PJ's Poetry (April 5th, 2003)

[PreacherJ]

One Word
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Although it's better than the rest,
this word can never pass the test;
it fails in all capacity
to describe the things you mean to me.

I need a word that's soft and mellow
but painted bright with sunshine yellow
I need a word to see my pain
a word that's proud, but never vain.

I need a word that says, "I care",
that goes where no-one else would dare.
I need a word that's fair and just.
I need a word of sultry lust.

I need a word to hold me tight
to comfort me throughout each night
I need a word of fun and play
to greet me as I start each day.

I need a word to tell me plain
when I'm in error once again.
I need a word that's fearless, bold,
not slow and weak and tired and old.

I need a word of tender touch
a word that needs ME very much.
I need a word that's sparkling new
to describe the love I feel for you.

[BIGMANBRAINY]

theres another topic that was made today for this type of stuf, but its a good poem none the less.

[Explodapop]

Did you make that poem?
If so, you have talent!!

[18-12-2]

Wow, that poem really got to me...you have some talent there!

[Nitz1000]

Very good poem. Perhaps you should post some others, if you have them.

[biteme2514]

Not bad, not bad at all. I don't have a way with words the way some of you people do but I'm really looking forward to reading some more of your work. Heck, you could even post some stuff in The Grounds of New, but if you wanna keep them strictly in your thread, that's okay too. Keep up the good work. =)

[PsychoDoughboy]

Cover the Truth, We matter not. Just a Pawn in a game of chess. the masses will die by those who sit on high. Their rule is not to be questioned, they know best. So do you fuck this thing we call culture or do you embrace and let it think. Tough choice. Where is it written that we are inferior to our elders? When will we be allowed sight? So we choice to follow and why not, they tell us how to live, what to think, what to do, what to wear, how to act.

You like?

[RUDE]

I guess, all the I really have to say about that is... i liked it, I hope that it really was yours though.

[PsychoDoughboy]

At 4/5/03 12:54 PM, Dont_ask wrote: I guess, all the I really have to say about that is... i liked it, I hope that it really was yours though.

It is indeed original work.

[RUDE]

At 4/5/03 12:58 PM, Newgrundling wrote: Harem wrote it, entitled "I care" on 3-19-01

You're seem like a great guy, but you creep me out newgrundling. How the heck did you find that out? What motivates you to give such great information to us users. BTW, shame on you...you plagarist.

[biteme2514]

At 4/5/03 01:03 PM, Dont_ask wrote: You're seem like a great guy, but you creep me out newgrundling. How the heck did you find that out? What motivates you to give such great information to us users. BTW, shame on you...you plagarist.

I think he spends a lot of time on the forums, enough time to absorb enough information so that if he sees something that's relevant to an earlier post, all he has to do is do a search on it and boom! You have all the information at your fingertips...

[RUDE]

At 4/5/03 01:28 PM, biteme2514 wrote:

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I think he spends a lot of time on the forums, enough time to absorb enough information so that if he sees something that's relevant to an earlier post, all he has to do is do a search on it and boom! You have all the information at your fingertips...

What I really admire about him [newgrundling] is that it seems as though he really enjoys what he does in these forums, you're not rude or nasty to people, and you have a special way of sort of embarrasing a person without using many words. I love it. I heard that you wouldn't want to be a mod( in a poast by another user)but I think that you would do an exellent job, keep up the good work.

[PreacherJ]

At 4/5/03 12:58 PM, Newgrundling wrote: Harem wrote it, entitled "I care" on 3-19-01

Why would you try to take credit for his work?

Whatever you say, cheif. I may have posted here after that date, but it doesn't mean I stole it. The net is a large place, and who knows who wrote what first? I used to have my own webpage with plenty of hits where I'd post poetry. What makes you so sure this guy wrote it first? I'll give it to you that it's posted before mine on the other site, but short of tracking down some sort of time machine, we're never going to be able to tell who's it "really" is. I appreciate your attempt at keeping the boards legitimate, though.