I love the first one a lot, nice shading, and on the second one, I like the guy's pants. I don't know why, but I think you really nailed his pants.
Wtf, I thought exactly the same o: However I think the speech bubble ruins the first L
This is a character I'm working on for a flash.
Drawn in flash then edited in Photoshop.
Woarr, awesome. The only thing that concerns me is the profile part for the girl. In the portrait-style drawing, you can kind of make out a little button nose. However, in the profile; her face is horribly flat, and the hair is too big; Not to mention she has no chin.
But seriously, awesome style!