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hehe.. its nice to see your improvment from page 1 to 13 :)

nice woik

Thanks you for your comments you guise

moer

You're the improvement god. Allways a whole lot better than the last time i watched. What brushes are you using, some parts look like they were done by the bariontieri-set, but i 'd guess you've made som own brushes huh?

adda min msn då, kvinna

At 9/15/08 12:59 PM, LaserKarl wrote: You're the improvement god. Allways a whole lot better than the last time i watched. What brushes are you using, some parts look like they were done by the bariontieri-set, but i 'd guess you've made som own brushes huh?

Thank you, I just use the default ps brushes and also M@'s set from Conceptart, which you can download here. I have'nt made any custom brushes myself, but it would be nice to try that out sometime.

At 9/14/08 05:54 PM, JohanL wrote: Thanks you for your comments you guise

moer

Is that... Is that a muffin in his hand?

If so, that artwork is amazing

At 9/15/08 03:02 PM, RKThrilla wrote: Is that... Is that a muffin in his hand?

If so, that artwork is amazing

why yes it is. It's a delicious delicious muffin

now more artwork
fishy raawr

At 10/30/06 01:33 PM, JohanL wrote: Yep, I'ts another personal art thread. I made this because of the same reasons as everybody else, so now I don't have to type a long introduction. yay.

I will try to post as much new stuff as possible, but don't be surprised if you see one or two old pictures from me in here. I'll kick this thread off with something I just finished, I'ts supposed to be some sort of diver:

blah, badly drawned rosie yet no rivet gun.bioshock for those who don't know what i was saying

enviroment speedy

Another doodle

This is really nice stuff. Your concept work is very good.

Your figures tend to have the same pose, and it looks a bit stiff. When you get to the extremities, like the head and limbs, the anatomy tends to turn wonky. Especially the lower legs, the hands, and the facial features. You definitely need to fine tune your anatomy work and it will help you a lot in your concept work. I would like to see have more variety in your subject material. I think you should change it up sometimes, and try more dynamic poses, more flesh tones and different fabrics for clothing, different hair and bodies that don't hide under armor.

At 9/21/08 02:34 PM, All-Hallows wrote: This is really nice stuff. Your concept work is very good.

Your figures tend to have the same pose, and it looks a bit stiff. When you get to the extremities, like the head and limbs, the anatomy tends to turn wonky. Especially the lower legs, the hands, and the facial features. You definitely need to fine tune your anatomy work and it will help you a lot in your concept work. I would like to see have more variety in your subject material. I think you should change it up sometimes, and try more dynamic poses, more flesh tones and different fabrics for clothing, different hair and bodies that don't hide under armor.

Yeah you're right man, I'm gonna have to start slapping myself if I keep repeating myself or something :) Thanks for your crits

here's a photostudy before going to school

New character, tried to experiment with the posing this time. It's still a work in progress

and here's the final, did'nt turn out the way i wanted but oh well

Hooooooooly shit

Going from page 1 then to 14, you've gone SO far.

Keep it up. I envy your improvement.

At 9/22/08 03:38 PM, JohanL wrote: and here's the final, did'nt turn out the way i wanted but oh well

That looks like a really uncomfortable pose

At 9/22/08 04:10 PM, Slippery-Nipple wrote: Hooooooooly shit

Going from page 1 then to 14, you've gone SO far.

Keep it up. I envy your improvement.

Thanks man!

At 9/23/08 08:58 AM, Mercenary81 wrote: That looks like a really uncomfortable pose

haha I had to try it myself, and yeah you're right :D I have learned from this thank you :)

here's this ice monster I made, work in progress

More virgin sacrifices :3

Here's an update to the previous picture.

That's incredible dude, I prefer the blue colors over the red, but the red makes it look more badass and scary.

I love his little face though.

At 9/29/08 02:04 PM, nathanielmilburn wrote: That's incredible dude, I prefer the blue colors over the red, but the red makes it look more badass and scary.

I love his little face though.

Thanks man :) I've changed a million things in this picture, and at last this one is final, hope you like it:

At 10/3/08 04:52 PM, JohanL wrote:

At 9/29/08 02:04 PM, nathanielmilburn wrote: That's incredible dude, I prefer the blue colors over the red, but the red makes it look more badass and scary.

I love his little face though.

Thanks man :) I've changed a million things in this picture, and at last this one is final, hope you like it:

love it. id hang it on my wall in a second

At 10/3/08 06:39 PM, mynamewontfitin wrote: love it. id hang it on my wall in a second

Thank you, here's a bigger version for anyone that's interested: Link

You´re a real professional.
I wish i was as good as you by the time i´m 17.

At 10/3/08 04:52 PM, JohanL wrote:

At 9/29/08 02:04 PM, nathanielmilburn wrote: That's incredible dude, I prefer the blue colors over the red, but the red makes it look more badass and scary.

I love his little face though.

Thanks man :) I've changed a million things in this picture, and at last this one is final, hope you like it:

well the background for sure is a lot better, good job on that part, but I think the monster was better in the one before. I think his face looked better smaller.

I thought the 2nd image was a bit better, you could develop that into an awesome lava/rock elemental type thing.

At 10/4/08 05:13 PM, Razac wrote: I thought the 2nd image was a bit better, you could develop that into an awesome lava/rock elemental type thing.

I agree; the third is still good, but I definitely prefer how the monster looks in the second more than in the third.

Hey guys, thank you for your comments. Now that I look back at the latest picture I can agree that the second version is slightly better than the last, but I won't go back and change anything now seeing as I've spent way too much time on it already. I really apprecciate your advice though, It's very useful!

moving on, new scribbly sketch. Inspired by autumn basically.

Forest fire omg

At 10/4/08 08:02 PM, JohanL wrote: Forest fire omg

Holy balls that's amazing.

Your improvements are astonishing. Considering you came from where you were at page one And the difference between then and now. Well, I'm impressed. I can't wait to get my new computer, so I can start doing some digital painting. Keep it up.