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Posted at: 5/23/07 07:32 PM

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great read please make more I would love to read it.


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It seems Shuko is not going to keep posting so i must take it upon myself to keep the story going. But first i need to know what you guys want me to write. Cuz if i write what i want you guys wont like it so give me opinions on what YOU want to see.

Also Dear maus: Stop lurkin around this thread waiting for me to post so you can ban me for "bumping" i am going to start up the story and the rules state -No bumping an old topic without new information.

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All right i will wait half an hour for suggestions from the readers. Then i will start writing so. GET SUGGESTING.

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At 6/2/07 02:45 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: All right i will wait half an hour for suggestions from the readers. Then i will start writing so. GET SUGGESTING.

I suggest you let Shuko do it. Chances are good you would fuck it up royally. So where is she?

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At 6/2/07 02:46 PM, klopatng wrote:
At 6/2/07 02:45 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: All right i will wait half an hour for suggestions from the readers. Then i will start writing so. GET SUGGESTING.
I suggest you let Shuko do it. Chances are good you would fuck it up royally. So where is she?

Apparently you didnt notice she hasnt even posted in the thread for well over i dunno three months or so.

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Still waiting for suggestions tell me what you wanna read. Im starting in 15 minutes.

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At 6/2/07 02:46 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote:
Apparently you didnt notice she hasnt even posted in the thread for well over i dunno three months or so.

I don't give a rat's ass. You'll still fuck it up royally.

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At 6/2/07 02:56 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: Still waiting for suggestions tell me what you wanna read. Im starting in 15 minutes.

Don't fuck up the god damned story. You're bad enough bumping it, don't try to write pornography you can't write. If Shuko doesn't want to write, she doesn't want to fucking write. Don't steal her job just because the story ended abruptly.

So kindly don't post in this thread EVER again until you stop posting stoned.

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Posted at: 6/2/07 05:31 PM

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Is Shuko even on newgrounds anymore
because I havent seen her online in a long time


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Well sry it took me soo long to get this out. I was banned. Anyway don't hate me if you dont like it cuz its like the first time ive wrote somethin like this. And i know the sex scenes and stuff were really short and not kool but i think by now you all get where i am going.

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Posted at: 6/3/07 04:05 AM

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Quit boosting this godamn thread let it die alright were all getting sick of this..


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After Hayf had teleported us back to the apartment we had dinner. Then we all went to sleep.

When I awoke I stumbled into the kitchen and saw Hayf and asked him which saigengami we should go after today.

He responded "Oh no today is a sacred Kitsune holiday. It is the day when all kitsune rest. So you have a day off." So after a breakfast of rice and fish I went to check on Shadow. I thought it was fairly weird that he hadn't yet awakened. I knocked lightly on his door. Yet there was no answer. So I opened the door and walked over to his bed. He was muttering in his sleep and looked like he was having a nightmare. I shook him lightly. When he woke up I stared into his eyes. I got that weird feeling again. I turned away and told him about the Kitsune holiday and how we had a day off.

When we left the house Hayf was sleeping on the couch in his kitsune form. I always thought he looked cute in his kitsune form. I decided we should go to the park. As we arrived I noticed the park was empty and something didn't feel right. There weren't any children playing at the playground or birds chirping in the trees. I instantly knew that there had to be a saigengami here. Shadow could sense him too. We decided today wasn't going to be a holiday.

We split off in two different directions looking for the beast. After about ten minutes of fruitless searching I sat down on a nearby bench. The second I closed my eyes to think I felt a cold tentacle wrap around my mouth and body. I tried to scream but my screams were muffled by the slimy tentacle. I couldn't do anything. The saigengami dragged me for about ten minutes until we reached an old river under a bridge. When we arrived he threw me into a cave and the dashed in. I sat on my knees shacking in fear. All the other times we had been expecting the attacks and they usually introduced themselves and everything. But this was a much more efficient attack. He slithered over and grabbed me by my waist. Then he ripped off my clothes. I was lying helpless and naked in the tentacles of a saigangami. He grabbed my ankles and wrenched my legs apart. I could fell his phallus snake its way into my vagina. It brought along a cold sensation to my most private area. His phallus was undulating up and down and thrusting at the same time. I could feel his tentacles wrap harder around my ankles and body as his thrusts increased. Then i felt the reales of huge ammounts of semen into my vagina. Just then I saw movement out of the corner of my eye. Then in a split second Shadow rushed over and stabbed the saigangami in the minds eye.

I felt his grip loosen and i started falling. Then i fell into Shadows arms. I sapped a small amount of energy from him. And it was just enough to heal my wounds. As he put me down on my feet I slipped on the small puddle of blood and semen. I fell forward and he caught me in his arms. I felt embarrassed. Then i stared up into his eyes and I kissed him. After that i got dressed and we walked home. When we got there Hayf noticed my limp and asked what happened. I allowed Shadow to explain while i went into the bathroom to examine my wound and to scrape that disgusting gunk out of my vagina. But the whole time i couldn't stop thinking about Shadow. What was happening to me?

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So please tell me how much you dont like it. Cuz i know it sux. Anyway dont just insult me im asking for constructive criticism.

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Its a pretty good addition from an outside source but let this thread die once and for all you have potential just with your own story man please this has been boosted to many times.


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At 6/3/07 04:09 AM, dalmo wrote: Its a pretty good addition from an outside source but let this thread die once and for all you have potential just with your own story man please this has been boosted to many times.

Screw you. The thing is. This was the first thread i ever read on the BBS and i and not going to let it die until it gets and ending. And not a crappy abrupt ending. And even if this got banned i would create a new topic linking to this thread then i woulkd start posting new topics. Thing is i just cant let THIS story go.

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At 6/3/07 04:11 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote:
At 6/3/07 04:09 AM, dalmo wrote: Its a pretty good addition from an outside source but let this thread die once and for all you have potential just with your own story man please this has been boosted to many times.
Screw you. The thing is. This was the first thread i ever read on the BBS and i and not going to let it die until it gets and ending. And not a crappy abrupt ending. And even if this got banned i would create a new topic linking to this thread then i woulkd start posting new topics. Thing is i just cant let THIS story go.

Well i admire your enthusaism i must say im not attacking you... Im just saying the story deserves the right to be put to rest... Im sure shuko would say the same its a great thread but still let it dies it doesnt need to go on anymore... Im sorry if you feel diffrent its a free country buy im just sayin it would be best to start your own thread about your own story but then again its up to you whatever....

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Wow i was expecting more replies. So nobody is gonna reply? Maybe gimme some constructive criticism for the next chapter?

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why hasne't this been closed yet?

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At 6/3/07 04:08 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: So please tell me how much you dont like it. Cuz i know it sux. Anyway dont just insult me im asking for constructive criticism.

It actually wasn't that bad it almost gave me a boner except the sexs scene was so short so it didn't have a chance and it was also just short in general. I can't do any better myself but you asked us to give you some constructive criticism so their it is.


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At 6/3/07 04:11 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote:

This was the first thread i ever read on the BBS and i and not going to let it die until it gets and ending. And not a crappy abrupt ending. And even if this got banned i would create a new topic linking to this thread then i woulkd start posting new topics. Thing is i just cant let THIS story go.

Same here I haven't read anything more than 5 paragraphs on the forums except for this story.


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ohhhh soo many post i wonder if they will find me if i type random.
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At 6/3/07 04:06 AM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: crappy incorrect addition to awesome story

you officially fail at life.

and it's Ozcar, not Hayf. christ in a can, if you're gonna continue, at least know the characters..

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Oook. I has some explainin to does. Anyhoo im a dumbass. I have had hayf on the brain and every single time i said hayf i meant ozcar. I am so sorry. I PRAY none of you noticed and had no idea what i was talking about i am so sorry for my blunder.

Anyway next topic. I know its short. Thats cuz this is the first time i have actually TRIED to write for this thread. *the other times i never really tried they were just side thoughts* Anyway yes i know that the sex scene was very very short. Please forgive me i will write some notes from all of shukos previous chapters and review them tonight.*after i write the next chapter* teehee. Anyhoo Yes i also know the whole thing was short in general Mostly because of the lack of dialog. Like the sex scenes i will review the chapters and see if i can write in more dialog. BUUT i shall be granting the requests on many of the fans with my next chapter. Its going to contain a well waited for scene that all of you have been praying for. And the only one who will know about it will be me and hypersomniax.

hypersomniax is my new editor in chief. And no one PM me wanting to A) Be in the story or B) Be given a position on my staff. I might add one more person if me and hypersomniax ever get swamped but prolly not. If i DO need someone i will PM them. And no its not like a job. I wont fire you you wont get paid. Its just to help me out. So anyway thats whats up.

And to all you h8ers out there STFU and dont PM mods asking them to lock this thread. Im gonna keep writing and this thread is gonna stay open , i pray. Anyway there you have it. And since this thread is so old and interesting and still alive. Mods arnt going to lock it.lus it is old enough to not be affected by the "no story threads" rule that rule was established after this thread was made so this thread has immunity to that rule. So i guess that covers all the bases.

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All right i was gonna wait for my editor in chief to respond to my pm so i could work on a new chapter to get him to edit but he hasnt PMed me back yet. So i have to go along and write up a rough for yall. This is prolly gonna suck cuz i dont have my editor in chief at hand so bear with me for one more chapter. But i promised you all a new chapter and im gonna give it to you. And i am extra sorry in advance cuz its prolly gonna really suck and this is one of the most anticipated chapters of the story. And those two things should never be mixed. So please bear with me and except my sincerest apologizes if i screw up again. I am now going to work on the next chapter and will have it out , hopefully, within the hour.

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At 6/5/07 10:55 PM, TheManBehindTheFlash wrote: I'm taking over!

Let Shuko decide what to do with the story. Stop fucking it up! If Shuko wants to end it, then so be it.


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As I examined myself I listened to Shadow recreate our story for Ozcar. When he got near the end I held my breathe. For some reason I didn't want Ozcar to know about what happened between me and Shadow. Even if it was just a kiss. Even now I am sill pondering why I did it. When I was throughly cleaned out I walked to my room and laid down to rest. As i was thinking about today's events I heard my door open. Ozcar walked in followed by Shadow. Shadow sat at the foot of my bed while Ozcar jumped up and laid down on my stomach. It was Ozcar that spoke first.

"Well it seems like you both had a pretty eventful day but i would like to assure you there will only be one Saigengami where we are going tomorrow." He motioned to Shadow. "You see Maus today was but the first in a whole week of festivities. Tomorrow we are going to visit my brother Hayf and stay with him for a short time." Explained Ozcar.

"Well I'm glad that we will finally get to stay in a nice place for once. And also maybe while im there I will get to learn new ways to fight the Saigengami." I chipped in.

"Oh no Maus this whole week is meant for all kitsune to be together and forget about all bad that has taken place over the course of the year. For the time being the only Saigengami we should even think about is Shadow." he snapped.

As Shadow stood up to leave Ozcar stretched all four of his paws and curled up into a ball then slid off to one side. Then I dozed off to sleep.

In my dream I was lying in a bed. It reminded me oddly of the bed I had slept in when I had stayed at Hayf's manor before.

I suddenly felt a warm wet tongue caressing my most private area. I slowly lifted the covers and there saw the familiar eyes of the kitsune from the last time I had stayed at Hayf's castle. I didn't move while she slowly snaked her way up to my face and licked my cheek. I could feel her breasts pushing up against mine. My vagina was still moist from her tongue.

She slowly kissed me and her tongue twisted and curved around mine. I still didn't move. It didn't feel like I couldn't move but like I didn't want to.

Slowly she pulled her lips from mine and began a slow steady trail of kisses down my body until she reached my breasts. She began making circles around my nipple with her tongue. I could feel the all too familiar feeling in my vagina.

As if sensing this warm feeling she slowly slid down my body and licked my vagina. Then she tickled my rock hard clitoris with her tongue and then she stuck her tongue into my vagina. it darted in and out with such dexterity and control as though it were a sentient being all its own. Her tongue was like a snake, darting back and forth, undulating and probing into areas I didn't even know existed. As the warm feeling slowly grew so did her intense licking. She lapped intensely at my vagina while my own fluids mixed with that of her own.

I began rocking uncontrollably. Soon I was rocking in motion with her licks and the uncontrollable feeling in my vagina was growing. I couldn't control myself. In my mind i was screaming for her to stop. But all I could manage out was " More...more!"

Just then like a sudden surge of euphoria, wave after wave of the most amazing feeling i had ever felt washed over my body. I arched my back uncontrollably and then slowly fell back into the bed. I felt her face pull away from my quivering vagina. And she licked her lips as she slowly slid up next to me.

She draped her arm across my breasts and slowly kissed my cheek. I turned me head to one side and kissed her. Then slowly I began to kiss her breasts and then i too began a trail of kisses downward. As I reached her vagina i kissed it gently and began licking it gingerly. Slowly she moved her face close to mine and kissed me. I closed my eyes.

When i pulled away I slowly opened my eyes.Then I found myself staring into Miki's eyes. I awake screaming. What in the world had happened to me. When I looked around I didn't see Ozcar laying on my bed and I could see light shining through the window.

Shadow burst in only second after I awake. Ozcar soon followed. I didn't explain about my dream and only told them I had had a bad dream.

" I'm not surprised at this, I was expecting something like this to happen after you had that standoff yesterday." Explained Ozcar.

" What time is it? And when are we leaving for Hayf's manor?" I asked.

This time it was Shadow that replied. " Its almost noon and we were going to leave at 11:30 but Ozcar suggested it was best to not wake you. So I took the liberty y of packing your bag."

"All right, we can leave right after I have a shower." I said.

So after Ozcar and Shadow had left I took out some clothes from the suitcase lying next to my bed and left to take a shower. As I was showering I heard Ozcar talking to Shadow.

Ozcar happily said " Well im going to step out for about half and hour or so to buy a gift for Hayf. I shouldn't be out longer then forty-five or so minutes so make sure Maus is ready to go when i get back."

Shadow complied to this and I heard a door close. After about 5 minutes I started to think about my dream last night. As the memories of everything that had happened to me over the past month flooded into my mind I felt over-whelmed and fell down in the shower with a loud thud.

Apparently Shadow heard this and rushed into the bathroom to see what was wrong. I blushed as I sat helplessly naked in front of Shadow. Then I passed out. When I awoke I was lying dry and fully dressed on the couch. I noticed Ozcar wasn't even home yet. That meant I was unconscious, naked and at Shadows disposal. I shuddered while thinking of what he might have done to me. When he walked in I wasn't sure what to say. So nothing was said. When Ozcar returned I sat sipping coffee and reading the newspaper with Shadow sitting next to me. He likely assumed nothing had happened so as soon as we had all gathered our things Ozcar teleported us to Hayf's manor.

When we walked up to the door Ozcar recited the same password as before" I like to Yiff it , Yiff it". Slowly the doors creaked open and I saw Hayf and the many female kitsune with which he lived. But one face stood out. The one of the Kitsune I has seen before in my dream and the time I spent the night at Hayfs manor before.

I knew the next few days would definitely be something out of the ordinary. But strangely I could feel my vagina start to get a little wet and I saw her lick her lips as she saw me.

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Well there ya go. Took me an hour and 40 minutes and i think it thoroughly kicks enough ass. And I never officially declared i was "taking over" but that is pretty much what im doing.

As of right now I ,Themanbehindtheflash, am taking over this story thread , entitled "I Was a Japanese Schoolgirl " from the topic creator and writer of the first ten chapters ,Shuko. I do not have her permission and I am almost sure she will never post in this topic again. But in the unlikely result she does return and starts posting chapters again. I will stop posting my chapters and completely hand the topic back to her.

There bitches.

And also I hope you all LOVE it. So LOVE IT OR GTFO MY THREAD!

Thats right i said it's my thread. And it shall remain mine until shuko returns which i never expect her to.

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Japanese school girls are hot, and I know for sure because my gf is part japanese and still has the uniform, but geez! This is savage tyranny! Please, do proceed.

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How exactly long is the series anyway?

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At 2/9/07 03:47 PM, mr0imp wrote: i got a story...i guess

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Please make another thread for your story please im asking out of all kindness to either copy and paste this unto another thread or just stop because this thread already has a story.

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