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So what did everyone think of the new chapter? I was hoping to get some nice "reviews" but only a few ppl posted. i was expecting a lot more posts about the story expecially considering the fact that the views went up from 19,542 to 19,672. over 100 views and only 3 posts. and two were from the same guy. I can see why Shuko stopped writing for you unappreciative bastards! Any small comment is what im hopping for. Something to let me know hat the readers want therefore i can change the story line as such.

I need more posts like this one

"It actually wasn't that bad it almost gave me a boner except the sexs scene was so short so it didn't have a chance and it was also just short in general. I can't do any better myself but you asked us to give you some constructive criticism so their it is." from JimmyWorld.
-thx dude.

Ok guys i can assure you all Shuko will never post in this topic again. Because. SHE IS DEAD!! Ok look she posted chapter ten on 3/22/07 And then on 3/25/07 this topic was made. I have cum up with a solution. Shuko went to the fight and was murdered my cowboys. So she couldnt use her writing genius to make moar chapters. There you have it.

Im done posting new chapters until I get a few honest review about the story. So as soon as i get a few more posts I will write a new chapter.

I can see why Shuko stopped writing for you ingrates. ):|

At 6/7/07 02:26 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: Im done posting new chapters until I get a few honest review about the story. So as soon as i get a few more posts I will write a new chapter.

I can see why Shuko stopped writing for you ingrates. ):|

I have a review! You have singlehandedly fucked up this thread beyond all redemption!

If Shuko doesn't want to write for a while, good for her. She can have a rest. This story is beastly enough to warrant that.
If you want to take the reins, I'd strongly suggest contacting her first, instead of saying, "I'M AN IMPATIENT BASTARD SO I'LL STEAL THIS THREAD FROM THE OP!"
Also, you have an amazing record of multi-posting... You have quadruple-posted. Can't you fit all your thoughts into one reply?

Fucking dickshit. STOP REVIVING THIS GODAMNED TOPIC. SHUKO IS DONE FOR NOW, GO GET A PERM BAN IF YOU'RE GOING TO BE A FUCKING DUMBASS.

We seriously don't care if this is your breeding topic, just stop fucking bumping, making something up to hold us over, we've already lost all the anticipatation for this, so shut up you freaking moron.

Directed at The Douchebag Behind The Flash

No im not writing this to help you "get by" im takin over the story and im writing the new chapters. Shuko is NOT taking a rest she is done with this thread as in FOREVER!!! so stop it with all the flaming and h8in.

At 6/7/07 03:11 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: No im not writing this to help you "get by" im takin over the story and im writing the new chapters. Shuko is NOT taking a rest she is done with this thread as in FOREVER!!! so stop it with all the flaming and h8in.

Shut up. Your writing skills are queer. And if she gave you permission to write this, then science has just fucked Earth up the ass... very hard.

hi guys!

im back and i have a few things to say.

Themanbehindtheflash you takeing over this thread was a god thing.this is a grate storey and only YOU can keep it going.evryone i want you to let themanbehindtheflash keep doing the storey and quit being so rude.

also id like to see Maus get sexed up bye 3 fox girl things.also bring MiKI back to life somehw.

later.

At 6/8/07 07:58 PM, Liteice wrote: hi guys!

im back and i have a few things to say.

What followed after that was such horrible grammar that should not be repeated......EVER!

At 6/8/07 07:58 PM, Liteice wrote: hi guys!

im back and i have a few things to say.

Themanbehindtheflash you takeing over this thread was a god thing.this is a grate storey and only YOU can keep it going.evryone i want you to let themanbehindtheflash keep doing the storey and quit being so rude.

yeah yer right on that one. :)

also id like to see Maus get sexed up bye 3 fox girl things.

Hmm i was thinkin just one but this might work out better.THX for the suggestion.

also bring MiKI back to life somehw.

Prolly wont happen. DOnt get yer hopes up. sry.

later.

At 6/8/07 09:34 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: stuff

Considering that Shuko's last post was months ago, I think you'd better get crankin' on the story.

At 6/3/07 05:40 PM, rockyman wrote: why hasne't this been closed yet?

No cause is lost...So long as there's one fool willing to fight for it.
I congratulate you for trying to keep this alive, but in the words of 'The Oracle

Everything with a beginning, has an end..Neo.

At 6/8/07 09:40 PM, WatchesUPee wrote:

At 6/3/07 05:40 PM, rockyman wrote: why hasne't this been closed yet?

No cause is lost...So long as there's one fool willing to fight for it.
I congratulate you for trying to keep this alive, but in the words of 'The Oracle

Everything with a beginning, has an end..Neo.

I know which is why im going to keep writing until this ets a proper end. in the words on TMBTF if you dont like my story GTFO MY THREAD.

lol just kiddin yer gr8 kid.

At 6/8/07 09:35 PM, Xtesh wrote:

At 6/8/07 09:34 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: stuff

Considering that Shuko's last post was months ago, I think you'd better get crankin' on the story.

I dunno i might get a new chapter out tonight but I kinda gotta get some sleep. IM goin to a party with some friends tomarrow and im still w8ing to hear back from my editor in chief but i still might just get a chapter out tonight.

But please dont get your hopes up.

neato. first story that ive ever seen reach 8 chapters.

also i feel i need to be part of the story. is there any way you could make another tribe? with ppl part dragon n stuff? who can change to different forms? maybe even change gender to help with the hunt? yeah.

At 6/5/07 11:34 PM, supyohos123 wrote:

At 6/5/07 10:55 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: I'm taking over!

naw you ain't

lolz

Ok guys sry i haven't posted in a while ,I know i promised a new chapter, but due to a fucking sadistic storm my power has been out since like 4 or something. I forget when it went out. But anyway yeah. It came back on for about half an hour and i thought it would stay on so i fucked around online then the power went out again. It was dark cuz it was like 8 or something. So i got scared i was gonna get butt-raped by saigengami XD. So i don't know if i can get the new chapter out tonight BUT I SHALL TRY MY ASS OFF!!!

OMFG i cant belive i missed it. I cant believe i missed the 20,000th view. I can't believe it. Well im expecting an IM any second now.

waits patiently.

At 6/8/07 10:08 PM, DragoonX42 wrote: neato. first story that ive ever seen reach 8 chapters.

also i feel i need to be part of the story. is there any way you could make another tribe? with ppl part dragon n stuff? who can change to different forms? maybe even change gender to help with the hunt? yeah.

sorry, mate, no can do unless we REAAAAAAAAALLLLY like you. and i mean like a lot. if you go back and read this thread immediately after each post (except the most recent) by liteice, if you can be the exact polar opposite of that, then MAYBE.

and with your shitty idea somehow i don't see that happening anytime soon.

TMBTF:

aaaahhhhhh fuck it. i'm talking to ya on AIM right now.

LITEICE:

GTFO. now.

let the flamage begin!

Jeez, this story is still up?

At 6/9/07 12:51 AM, Bus-Driver wrote: Jeez, why this story is still up?

because you don't touch yourself at night.

i cant belive people are still posting to this one. Once was enuf for me.

ATTENTION READERS!!!

After working through the night we almost have a new chapter ready. It will defiantly be posted early this morning around 10 o'clock mountain time. We don't expect it to be out any later then that. Then in maybe a day after that we will begin writing the next chapter and will hope to have it out around 3 days from now. But it could be later then that.

bump FGJ
catch ya laters

Dude and bye dude i mean themanbehindtheflash i need to tell you some stuff

1.miki comeing back would be cool.

2.maus becomeing gay isnt so cool

3.maus falling in love with shadow would suck

4.keeping the storey alive is awesome

5.dose anyone here know what hapend to shuko?

At 6/9/07 03:11 AM, Liteice wrote: Dude and bye dude i mean themanbehindtheflash i need to tell you some stuff

1.miki comeing back would be cool.

No it wouldn't

2.maus becomeing gay isnt so cool

Yer right it woudl suck. She is just a lil bi-curios.

3.maus falling in love with shadow would suck

Did I ask you?

4.keeping the storey alive is awesome

Yeah i know,its what i do.

5.dose anyone here know what hapend to shuko?

No I think she's dead er somethin.

All right two things.

1) The chapter my editor in chief posts this morning is entirely his he wrote the whole thing and I had very little part in it.

2) If shuko came back would u guys want her to start writing again even though she would go back to posting once every like two weeks?

At 6/9/07 03:16 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: 2) If shuko came back would u guys want her to start writing again even though she would go back to posting once every like two weeks?

It was her idea and not yours. She will come back, but I'm sure it is just a temporary hiatus.

BE GONE FUCKING RUINER OF THREADS!

At 6/9/07 03:29 AM, supyohos123 wrote:

At 6/9/07 03:16 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: 2) If shuko came back would u guys want her to start writing again even though she would go back to posting once every like two weeks?

It was her idea and not yours. She will come back, but I'm sure it is just a temporary hiatus.

BE GONE FUCKING RUINER OF THREADS!

Yer a complete idiot. She isn't coming back. I know it wasn't my idea. I'm just taking her idea and making it better. Like taking bread and slicing it to make sliced bread. I'm not a ruiner of threads. Lots of ppl like my work. Well my new work. MY old work was pretty crappy.

So in short LIKE MY STORY OR GTFO MY THREAD!!!

since when did this become ur thread? I am just asking. ok?