My Cartoon Guy

[FalconFilms]

Do you think this guy is cool. Please rate on a scale from 1-10. Please make positive and constructive comments. This is for a cartoon that I'm gonna work on. My friend might help. I'm not releasing details yet.

[InkyBoy]

3/10

-add color
-shading
-etc

[FalconFilms]

Color, shading, and a tiny edit!

[CaptainPeepers]

He looks like a chicken nugget in a shirt.

[Joutei]

3/10 Needs better outline shape and something about the head ain't right.

[mortal-killer]

BAD BAD BAD I CAN DO BETHER SORY

[FalconFilms]

At 10/26/06 11:29 PM, mortal-killer wrote: BAD BAD BAD I CAN DO BETHER SORY

and animate it? i made it simple for animation

[Joutei]

I could've animated something more detailed than that in fbf if I weren't lazy... :/

[LiftYourSkinnyFists]

This is okay. I'd change the position of the arms though, they look like two long deformed tits. Also, I'd make longer legs, instead of two little stubs. Make the colors less saturated and try adding a color scheme. Warm color schemes look awesome BTW.

[LiftYourSkinnyFists]

Here's a two minute pimping to give you a taste of what I'm talking about:

[Orcinator]

0
Because I'm a downvoter

[Distillery]

At 10/26/06 11:52 PM, Joutei wrote: I could've animated something more detailed than that in fbf if I weren't lazy... :/

Proove it. Give the guy some constructive critism, your just talking shit.

[Sunglasses]

At 10/26/06 11:05 PM, CaptainPeepers wrote: He looks like a chicken nugget in a shirt.

I was thinking the same thing.

[FalconFilms]

That edit that the guy made a few posts up...

It looks sooooo old. I'm trying to draw some middle schoolers for my movie. But, I will take some of that re-edit, and prolly post it here

[FalconFilms]

the edit doesn't look as good as the original, so stick with that. How do those arms look like tits?

[POOPTURTLE]

Randa, I think it looks just fine. Like, slightly Eskimo Bob-esque. I think the other guys don\'t quite get it... It\'s beautiful in its simplicity. 8/10 I say, as long as you animate it good. :D

[Lopas1]

At 10/26/06 10:48 PM, Randamation wrote: Do you think this guy is cool. Please rate on a scale from 1-10. Please make positive and constructive comments. This is for a cartoon that I'm gonna work on. My friend might help. I'm not releasing details yet.

3-4/ 10

- Color.
- Shading.
- Smother lines on head.

[Lopas1]

I like this....

Made in flash 8

[Lopas1]

Sorry for the white line, i tryed transparent background...

better quality..

[Joutei]

One foot looks bigger than the other, I dunno if that's supposed to be a birth defect or something though... it explains his 'tard pose.

[wet-noodle]

At 10/27/06 11:08 AM, Lopas1 wrote: Sorry for the white line, i tryed transparent background...

better quality..

that is much better.. now he doesnt like a wrinkly chicken nugget with tits and a weird head.

[TheSilverSerpent]

At 10/26/06 11:46 PM, Randamation wrote:

At 10/26/06 11:29 PM, mortal-killer wrote: BAD BAD BAD I CAN DO BETHER SORY

and animate it? i made it simple for animation

Actually no offense, nice work but i think i could make better, and animate it too.

[POOPTURTLE]

At 10/27/06 11:08 AM, Lopas1 wrote: Sorry for the white line, i tryed transparent background...

better quality..

If you can animate this at 24 fps, you get 10/10. :D

[LiftYourSkinnyFists]

At 10/27/06 08:02 AM, Randamation wrote: the edit doesn't look as good as the original, so stick with that.

I think it's funny how you're saying this.

[Mag-got]

At 10/26/06 10:48 PM, Randamation wrote: Do you think this guy is cool. Please rate on a scale from 1-10. Please make positive and constructive comments. This is for a cartoon that I'm gonna work on. My friend might help. I'm not releasing details yet.

It looks like he has his arms as breasts.

[Lopas1]

At 10/27/06 12:52 PM, SonicFreak122 wrote:

At 10/27/06 11:08 AM, Lopas1 wrote: Sorry for the white line, i tryed transparent background...

better quality..

If you can animate this at 24 fps, you get 10/10. :D

I can, but it would take me forever and i'm not the most patient person i've met... :)

[FalconFilms]

haven't been here in a while! the damn arms donot look like tits. you've been watching too much porn. second, the last edit of my character was really cool. the arms are still in the tit position though

theyre in the same place, but i dont care

I personally think Eskimo Bob is a fatass, but everyone seems to like him. SonicFreak said he looks cartoonish and eskimo bobish, but no one likes my pic. and the reason why u dont like my pic, is because i have no animation or games under my name on ng

[III-D]

At 10/27/06 11:08 AM, Lopas1 wrote: Sorry for the white line, i tryed transparent background...

better quality..

wow thats amazing!

[FalconFilms]

How bout this?

[Joutei]

At 10/29/06 12:08 AM, Randamation wrote: How bout this?

Probably change the skin colour, the yellow skin makes it look tacky.

And work on the shading.