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Advice on the work 2006-12-22 18:39:42 Reply

Hello Newgrounds!
Just a few questions about some work I put togther.
I wanted to ask if these were good enough for a site and site teaser, or if I should just go html.
My work-
Site
Site teaser
Please and thank you :D.

~ Project_ctrl

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 18:45:08 Reply

Wow. Both of them are amazing. The first one was my favorite. I'm in total awe right now.

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 18:48:51 Reply

Those are really good :)
I can't think of anything specific to improve, good job.


Doors. You'll know when they're appropriate.
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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 18:49:30 Reply

At 12/22/06 06:45 PM, KyleDaFox wrote: Wow. Both of them are amazing. The first one was my favorite. I'm in total awe right now.

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:D Thank you
I learned my lesson about trying to be a hot shot, and just started listeneing and studying others work.
And alrighty then. First one.

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:05:33 Reply

They both look really cool.Must of taken awhile to do :P

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:09:25 Reply

im in awe. they both rocked, but first was better.

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:10:16 Reply

At 12/22/06 07:05 PM, Pauly wrote: They both look really cool.Must of taken awhile to do :P

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:11:55 Reply

Wow.But it was well worth it, wasn't it?

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:13:09 Reply

looking extrememly rad. congrat to you

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:20:09 Reply

At 12/22/06 07:11 PM, Pauly wrote: Wow.But it was well worth it, wasn't it?

Well..As most artist who spend an extreme amount of time on their work.
Once your done. It just seems like just an ordinary peice.
It may give you a kick of adreniline will your working on it...
But, after your done. Thats the most that will come out excpet pride that you did it ;D

Working on another template as we speak.
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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:21:59 Reply

Alright well good luck with it.Please let me know how it goes I like your work xD

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:23:45 Reply

At 12/22/06 07:21 PM, Pauly wrote: Alright well good luck with it.Please let me know how it goes I like your work xD

Will do.

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:34:39 Reply

I think... yep, I just had an orgasm from that. I love it.


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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:43:22 Reply

it was pretty good! I suggest not using imported images though... try making your own vector graphics..

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:46:44 Reply

At 12/22/06 07:43 PM, Axlenz wrote: it was pretty good! I suggest not using imported images though... try making your own vector graphics..

:( Tried that. Not really my best talent.
But I'll try harder.

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 19:47:35 Reply

At 12/22/06 07:43 PM, Axlenz wrote: it was pretty good! I suggest not using imported images though... try making your own vector graphics..

It looked fine to me.
*Off topic*: Heh, my katana, in your sig. *Feels proud*


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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 20:13:37 Reply

Alright, Well I'm not completely done.
But I'll let you sneak a peek.
LOADS of imported pictures from google here.
Like I said, I'm not so dandy with fancy background images.
Site 2

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 21:00:08 Reply

Alright, with site 1, should I use this intro?
Intro for site 1
Or just have no intro?

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 21:07:41 Reply

Awesome stuff, but I LOVE the song in the teaser, guitar is amazing O_O

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-22 21:13:50 Reply

At 12/22/06 09:07 PM, TrueDarkness wrote: Awesome stuff, but I LOVE the song in the teaser, guitar is amazing O_O

Thank you :D.
Yeah, tell me about it :P.
Songs called stratofortress if you want to search for it.

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Response to Advice on the work 2006-12-23 12:18:53 Reply

Another template I made, enjoy, this ones full browser!
Site 3