxorz at writing stories.
Posted at: 1/19/07 11:59 AM
When is the next chapter coming?
Posted at: 1/19/07 12:02 PM
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...I commented!
Posted at: 1/19/07 12:04 PM
At 1/19/07 11:59 AM, Hiniberus wrote: When is the next chapter coming?
Hopefully later on this evening. I've neglected this because the muse hasn't touched me, lol. I'll try and devote more time to it. ;)
Posted at: 1/19/07 02:15 PM
Here we go. Not as much action in this chapter, but the next one will be better. :) I hope. (I'm going to start linking all of the chapters every time I write one).
Chapter 2 Chapter 3
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At 1/16/07 04:35 PM, hatedbymost wrote: Dude this so needs to be a flash movie.
OMFG THATS JUST WHAT I WAS THINKING.If this mase amovie i wouldliterallypay 200bucksforatape.Cuz its sooo frigin awsome .Its not a sleazy pono. And its got awsome adventure and a kool plot. It has awsome charactors and ownage aliens. But with awsome sexual overtones.Butyou should try to be more descriptive with the "attacks."
>:(
Posted at: 1/19/07 02:22 PM
At 1/17/07 02:32 PM, Shuko wrote: Well, the chapters are so long I've decided to not post the text in here. Rather, I've created their own HTML pages. This story is never going to leave Newgrounds, lol. But I see no reason for double and triple posting when I can just as easily do this. ;) Chapter 2 I'd suggest right-clicking and opening it in a new window. ;)
Man this sux. It needs the black background. Thats what makes it dark. Putting a dark creepy sexy sotrie in black txt on white background totally gay. PLEASE BUT IT BACK ON THE BBS!
Posted at: 1/19/07 02:36 PM
At 1/19/07 02:22 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: Man this sux. It needs the black background. Thats what makes it dark. Putting a dark creepy sexy sotrie in black txt on white background totally gay. PLEASE BUT IT BACK ON THE BBS!
k.
:omg charlimits!
Posted at: 1/19/07 02:43 PM
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Oh man, this story is great.
You're like that No-oneSpecial guy, except possibly better.
Posted at: 1/19/07 04:20 PM
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waht zee fahk, I like hentais but i dont like tentacle ones, but waht zee fahk? A girl is writing this stuffs? Waht Zee Fahk
Posted at: 1/19/07 04:26 PM
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At 1/19/07 02:43 PM, Platinum wrote: Oh man, this story is great. You're like that No-oneSpecial guy, except possibly better.
thats not a compliment
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