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TITROTU
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How's my models? 2006-12-09 17:51:14 Reply

I'm currently working on a new flash called "Pwn of the Dead" and I wanted some feedback on the models I drew.

http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mode lsscene1gm7.swf

It's the main character, and two zombies.


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Response to How's my models? 2006-12-09 17:53:45 Reply

At 12/9/06 05:51 PM, TITROTU wrote: I'm currently working on a new flash called "Pwn of the Dead" and I wanted some feedback on the models I drew.

http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mode lsscene1gm7.swf

It's the main character, and two zombies.

Firstly i'd just like to say im a fan of this style and i love your gore with the bone and stuff xD but i thought their noses were their mouths, and i just couldn't get it outa my system :/ apart from that good job :D


Murad136, heres your fucking credit ;3

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Response to How's my models? 2006-12-09 17:57:18 Reply

The noses (That big curved line on their faces ARE noses, right?) are too big. And putting the mouth in the corner wasn't such a hot idea, ether.

When I first saw it, I thought the nose was the mouth. Then I thought "What the hell is that in the corner?"

However, the bodies are pretty good.

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Response to How's my models? 2006-12-09 19:12:09 Reply

At 12/9/06 05:51 PM, TITROTU wrote: I'm currently working on a new flash called "Pwn of the Dead" and I wanted some feedback on the models I drew.

http://img186.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mode lsscene1gm7.swf

It's the main character, and two zombies.

Ok, make the noses smaller and center the mouths.


hello

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Response to How's my models? 2006-12-09 20:21:08 Reply

okay, outside the box for a moment...

why don't you ditch those mouths and make the NOSE the MOUTH! I like the noses, but they do look too much like mouths. either my idea, or i'd like, make nostils or something