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At 7/20/07 02:28 AM, DarkPhazon wrote:

At 6/17/07 11:36 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: Hope you all enjoy the new chapter. It took me a long time to write it and when I was done I didn't feel like proof-reading so please forgive any mistakes.

Your chapters lack subtelty.
You can't just have characters ANNOUNCE how they feel!
THAT MAKES ME FEEL ANGRY!!!

Now explain to me why you're being a stubborn jackass and being an asshole to/ cursing out anyone who requests/ asks you to stop?

I'm like, one of three people who caught this reference and laughed at it right?

At this point, with Shuko at [needtoknowsitehere], I'm actually willing to read Flash's story.

Where is it?

Holy shit! My boner is huge. Please continue.

wow... he's still going? he should make this story into a flash... he'd get more "readers" that way

At 6/8/08 02:04 AM, MissingNYC wrote: wow... he's still going? he should make this story into a flash... he'd get more "readers" that way

Yes heh heh readers

Well the story of Themanbehindtheflash doesnt seem to feel right. I mean to many sex scenes dont make a good story Shuko's was like 80% Story and 20% sex, rape. So try to match it like hers next time no. Id like to see some figurative drafts (drawings) to illustrate some chapters like a comic strip or something.

It's a shame this story died... I was really enjoying it. D:

I can't believe I missed this entire thread.

Hmmm.... If I recall... wasent there already a "Japanses School girl/tentacle monster" story already told on NG?

Sounds hawt!